chapter 1:Kunlun Mountain

in heaven qing qiu

Once upon a time, there was a mischievous girl named Bai Qian Qian. She is the first daughter of the king fox. So when her parent see that she is already mischievous too much they do not have choice but to send her to Kunlun mountain where the god of war is and where she can be disciplined. But she has to dress up as a man because god of war doesn't accept females to student he only accept male student. ''You might be wondering who the god of war is. The god of war is the person that brings peace in heaven of course the god of war has a name. His name is Mo Yuan''. So Bai Qian's uncle Zhe Yan is a phoenix spirit . So he had to bring Bai Qian to the mountain to meet god of war ''of course she had to dress up as a boy''so when they reach the mountain he order her to put her hair up so they could not notice that she is a girl ''she also changed her named to Si Yin so they did not know who she is''. After they reach the top of the mountain they saw another boy to become a disciple in Kunlun mountain but they didn't mind him so they then saw a flying fan called ''Jade Purity Fan of Kunlun.''The jade purity fan of kunlun is a fan that was made by god of war it has to chose his master so it could not fall at the wrong hands of the evil. So when she sees god of war it was a beauty. She thought that he was ugly and mean but when she met him she see that he was not how she imagine he was. '' she said to herself he is even hand some than Zhe Yan a phoenix spirit she said he was beautiful than him because he was the most good looking in their tribe. After she sees god of war she thought she will be rejected because some people can see if they are disguised or not so he look her at her at first it was weird that the fan accepted her has the master when he looked closer he sees that he was she and accept her because of her parent so they later went inside he ask them to come to the front and ask between her and the first boy they see at the entrance that who will became a senior after asking he asked Zhe Yan to choose who will be the senior so when he then say the boy that they meet at the entrance .She was furious she she stand up and said no i will not be your disciple anymore then MO Yuan ask *why* she said it was because at home she was born the youngest now outside she is still the youngest Mo Yuan couldn't help but laugh so he said i can give you the fan so she said you must not lied to her he said he never lied after she gave her the fan then they then bow to be his disciple so after bowing Si Yin asked that what is the name of the fan he said is called the Jade Purity Fan of Kunlun, she then became disciple of mo yuan''god of war'' 17th disciple while the other boy became 16th disciple.

After 20,000 years Bai Qian still cause some trouble and of course trains and was naughty. So one day she and one of her mates 16th disciple went to the mortal world, and pretending to tell people their fortune, A strange woman came wearing white cloth so when she came she just wanted to tell the human what will be her fortune then a vulgar man came trying to molest the woman wearing white clothes but little does the man not know she is immortal and from heaven. So when the women was about to beat him up then a man wearing white clothes trying to be an hero to save her came to help her from the vulgar man that was trying to molest her so the white man was fighting the vulgar man she just disappear herself and go back to where she came from. One of bai qian qian mate then told her is time to go that their master will be waiting for them so little the they know that the woman that they meet was following them ''the woman that they meet her name was yao guang a jealous goddess ,she was jealous because of she has a crush on Mo yuan (God of war) because si yin (Bai qian) has a beautiful girl has a girl and thought that mo yuan has fell in love with her'' So she followed si yin and her mate to kunlun mountain and wait till si yin is alone.*with their teacher Mo Yuan* So when they went to meet there teacher MO Yuan he ask them where did they went but before they could talked the 1st disciple answer them and said they went to talked something in the mortal world so their master ask them to go because he did not want to hear what they want to say at all but he ask Si Yin to stayed so after they all went remaining Mo yuan and Si yin so after they were alone her master asked hi to followed him that he want to show her something,So her master take her to the wine cellar so he asked her master that why was go in the wine cellar so he said it was her birthday but Si Yin has already forget it was her birthday but her master brought her wine from her home tribe(fox tribe) so when she was walking in her dorm a wind breeze took her from kunlun mountains but her bottle broke So when one of kunlun disciple hear the broken bottle that fell he came immediately and saw no one then reported it to the first disciple so they then try to find who could have done such a thing some guess the ghost tribe*ghost tribe her the people that are the enemy in the heaven they are devils so the 1st disciple said is not or they will have turn to ashes so they then guess yao guang so when they think it was her the then reported to their master he also asked them if they have checked the entire area but Si Yin was nowhere to be found so he was furious and went to yao guang place because it was about some mile away from kunlun mountain so when they reached the place they asked if she took one of is disciple but she said no but Mo Yuan know that she was lying