After his death, a Naruto fan receives a system from God to help him in his next life. Now reborn in Naruto World as Neji Hyuga, with a system and the knowledge of the future will he be able to change his fate?
Summary: What if a Pokémon fan came to the Pokémon world with a special ability to have their Pokémon from their game console be real and come to life. As well as create different items, dimensions and portals. What would their outlook of this world be like and what would change around them if they journey through it. Tags: OP_MC; Pokémon; Professor; Gamer; Village_Building
A angel from heaven fell down to hell as it had fought in heaven. The angel when having fallen turned to a small boy who ran away. Reaching a hotel the boy met many people he already saw and a demon which he seems to know from somewhere in the past the radio demon alastor. Author Note: This is a fan ficiton like you could have guessed. This story will have multiple perspective from different characters and won't be fixated of one character only. I'm not a experienced writer so I would be happy to take critic and know what I could imrpove of myself While I will use canon character I may add non canon things which I will try not to make too in logical and not fitting. I added only 1 oc that is my own oc I had created for the story. Once again many non canon things may appear while I will still try and follow as much canon as I can. (Art not mine)
Aelita Graves was a strange child with a strange name, taken from a cartoon character her father loved growing up. She grew up a relatively normal girl, becoming an adult and going to a high profile school on scholarship to study music. But things became very strange indeed when she clicked on an advertisement on her laptop out of curiosity. Finding herself in a room with a man, she was offered a choice to a new and exciting life. Intrigued, Aelita decided to take the offer of adventure. Finding herself in the forest, she hears a voice. [Host has awakened. Welcome, Aelita, to the world of Danmachi.] AN:I will admit that this is my first novel. I'm truly just trying this out because 1-I have no more books to read currently, and 2-I want to see how far I can take this.
“ how could you hide such thing from me don't you trust me to handle it the right way “ he spoke, his eyes looked sad with an hint of betrayal “ am sorry” Kelly cried holding her hand above her head “ there is no excuse for your lack of trust Kelly I trusted you I love you I respect you and every decision you take for us and the family I never one day doubted your actions because I love and trusted you , I trust you more than I trust my self how could you?” “ Please forgive me I was so scared of loosing you and our baby” she cried louder Seeing this man cired for the first time in front of her means he was heart broken he never cired not even when his grandmother who he had lived with almost all his life died of cancer “ and even thought, telling me the truth would cause you loose us and everything there is no excuse for your selfishness Kelly I harte liars “ he said again and this time he didn't let a single tears drop his eyes all red “ I was blackmailed trust me I never meant any harm" she cired again while putting her head down she has failed the one and only person who has always been her back bone her strength when she is weak he harte lies and she knew he trust her, he trusted other but they ended up breaking him how could she, what difference is she and those who have offended him and lied too him “ Kelly do you think I would judge you because you were rape by your cousin when you were little. You really do think lowly of me and you never love me from the beginning because love is trust, true love is trust Kelly am not gonna request for a divorce but I need time too get over it, just like a mirror you broke I don't think I could be amended” he spoke is voice low and it releases pain of betrayal and lack of trust. The nightmare she has always fear has come true after years of leaving her past behind her it has resurfaced.
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This is my very first crossover. It is inspired by Fate Grand Order and numerous crossover fanfictions I do not own nasuverse or Rising of the Shield Hero. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Ritsuka Fujimaru or known as Gudako is the master of Chaldea who managaes to fix the singularities and the lostbelts. However she is tired with the shenanigans of her servants especially due to an accident with the rayshift where she fuses with Hakuno Kishinami(Female). Along the way she noticed she is able to call her female servants making use of her body as a carrier of sorts without using a command spell for female servants, genderless and a few of the male, strangely the rest of the male servants are unable to be summoned without the command seal or being transported the normal way, she could also use her servants power and even fuse her body with theirs making their parameters increase depending on their bonds, but strangely she can only fuse with some of the servants, specifically female servants, gender confusing servants, and a few exceptions. On a rare vacation day she is offered by Merlin a vacation in a timeline where she doesn't have to worry about singularities or any time anomalies. Althought doubtful and suspicious she accepted due to the persuasion of her servants who ussually accompany her due to believing it would be a honeymoon of sorts. While carrying Fou on her shoulder and with Mash at her side she walks to the portal which Merlin opens with the help of a certain someone, who is actually Zelretch Kischur Zweinorg the Nasuverse's biggest TROLL. Not knowing Gudako the fact that Zelretch and Merlin decides to pull a prank on her, she passes the portal somewhat worried because of the chance of vacation coming from Merlin with some feelings of anxiety. After passing Mash is instantly forced to enter Gudako's body while Fou remained on Gudako's shoulder, and they are thrust into a world while there is no singularity or the likes. It is in danger, in fact Gudako winds up in the middle of the ancient hero summonning along with 4 other people and Fou on her shoulder and a note in her hand from Merlin. What will Gudako do in the middle of a hero summoning ? Will she and Fou maul Merlin with unseen ferocity ? Will she disrupt the balance of the world ? How will her servants react to the so called 'heroes' ? It depends on my inspiration and decision ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Updates are not guaranteed it depends on rating and my free time. ------------This message is from Gudako to Merlin "MERLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN!!! When I get my hands on you your going to experience a full course of hell by Noble Phantasms!!"
