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Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens

Auteur: YeChenZhi
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Synopsis

A fan of BTTH reborn with 3 wishes. I was surprised by the little BTTH fanfic there is so I decided to make one. I'll try to make it as normal-paced as it could be, no ultra-fast cultivation here, no system. Harem, polygamy, alchemist English is not my main so bear with me I do not own the picture so if the creator doesn't wish to see it there tell me and I'll delete it

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :Start Of A Journey

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Where do I even begin? This novel is literally Cool Anime System all over again, for those of you that remember it. I've only read 2 chapters and I immediately knew it. The hype for this novel is very stupid and I feel like giving an actual review that doesn't make me sound brain dead. Grammar - Holy ****. Why is 'that' spelled 'taht'? You don't even need to be an English major to know 'that'. There aren't any commas, ever. Don't even give me that 'English isn't his primary language'. My Spanish is sub-par at best and you don't see me writing novels in it. This desperately needs an editor ~ 1 Star Story Development - I racked my brains on this and I can't tell how the author thought that these were even decent wishes. Who on Earth would not wish to be overpowered? The point of reincarnating in novels is because you desire something. In this novel, he desires to struggle pointlessly because he is literally mentally challenged. ~ 1 star Character Design - Everyone speaks like a 1st or 2nd grader. I haven't read much but I don't wish to know more. When they speak like they or someone else is talked when they can barely talk right, it just doesn't come off as convincing nor impressive. In the end, this goes back to grammar. ~ 1 Star World Background - Kinda difficult to rate world background for a fan fic. After all, all they are doing is taking the background from another novel and pasting it onto this novel soo... ~ 2 stars The only thing somewhat decent about this novel is the update rate. It's at least daily so that's an easy 4 star. I hope this clarified some things.

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