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Swordsman's Eyes Across The Multiverse (Hiatus)

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Michael dies and wishes to gain a system that allows him to gain points to unlock anime eye abilities. The Origin God granted it without truly thinking how broken some eyes may be. ________ It's my first piece so don't expect too much (Help me with the story. I wanna see how far it goes)

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Chapter 11 So I'm dead huh.

Michael was floating away in the void without a destination. He was thinking about the life he hadn't asked but was granted. He had always been a weak and fragile boy.

From his earliest memories he was always visiting the hospital. Eventually he was diagnosed with a disease that could only lead him to death. Soon after that his parents had another child and gradually stopped caring about him, leaving him in the hospital with no one to care for him. He didn't really blame them, after all why use a defective product when you have a working one.

One day a nurse introduced him to manga and anime and he was immediately hooked. That was all he could do anyways. On his 15th birthday his illness reached the critical stages and he died a few months later.

Thinking about it know, he knew he had fallen into a coma for the last few weeks. Although he wasn't conscious during most of the time, his death was sadly one of the things he managed to hear. He knew his parents didn't care, but he didn't expect them to be so calm discuss his state. Especially since they were the one's who told the doctors to pull the plug.

Now here he was, floating in the infinite expanse of nothingness. It felt strangely calming to him, almost as if he was home. All he had were his thoughts and instead of being brought to insanity, it brought him to a sense of enlightenment. God knows how long he spent floating in there.

The Origin God sensed his soul gradually diminishing instead of reincarnating and was confused. How could a soul from such a weak realm survive within the void for so long. He decided to grant him a few wishes and see if the being could grant him some entertainment.

God: Oi, kid wake up.

Michael: Huh... Why'd you wake me up?

God: If I didn't, your soul would have vanished.

Michael: I see... so now what?

God: Not curious about where you are, or maybe who I am?

Michael: What does it matter? Anyways, since I'm still here you must have a purpose?

God: 'How peculiar indeed' Well how would you like me to grant you a few wishes?

Michael: Free of charge?

God: What could you give me anyways.

Michael: Fair point. So mind letting me know how many wishes I have?

God: I'll give you 7 wishes.

Michael: Then I wish to have a body that can't get sick or cursed. I'm sick of laying in bed. Can I get body that also has unlimited potential and can adapt very quickly? I also wish to get stronger in battle. Can I also have a system? Can I also choose a few martial arts? And maybe 2 growth type weapons?

God: The others are fine but the system one needs changing. After all I'm not allowed to give you a lot more power than what is allowed in the world you'll be going to. Rules need to be followed.

Michael: How about a system that only displays my status and can only by eyes from anime and manga? And how about a guide, something like Great Sage from I Reincarnated as a Slime?

God: That's it? Well that makes it way easier, there's not much you can do anyways. Well it's time to send you off.

Michael: Thanks for the opportunity. Hope I don't see you soon.

Michael woke up in the middle of a forest when he heard a ringing sound. He looked up to see what looked like a notification icon and clicked on it.

[WELCOME TO DANMACHI]

Michael: Well this should be easier than I thought, right?

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Cerealord
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I have zero complaints for the Writing Quality they uses various words to describe a topic subject or the story in general. Unfortunately this story suffers in it's Update Stability as even when it was not on hiatus the author seemed to upload a chapter every month or so this can be excused for the quality of the chapters and the effort put into them. Story Development is relatively basic but that's what you'd expect from a fanfic on the plus side though it seems to have a tiny twist compared to the usual trope. Character Design is more complicated than I thought it would be the mc displays regret and contemplates past actions and events, though the females characters are limited due to the mc's 'attractiveness' they still have relatively a reasonable thought process. You can't judge the World Background much since it is a fanfic so I'm grading this based on how he presented the world so to say and I would like to think he did a good job though you would need to know about the world in advance to understand some of it. 4.2/5 Overall Review: No complaints for the Writing Quality poor Update Stability and decent Story Development and passable Character Design and good World Background. Note to the Author: This has potential my suggestion to make it better is to make whatever you want but have a plan in mind for the mc it doesn't even have to be a plan it can just be an end goal and you will probably feel like writing will become much easier, make sure not to rush it though if you put some more care into it and be more frequent with updates than I can imagine you in the top 10. *This has multiple spelling mistakes. Please don't take my words too seriously I'm not qualified to review or rate your fanfic this is just my personal opinion.

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