"Hey, you've been reincarnated." "Really? Why?" "You died before your time." "What does that mean?" "Long story, and usually there is something special for that, but I need to have a retirement system for them cause there's a little too many." "So what am I supposed to do now?" "Just live your life in the world you'll be sent to." "Oh... In that case... I'LL MAKE MY OWN NATION!!" "WHAT!?!?"
My review got deleted, but I will say it again. This novel is absolutly not worth reading. Normally this should be enough, concidering that the author has no problems with 5/5 reviews saying absolutly nothing. But it seems that the author got insecurities on a whole new level! Let me go through it fast: Quality - 3/5 Simply lacking english expertise, but still readable. Upload- 3/5 About once per day.Only uploaded 9 Chapters as of today. Story 1/5 Generic story you can find thousand of these alone on qidian, nothing unique. Character 1/5 Simply lacking, it's generic like the story, enough said. World 1/5 Naruro World, saw it a thousand times.
Perfect... my favorite char in Naruto world... Pls don't stop... You até incredible. Neji is wonderfull... **. I'm BR
Weak af mc, he is pretty much trash, even weaker than 5 year old Kakashi when he was a kid. He has plenty of time to get some training skills but he wasted that time being lazy. Not recommended.
Useless idiot trash author only know how to delete people review just to keep rating. Fine I will just do it everytime you delete it. Idiot author, dont know how to receive criticsm
Dont understand why is this ranked so highly. This novel is so boring. I saw one other review and it says there is no plot progression. Absolutely agree. How will this story even finish? Its going to take a few yeaes before he even meets the main casts. The plot is moving so slowly and so far, its just dialouge, training, thinking, zero action.
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This story is developing well. I hope it takes everything step by step like "Journey towards greatness", a brilliant Pokemon fanfic. If the updates are stable and continuous with unhurried no nonsense storyline it would be great. You can write about neji's progress slowly and please take your time to complete this novel. You know Naruto is a huge story but you can actually shorten it by not involving Neiji in unwanted Naruto fillers create new stories around Neiji ex when team 7 goes to land of waves(zabuza haku arc) send Neiji team to land of sound or land of rain or fountain so you get new stories new way of including Neiji to the original plot. It would also be much pleasant to read.
Pls don't stop... Your history is wonderfull... Neji Hyuuga My favorite char in Naruto world... Neji Hyuuga and Hinata they are the perfect couple.
11 chapters and absolutely no plot progression. This is your usual first-timer-made fanfic who writes not for the sake of creating story, but for the sake of creating the ultimate main character author want to insert himself in--so much concentration was put into making his MC super powerfully invincible that there's not any room left for any plot. By the time his MC grows up to the appropriate age to start going to the academy, you would definitely find a boring story about MC held back his power or he would one-hit kill anyone otherwise. Soon, you would find the story dropped, because author who finally finished creating his ultimate MC no longer has motivation to tell a story (I mean, he only write this to make his ultimate MC, no?) It comes as a surprise that there's barely any bad reviews for this below average fanfic, and oddly many positive reviews are just those exp farmers and some shady level 1 accounts.
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Great so far. I love the system genre and Neji is by far my favorite character please don't drop this.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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The development is slow, but it isn't bad, the MC isn't all powerful, but he isn't weak either, and he isn't stupid (in my opinion). I like how the story has developed so far, and recommend you read it.
People say it’s bad but it’s actually really good. I like how the character is developing at a more realistic pace than a lot of others which try to make them super over powered immediately. It does start off a little slow at first but it gets better. Not to mention, it’s good to not rush the story really fast.
What a dull and boring **** **** novel. Just some stupid first time author writing a fan fic for the first time and just throwing random **** in. I am 1000% sure this novel will be dropped soon as this story has no ending. And what is with that dream chapter. Utter **** novel.
FKING BORING. Hate these kind of self insert MC where they are so overpowered from the start. Bs plot. WTF TENSEIGAN. Useless. Training training training so fking boring. Train for **** since you already give him a system. Hate fanfics with systems. Like wtf must every mc have a system. Admit, there are some which are good but this is FKING BORING. LEGIT FKING BORING. AND the last chapter, FKING AUTHOR DOSENT EVEN KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE A FIGHT SCENE. GO FKING LEARN HOW TO WRITE A FIGHT SCENE IF U WANT TO WRITE A NARUTO FAN FIC.
Meh quite a boring novel. Nothing really interesting so far. You ruined a good character. Meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh
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This could have been a great novel...............................................................................................................