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Stand Among Them (Xianxia)

Auteur: XiaoXiuu
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Imagine being a regular college student one day and waking up in a world of ancient martial arts and magic. That's exactly what happens to our protagonist, armed with the legendary Uchiha bloodline from the Naruto series. As they journey through this unfamiliar realm, he discover incredible powers within himself. It's a journey of mastering these powers, facing enemies, and aiming to become the strongest in a world that's completely different from their own. Get ready for an adventure where the Uchiha legacy takes on a whole new meaning!" "Author's Note: This is my first fanfiction story, and English is my second language, so please expect some grammatical errors."

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Esses comentários são do primeiro capítulo até o 9 capítulo que foi onde eu não aguentei mas. Tenho que dizer, desculpa mas que diálogo merda, meu Deus irmão, eu tô sentindo tudo de ruim desse diálogo, não só disso mas da apresentação dos personagens, como eles fica próximos tão rápido, e como tem que ser tudo explicado de uma vez, por que parece que você não consegue escrever uma história que tem progressão, que bota logo tudo em um diálogo e ficou uma merda, eu nem vou me lembrar disso, meu deus cara, faz tempo que não vejo uma história assim, mas se for sua primeira tudo bem irmão, vai na fé que você vai melhorar, e também tem o papo que as cenas de luta são tão ruim quantos os diálogos, porra mano, tu tem que explicar tudo mesmo?…. Por que?, a cada mísero golpe vc explica a habilidade todinha, todinha, pra no futuro nem ligar mas, se é pra dizer que a mulher cuspiu fogo, meu deus, é pior que isso é que as cenas de luta são chatas e tem a conversa no meio que os vilões tão falando, esse diálogo é tipo “se renda se não vamos te matar”, ele já ia mata ela porra e ela já sabia, e você fez ele repetir mas de 3 vezes, “se renda não vamos te matar” esse tipo de coisa, que uma dica ?…. Quando for fala sobre o mundo em geral faça o protagonista aprender pouco a pouco, naturalmente, já era pra ele te sabido sobre os cultivadores com os livros que a “irmã” dele deu, as interações são tudo tão genéricas, Eu vou fala mas nada, já falei demais, e falei oque vc é ruim e onde deve melhorar, a parte da luta que vc explica todas as habilidades, isso não vai melhorar nossa visualização da luta não parceiro, só vai atrapalhar nossa imaginação, explique de um jeito simples que mesmo assim fique legal e fácil de visualizar na mente é muito melhor, uma história em Fanfic ou novel por assim dizer e visualizar, e você saber conta uma história, saber fazer os personagens ser humano ou escrachados, você tem ideia que eu pulei os 3 a 4 capítulos do começo, eu acho que pulei até mas por que é ruim demais o diálogo e as interações, isso é um comentário mas vou bota na revisão também 👍🏽

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