Phantom Accolades

First of all, the first paragraph is too long and boring. Opening paragraphs should be catchy. Your first three to five paragraphs determine if readers stays or leaves. Secondly, there are too many repetitions of words and sentences. When you make a paragraph or two talk about the same thing again and again in slightly different styles, it's a no, no. Your language is quiet weird. I try to place my fingers on the writing style. some times it reads fluently and other times, it's just doesn't make sense. What you should do is revisit those chapters after a while and start editing.

Interesting story, the workflow is superb. The synopsis and chapters got me hooked, although the chapters are not much for now, the story has potentials so I will be expecting more.

Two chps in and I am already loving this book, lovely storyline about saving people from evil. I am excited for all the action and drama to unfold great job Author 👏👏👍👍💐

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Nice and advanced concept, synopsis was Intriguing and the book itself is a work of wonder, characters are well organized, plot and setting well stated out. Read this book asap

Honestly your story was well like. For the first three chapters are all looking great, and there's intensity that what would happen next? then baam click the next chapter. My advise, other paragraph need a break. that's all.. good work author

This is a very promising historical or contemporary adventure mystery. A few grammatical errors but the Author sure knows how to be narrative. I say give it one more chance before quitting.

Good job bro the story is really interesting and also good the characters are well written also the plot is well promising definitely check this book out its a worth read

I think the story is very interesting and you did a great job realing me as a reader in with the synopsis amd first chapter. Keep up the great work.

Overall the Author has a great idea, but the beginning of the book was really long and didn't tell much about the story itself. The Author can do better. It's an interesting story to read.

the over all story is great! can't wait for more... keep up the good work, author ❤️ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Azin is known as the most powerful guy in the kingdom? It is truth my direct and auxiliary to the story! Yes, it is my director. Our fairytale shall never stop the gods of rival guild but the evil within their hearts shall never prevail.

The idea of this story is interesting, it would be better if at the end of the chapter to make a hanging word that makes the reader curious.

Written with an explicit words and it is very understandable. The settings and plots are cool. I hope to get more and new updates of your works.