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One Piece: Young Pirate

Auteur: Smol_frog
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Lisez le roman One Piece: Young Pirate écrit par l'auteur Smol_frog publié sur WebNovel. Fires rage all around as a legendary fight rocks the island. Alex, a young boy, is caught in the midst of this battle. With no way out and death immanent, he now needs to find a way to escape with his...

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Fires rage all around as a legendary fight rocks the island. Alex, a young boy, is caught in the midst of this battle. With no way out and death immanent, he now needs to find a way to escape with his new friend. Will Alex escape unharmed? What about his new friend? And if Alex somehow is able to survive this situation... what's next?

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renz_pardilla
renz_pardillaLv1renz_pardilla

five star for no harem

Fire_Boy_5319
Fire_Boy_5319Lv4Fire_Boy_5319

Don't drop it like your other one piece fic

Pirate_King_NIKA
Pirate_King_NIKALv5Pirate_King_NIKA

I am kinda a shocked that this goldmine of pure genius only has three reviews up till now. This story is hilarious and captures the One piece universe and its characters perfectly

Iceyunderground
IceyundergroundLv4Iceyunderground

Ok, so, I'm no professional reviewer or anything like that. I'm just a dude who decided to give his two cents on what he read. I've read up to ch 36, so this review will be based off that progress. Writing Quality: 5/5 - Over the two-three days I've been reading this novel, I haven't really noticed anything that pops out to me saying, "Oh, this is messed up" or "That's misspelled". At least, I can't really remember anything like that, though do note I don't pride myself on my memory so I COULD be forgetting something that's pretty obvious but as of right now, I'm good with it. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - I came into this novel when there was already a sizable backlog of chapters, but over the few days I've been reading there has been at least 1 chapter released per day. Story Development: 5/5 - This novel is kind of a slow burn, but not really, but kinda is... if that makes sense? It's not bad, just get that out of the way first, just ... I guess you gotta read it to get what I mean. Haha, I did say I'm not a professional reviewer, so this is what you get from me. Character Design: 5/5 - I was a bit hesitant on this one. At times some of the characters feel very 'crack-ish' or have themselves be really stretched to what is believable from these One Piece characters. Then I realized that most of the strong One Piece characters are already very 'crack-ish' of themselves. So I just went, "eh, it makes sense". You get to see characters in situations that they would probably normally never be seen in, but yet, they still manage to stay in character and it makes sense. The OC's introduced are believable characters that I could totally see ending up in the actual One Piece canon. The MC is a very likeable little guy as well, at least to me he is, pretty sure not everyone would like him. He's a good-guy type but will kill when needed... he's deeper than that, I'm not doing him too much justice here. World Background: 4/5 - I honestly can't find too much issue with the author on this. Though be aware I'm not the biggest One Piece factoid guy, but I'd like to think I know enough to catch when something is wrong. The 3 admirals were given their code names before they acquired their admiral ranks, ages of some characters are a bit off and dates don't line up. Nothing really major, just some things I spotted. Overall: So the short and sweet, should you spend your time on this novel? Yes! It's good, seriously, give it a shot. Here's a reason to possibly get you reading, its a bit of a spoiler though, so stop here if you don't wanna see it... don't worry, I'll wait for a second... still wanna know? Okay then, Buggy gets a girlfriend and loses his V-card before Shanks and the MC. You're welcome.

Smol_frog
Smol_frogAuteurSmol_frog

This is a great story! It's absolutly perfect! Nothing should be changed at all and you will definitely enjoy reading it! If you don't believe me... then try reading it! That'll prove you wrong!

HeavenShakingIdiot
HeavenShakingIdiotLv14HeavenShakingIdiot

It's a pretty interesting premise, seeing the world from the side of the Whitebeard pirates. I like how the mc is involved with so many people because he's a likeable and excitable kid. The writing has been good so far. So far we have not seen much in terms of development towards his goal or the reason behind it but the story is very young less than 10 chapters in. I hope we get to see more of the formation of the crew before we skip to canon time and updates on his learning journey as time passes, i.e. what he has learned, what he'sinterested about currently, current likes dislike and hobbies. I look forward to what the story and the author have to offer. Good Luck and fair seas.👍

Lazy_w
Lazy_wLv3Lazy_w

The story begins when shanks is still a kid, so probably around 30 or so years before cannon starts. At the time of this review, only 20 chapters have been updated, but so far, the story is pretty good. I recommend giving this story a try.

Lucifer951
Lucifer951Lv13Lucifer951

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Bernard_Yanga
Bernard_YangaLv4Bernard_Yanga

10/10 ahhahqhhqhhq plsssss continue 😁😁😁😁

Kaz0
Kaz0Lv13Kaz0

I really like the writing in this book as well as u trying (and succeeding) in giving this ff a more one piece type of atmosphere, Jovial and comedic. I also loved how u work around everyone's relationships and the monologues. His fruit is OP too🔥🔥

CLO2610
CLO2610Lv4CLO2610

I need more chapters.....................

Retro_
Retro_Lv3Retro_

One of the best one piece fan-fic. It is funny and character development is good. Mc is not too op. He is best friend with Shanks and buggy so what do you need more.

NormalMan
NormalManLv4NormalMan

its pretty good and i hope u dont drop this ff soon

Hazy_Eagle
Hazy_EagleLv4Hazy_Eagle

Mate I love this I could not stop laughing lol 10 out of 10 ......................

Dart_void
Dart_voidLv4Dart_void

Mate, You probably won't read this, but You have the best book, you are a genius ,boy.

Leviamon
LeviamonLv4Leviamon

this is definitely one of the great one piece fanfics here. I had fun reading this fr, so update more author.

_Tragedy_
_Tragedy_Lv4_Tragedy_

Wow! This is the work I have been searching for. It’s hilarious, shows the One Piece world as it truly is and not just from the “happy go lucky” perspective of Luffy and his crew. I love our mc interactions with shanks and other characters. The author has done a great job of capturing their personalities.

UwU_Supremacy
UwU_SupremacyLv3UwU_Supremacy

pls no harem and no г18 [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Humbuub
HumbuubLv4Humbuub

Finally! A wrll-written One Piece fic that doesn't revolve around training or quantified strength. No Forced drama, just pure fun piracy. The characters ain't flat, it's funny, it maintained the Original personalities of canon characters and have the same vibe as One Piece.

Qielin
QielinLv14Qielin

Amazing story, the characters are all on point. The story is original. Wonderful.... Please do not stop updating....

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