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One Piece: The Navy Traitor

In the dark depths of Impel Down, Alaric, an enigmatic twenty-nine-year-old former vice admiral, has been locked away for over a decade. With a history shrouded in mystery and a will that defies time, he has endured confinement in the world's most feared prison, waiting for the perfect moment to claim his freedom. When opportunity presents itself in the form of a daring infiltration led by the infamous Monkey D. Luffy, Alaric is faced with a crucial choice. Alaric must seize every moment to escape and defy his fate. In a rapidly changing world, his release could be the spark that ignites a new era. I am not a native English speaker, it is my third language, this is a Spanish story written by me in my spare time. The characters do not belong to me except my Mc. All rights belong to the creator of the work Oda

RainHR · Anime et bandes dessinées
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There won't be a chapter tomorrow, as I am traveling to a remote area for work.

I will take the opportunity to correct the mistakes in my writing during this time. As you know, I am not a native English speaker, and I hope you can point out various errors that make the reading difficult to understand so I can edit it.

I have many mistakes because I am new to this, so I hope you understand.

By the way, there was some confusion in chapter 7 since the one I uploaded was a discarded chapter I created months ago with AI to get some ideas (which didn't work) because AI is terrible. The original version I wrote myself is better, even though it's also a bit flawed because I still struggle with fight descriptions; I'm working on that.

I'm just starting out in writing and hope to improve to produce quality works.

I won't create a Patreon for now, as I'm just starting and feel that charging money for early chapters of poor quality would be a scam. I don't want to be like some authors who upload their low-quality works to Patreon.

Also, this fanfiction is just an idea I had in my head for years, and I wanted to share it with you purely on a whim. As a compulsive reader of novels, I felt I should share this with you.

I will delete this when I publish the new chapter.

Creation is hard, cheer me up!

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