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My son is about to breakthough

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The rituals are shattered, and the music has fallen silent in a world clouded with chaos. Gu Qingfeng, having crossed time and space, sought only a life of peace and quiet amidst the turmoil. But with the birth of his first son, he soon discovers that his path is far more complex than he had ever imagined... PS - I will update a lot of chapters until i'm completely caught up with the raws. When caught up, I will start translating another store. COMMENT WHAT STORIES YOU GUYS WANT TRANSLATED. NO HAREMS, AND EVIL MC PREFERRED Support me at: https://patre on.com/TheAiTranslator

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Chapter 1CH 1 - The birth of a child

It was snowing heavily, frost covered the ground, and a vast sheet of silver stretched as far as the eye could see.

The people of Lin County hurried along, most wrapped in thick, cotton-padded jackets, while a few, dressed in thin layers, shivered uncontrollably in the biting wind and snow.

In a secluded courtyard, a young man wearing only thin clothes was practicing boxing amidst the storm. Each punch he threw was fierce and precise, and a strange white steam seemed to rise from his head, adding a sense of mystery to the scene.

After a long time, having completed his set, the young man's eyes flickered slightly, as if a hidden line of words that only he could see appeared before him.

 …

  Name: Gu Qingfeng

  Age: 22/80

  Realm: Beginning of Skin Refining

  Martial Arts: Collapsing Mountain Fist (Beginner)

  ——

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"It seems achieving even a minor success in the Collapsing Mountain Fist will take more than just a short time," Gu Qingfeng muttered, shaking his head slightly.

His name was Gu Qingfeng. Before the age of sixteen, he had been no different from an ordinary person. But when he turned sixteen, he suddenly awakened to the wisdom of his past life, possessing memories that spanned more than one lifetime.

After realizing that this was a world filled with war and chaos, where social order had broken down, Gu Qingfeng understood that strength was the only way to survive.

Without hesitation, he spent his entire family fortune to join a martial arts school, becoming an apprentice and learning a boxing technique called the Collapsing Mountain Fist.

Although it was only an entry-level martial art, for the time being, it was enough for Gu Qingfeng. However, there was one problem: his talent was mediocre.

After several years at the martial arts school, he still hadn't fully mastered the technique. Eventually, when he could no longer afford the tuition, he had no choice but to leave. Wandering aimlessly, he eventually settled in Lin County.

It wasn't until a year ago that Gu Qingfeng finally achieved a basic mastery of the Collapsing Mountain Fist. Around the same time, something curious happened—his "golden finger," the special ability he'd gained from his transmigration, appeared.

It was a simple status panel.

For years, Gu Qingfeng had studied it but found no extra functionality, so he eventually gave up, believing it to be nothing more than a decorative panel.

But now, something had changed.

A line of text suddenly appeared on the status panel:

"Your first offspring is born (can only be triggered once)!"

"Reward: 1 Improvement Point."

"Reward: 10 Qi and Blood Pills."

Gu Qingfeng was stunned, as if he had just witnessed something unbelievable. The status panel, which had remained static for years, had split into two interfaces: one displaying the new prompt, and the other, the original attribute panel, now slightly altered:

Name: Gu Qingfeng

Age: 22/80

Realm: Beginning of Skin Refining

Martial Arts: Collapsing Mountain Fist (Entry Level)

Improvement Points: 1

When Gu Qingfeng's eyes landed on the improvement points, information flowed into his mind, explaining their purpose: they could be used to enhance martial arts abilities.

Without hesitation, Gu Qingfeng applied the improvement point to his Collapsing Mountain Fist.

Suddenly, his entry-level mastery advanced to minor mastery.

At the same time, an immense surge of qi and blood rushed through his body, his skin toughening as if undergoing a significant transformation.

Memories of practicing the Collapsing Mountain Fist flooded his mind, as if he had trained it for years. When he checked the status panel again, he saw that his cultivation had broken through from the initial stage of Skin Refining to the intermediate stage.

"Breakthrough!" Gu Qingfeng exclaimed with joy, realizing the true usefulness of the attribute panel.

For years, he had struggled to reach entry-level mastery, but now, with just one improvement point, he had achieved minor success and even advanced his cultivation to the intermediate stage. In a place as small as Lin County, being at the intermediate level of Skin Refining was a considerable achievement.

He also noticed an additional section at the bottom of the panel, where the rewarded Qi and Blood Pills were listed. With a thought, a small green bottle materialized in front of him. Gu Qingfeng grabbed it and uncorked it, a rich fragrance wafting from within. As expected, the bottle contained the coveted Qi and Blood Pills, known to enhance a warrior's vitality and assist in training.

Gu Qingfeng had heard of these elixirs during his time at the martial arts school, but this was the first time he had actually seen one. After stowing the pills away, he continued to examine his newfound abilities.

From the information in the panel and his own transformation, he deduced that his "golden finger" seemed to be tied to his bloodline—specifically, his descendants.

"The most urgent matter now is to find my son!" Gu Qingfeng mused.

Finding his son wasn't difficult. After all, he had only lost his virginity once since arriving in this world. The child's mother didn't live in Lin County, but that wasn't an issue.

After packing his belongings, Gu Qingfeng left the courtyard he had rented for so long.

Ten days later, Gu Qingfeng returned to Lin County with a baby in his arms.

After traveling thousands of miles, he had finally found his child. The mother had passed away during childbirth, leaving the baby in the care of an elderly couple who had planned to abandon him due to their inability to provide for him. Saddened by the woman's death, Gu Qingfeng left most of his remaining silver with the elderly couple and took his son with him.

The baby boy was named Gu Yang.

Upon returning to Lin County, Gu Qingfeng quickly realized how ill-prepared he was for parenthood. He had no experience raising children and, on top of that, had almost no money left.

Faced with this reality, Gu Qingfeng took a deep breath and made a decision. He ventured out again, this time with his child in his arms.

He soon arrived at a martial arts school.

"My name is Gu Qingfeng. I'd like to know if you're looking for instructors?" he asked.

"Instructors?" The staff member scrutinized him, especially noting the baby in his arms. "Becoming an instructor is possible, but there's one requirement: your cultivation must be at least at the intermediate stage of Skin Refining."

At these words, a confident smile spread across Gu Qingfeng's face.

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