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Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer

[Warning BTW! If you read the reviews before reading, you'll get basically Fake News. One of them is basically 'I dont understand english so the book is bad' so! Just give it a try, if you don't like it, you don't like it. But the reviews are misleading.] A classic Pokemon story with a System. I want Opinions on the story quality, direction, and writing for battles or otherwise. Nobody in the Discord wants to do it, so you lucky fellows will have to do! After beating Radical Red Hardcore Nuzlocke without losing a single Pokemon, Ace was rebirthed in the Pokemon world with a System! Are you sick and tired of everyone and their mother having a Lucario? Grossed out by the borderline Bestiality between Trainers and Gardevoir? Looking for something fresh with Pokemon that are rarely used?! Then this is probably for you! (Uses Radical Red Abilities, they're explained anyway so don't worry about it.)

AgentMonke · Anime et bandes dessinées
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152 Chs

Big Boss Elesa takes over Operations, worker working harder than ever!

Ace was brought to the Park as the System directed him, "Okay, uproot these trees and place them in this park." as he pointed over at the sporadic trees. Ace scratched his head before walking over.

He grabbed a tagged tree and lifted it out of the ground, carrying it on his shoulder as he walked to the park, "Hey, where did the roots go?" The System guy gave him a thumbs up, "Your IQ is back online, Host! The Roots have been replaced with Rhizomes that will turn back into roots after being moved."

Ace nodded, "Oh… Oh!" The System guy paused, "I spoke too soon!"

Elesa walked over, holding Emolga, "Wait!" Ace and the System guy looked over at her as Elesa rubbed her forehead, "Put that tree over there. If you put it down in the wrong place, it'll look ugly. It has to look natural and beautiful." Ace and the System guy looked at each other.

The System: ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Ace: ( ≧Д≦)

Ace listened to Elesa and put down the trees where she pointed. The System guy waved and more Trees were brought over, there were the Apple and Berry trees. Ace picked them up and took off his shirt, wiping the sweat from his face.

Elesa wiped the drool from her mouth as she directed him, "Hey, Magic Man! Can you change the shape of these trees to match the others?" The System guy pointed at himself and Elesa nodded.

The System guy looked at Ace, who's face was dark. He had a feeling he was going to be paying again…

Sure enough…

[Change all Trees to the same type- 10 Million BP]

He sighed and paid for it as the tree on his shoulder grew dramatically. Elesa nodded and looked at the various trees, bushes, plants, etc before smiling, "Very nice. Continue, Darling~" Ace brought the trees over, placing them down.

A Monkey was sitting on a Tree that Ace moved with a dumbfounded expression. The Grafaiai was speechless. Hey, my house is moving!

He jumped out and said in shock, "Ai Ai!" Ace looked over and waved, "You're being moved." Grafaiai scratched his head, "Grafa?" Ace nodded and pointed with his chin, "Look over there." Grafaiai looked over at the park and pouted, but this was his home, "Graf…"

Ace waved Grafaiai over, "There's food over there, and you'll see more Humans from now on. It won't be a wild area… But there'll be lots of Berries and Fruits." Grafaiai walked over hesitantly, climbing to Ace's shoulder and looking suspicious, "Gra?"

Ace nodded helplessly, walking over to the Park. Elesa pointed, "Over there!" before looking at Grafaiai, "What's that? A Monkey?" Ace said, "A Grafaiai." Elesa was even more confused and Ace didn't answer, putting down the tree.

The Grafaiai climbed the tree and looked around, sniffing. Elesa realized, "You moved his home?" Ace waved, "What's the problem? Now he's in a park protected from predators. There's so many Berry trees in the Park and this park is huge okay?!"

Elesa rolled her eyes, "'That's not what I'm worried about! What if he starts attacking people?" Ace rolled his eyes, "I can leave Hydrapple in the Park if you want." Elesa laughed, "Overkill!" Ace smiled at her as she waved, "Alright, Love. Enough chitchat, continue to work~"

Ace sighed and looked at the sky, Elesa whispered, "If you do it quickly, you get a BIG reward tonight." Ace's eyes lit up and he rushed over to the next tree. Elesa covered her mouth and giggled.

