11 chapters and absolutely no plot progression. This is your usual first-timer-made fanfic who writes not for the sake of creating story, but for the sake of creating the ultimate main character author want to insert himself in--so much concentration was put into making his MC super powerfully invincible that there's not any room left for any plot. By the time his MC grows up to the appropriate age to start going to the academy, you would definitely find a boring story about MC held back his power or he would one-hit kill anyone otherwise. Soon, you would find the story dropped, because author who finally finished creating his ultimate MC no longer has motivation to tell a story (I mean, he only write this to make his ultimate MC, no?) It comes as a surprise that there's barely any bad reviews for this below average fanfic, and oddly many positive reviews are just those exp farmers and some shady level 1 accounts.
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