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orang baik salah jalan

Auteur: Azhar_Wijaya
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AFRAID TO LOSE YOU

"Pergilah,!! menjauh dariku, sudah bisu,! cupu lagi,!!! jangan lagi kamu tampakkan wajah polosmu di hadapanku, !!! aku sudah muak padamu dan harus kamu tahu!! aku tidak pernah mencintaimu,..!!! ( Quinnsha Qiana ) "Aku akan pergi dengan membawa cintaku, aku akan menjauh dan menghilang hingga siapapun tak akan bisa menjangkauku,...juga dirimu,..." ( Galih Putra Mahendra ) Quinnsha Qiana yang biasa di panggil Qina, seorang gadis cantik anak orang kaya raya yang kuliah di Universitas ternama di Jakarta. Dalam kehidupan cintanya Qina terkenal sebagai gadis pencari mangsa cowok yang super kaya, dan juga terkenal sebagai wanita yang tidak punya hati, karena dalam waktu singkat Qina selalu berganti-ganti pacar. Galih Putra Mahendra seorang laki-laki muda yang tampan namun mempunyai kekurangan yaitu tuna wicara. Galih baru kembali ke negaranya Indonesia setelah dia menghabiskan masa kecil dan remajanya di negara Australia. Pindah di universitas yang terkenal, membuat Galih putus asa karena banyak hinaan yang dia dapatkan, apalagi saat Galih di permainkan oleh Qina seorang gadis yang sangat di cintai Galih. Rasa putus asa yang dalam, membuat Galih mengambil jalan pintas, dengan menenggelamkan dirinya ke dalam lautan luas. Apakah Galih akan meninggal,...?" Dan bagaimana dengan perasaan Qina saat mengetahui Galih berbuat seperti itu karena dirinya,...?" Apakah Qina akan mencintai Galih di saat Galih sudah tidak ada,...?" Bagaimana reaksi Qina saat Galih muncul hanya dengan Jiwa tanpa raganya,...?" Ikuti kisah AFRAID TO LOSE YOU hanya di sini ???

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