Ace brought the Tree over as an Applin hung from a branch in confusion. He put it down and the Applin looked around, hopping onto another tree, looking at the Apples all around him.

He dripped some saliva and ate a Sweet Apple and fell to the ground.

When Ace came back, there was an Appletun laying there in the sun.

Ace: ?????

Appletun looked up at him, "Apple." Ace's lips twitched, "You ate MY apples, by the way." The Appletun's eyes flipped up in shock, "APPLE!?" Ace laughed at this guy's funny reaction and put down another tree, "Alright little guy, you protect your friends from the Grafaiai." before he walked away.

Appletun looked at Grafaiai in the trees and said "App." Grafaiai looked at him and snorted, "Grafa!" Appletun looked confused, "Tun?" Grafaiai looked at him helplessly, "Gra!" 

Appletun went to sleep, "App…" 

The time passed and the next day arrived.

Ace got a call and was stunned at all the voices, "Fuck!" the voices stopped and Geeta said, "Oh. I forgot to mention it. Welcome to the conference call." Ace said helplessly while carrying a giant rock on his back, "What is it, I'm busy." 

A new voice that was a little sweet and soft, "Are you the new Gym Leader?" Ace sighed and complained, "Not having Rotom Watches is really a hassle, I don't even know who's talking…"

The Gym Leaders: …

A neutral voice said slowly, "A rich dude…"

Ace's lips twitched and he continued, "I'm not the new Gym Leader. My wife is… By the way, you guys are…?" The Gym Leaders all gave their names and Katy said "Huh? You're the one who came up with the Challenger's Series? I like it! I agree!"

Larry groaned, "Of course you agree, you're the first Gym Leader." Ace thought about it and shook his head, when he played Scarlet, he started exploring right away. By the time he met Katy, his Pokemon were around the 70s…

His Skeledirge swept her in 3 turns… Then he mashed the A button and left in disappointment… Also, clearly the only good option was Skeldirge, this wasn't a discussion.

Meowscarada was so terribly designed and… Huh, there wasn't another one! Strange! Classic Pokemon Company… Ace saw the designs for the first forms and the fanart was amazing, the little duck dude was a Pirate Captain was really cool…

Unfortunately, they made him a… uh… flamboyant salsa dancer?

After those people got their hands on him, nobody chose him anymore. Poor Salsa Dancer.

… Anyway!

Skeledirge was the only way to go, clearly.

As the Gym Leaders argued, Elesa shouted, "Darling! Put that rock somewhere else!" Ace looked at her, "Where am I supposed to put it, it's bigger than the house." Elesa waved, "I don't know…"

The System guy showed him a crusher that turned rocks into paved stones! Ace was speechless, you guys are really professional! He put the stone in the machine and watched Paved stones come out, he gave the System a thumbs up.

The Gym Leaders were confused.

Geeta coughed and introduced, "Ahem. Everyone should give a warm welcome to Ace. The Former Gym Leader of Oreburgh." Katy gasped, "Hey Hey Hey! You're the Noob Cooker?!" Ace was speechless and replied, "I'm not Norman, right?"

Katy retorted speechlessly, "You're still the first gym?" Ace replied dumbfoundedly, "You're right?" Geeta coughed and the other gym leaders all started chattering before Ace said, "By the way, did you agree to the Series? What name did you go with? Was it the Cry Home to your Mother Series?"

Gym Leaders: ????????

Geeta wiped her forehead, "I chose the Challenger Series. Champion Series is a bit confusing and the others… Obviously not suitable…" Katy added, "I like the Cry Home to your Mother Series!" Ace added, "There was also Abuse Series…"

Larry sighed, "As long as I can keep my Normal Gym…" Ace was speechless, "Isn't your Gym in a Restaurant?" Larry replied flatly, "And?" Ace fell silent.

Yes, and?

Okay, Larry. I'm speechless you win!

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Okay. Here's what we're gonna do. We're 19 rn. If we get to 15, I will release another 4 Chapters after this one taking the Chap count to 120

Deal?

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