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"As the end of a millennium draws to a near, darkness veils humanity once again." The middle ages has for all we know, the most violent and brutal part of human history recorded. This story will be set in the view point of Benedict, as he tells his story from the past of being a templar serving the Christian church. Completely lost in life at the time due to the death of his wife and daughter which he thinks it's his fault, he pleaded allegiance to the Christian Church to become a crusader, in order to repent for his "sin". Along the way, he meets a brooding and menacing man called Eron Bartolomeo, one of the fiercest and most violent unit in the cavalry. He slowly learns that there is much more to him than his stoic appearance, changing his view on the world he once thought was cruel and unfair. Along the way, Benedict learns to find his own path and meaning in life. AUTHOR'S NOTE: Yo majorku here, I don't really expect to update this story much considering I'm only doing this for fun (and seeing if Im good at story telling, meaning I can make better novels in the future haha). Especially school is shit right now, so I'm probably gonna suck at this or never finishing it. So don't really expect much from this first novel of mine. (BUT if you did like it or anything, please give me ur honest thoughts! I might get better in the future if so and thanks in advance if you do!) P.S - The story will be revolving heavily around religious things. I'm not pressing beliefs, this is just part of the story and everything is fictional, so please no hate.

majorku · Fantaisie
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Might tweak on some stuff

Now that I realize it, I think I may have vomited too much of the story from the get go, so right now I'm gonna try to rewrite some of them. (This is my first novel after all, and I'm pretty new to this app so I have caveman knowledge on writing shit.) But I'll be doing all of it into this day and I will make new chapters soon! (I wasn't able to do so since I ran out of pre-written stuff.) So if any of you still reading then, THANKS!! That means so much to me! If you have any opinions on it or ways I can improve, don't be afraid to leave a comment! It'll help me grow and write better stuff in the future!

So yeah that's all! Sorry for the inconvenience!

(P.S - A book cover is already being made in progress by a friend of mine which I'll credit later in the synopsis, and I've finally thought of a title! I'll be renaming it later on after I revise the chapters. This'll be deleted soon right after I do so)