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Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as the Twin Sister of Rudeus Greyrat

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The story is about a teenage girl who run away from home because of so much abuse, and then met someone who considered as her kindred spirit. They both died together and reincarnated as fraternal twins, or is it? Watch as Rebecca travels the world to uncover the secret of the ancient past and reveal the real truth of her reincarnation. Note: English is my 2nd language. I may know how to write English but I have some difficulties with writing in English. So, forgive me for the terrible grammars that I might write in the fanfic. Please correct me properly if you want but don' t severely bash me if I make mistakes. Note # 2: This fanfic is a mixture of various anime and games. This includes Mushoku Tensei as its foundation, mix with Sword Art Online, Honkai Impact and Genshin Impact. I might add other more references in the future as well. Update: The artwork isn't mine but I will use it anyway because Rebecca looks like her

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Chapter 1Kindred Spirit

It is raining hard and it is freaking cold

I am completely drenched from head to toe

The hoodie I am wearing is soaked with rain water and I am slowly freezing to death

My skirt as well is wet as well that it sticks to my thighs so much

But why am I outside and completely drenched in the rain if you may ask?

Well, to tell you the truth... I ran away from home.

I ran away because I am sick and tired of my step parents being strict and abusive for a long time.

My original parents died when I was in elementary school and my relatives took me in along with my parent's fortune and property.

The relative that adopted me is a couple that disdained my parents for raising an incompitent and lazy child.

Well, excuse you Mr. and Mrs. relative. My OG parents raised me quite well thank you very much. You can shove their money up to your asses for all I care.

Anyway, they adopted me and they took me in their house. And oh boy, let me tell you buddy, those relative of mine are literal demon spawns from hell. They are extremely strict and I am not exaggerating here, they dictate to you on what you can do and what you can't do. If you screwed up one tiny bit, they'll smack you with a belt and will scold you like they are delivering a long-ass speech.

I mean seriously, how is going home from school one minute late deserves a punishment. Are you kidding me?

And let's not forget about school, or should I say, hell. You heard me, it is literal hell.

Every single person in that place are absolute assholes. My teacher, classmates, my gym teacher and even the freaking janitor is an asshole. I'm looking at you, BOB you ugly fat piece of shet.

Any who, why am I telling you this, my non-existent people I am talking to. Well, recently, I am expelled from school. Hurray, I guess. Not really.

You see, yesterday morning, my beautiful asshole classmates decided to frame ME for doing a prank that I didn't commit. Really? What did I do to deserve it? I barely even know any of you and you decide to prank me for shets and giggles.

What prank did they decided if you may ask? Well, they decided to trash the FRAKING principal office and spray paint my name in there. Wow really!! What you guys want? A freaking medal?!

The principal saw this and called my step parents and me to his messy office. The principal asked me to explain and I told him that my classmates framed me for doing it. Did he believe me? NOPE!! not at all!! He decided to expel me from the school and oh boy, my step parents are not happy. When we went home and they absolutely destroyed me, quite literally. They beat me up, whip me with belts and hangers and threw me in my room and locked me inside with no food nor water.

For real, what did I do wrong? What did I do to deserve this kind of hell? Everything hurts and I am very hungry.

In that moment, I snapped and decided to run away from this hell. F*ck this house, f*ck my step parent, f*ck school and last of all, f*ck life.

In midnight, I packed my stuff in my bag and wore my hoodies and school skirt. I tried to climb out the window and used the bedsheets as rope to climb down. I sneak to backyard and climbed the fences.

On the road, I walk around the town and I search for a place to stay. With no any luck, I kept searching and searching until the next day.

While I am walking in an alley, a random thug stole my bag of stuffs and I tried to get it back. However, the thug just kicked me and ran away with my clothes, and personal belongings in the bag.

Well shet, now what?

I continued walking the alley and suddenly it started raining.

The rain soaked my clothes and steal the warmth of my body.

I tried to seek shelter but I have nowhere to go and hide from rain.

Dammit, worst luck in my life

And that's how we got here.

Great story, am I right?

I continued my walk of.... um, what do I call it? walk of shame? walk of bad luck? whatever, I'll just call it walk of absolute bullshet.

While I was walking, I found a fat dude wearing a track suit while barefooted. He looks beaten up and he is also soaked and wet just like me.

I decided to approach him and talk to him

"Hey, tough life, am I right?"

I was startled and he looks at me confused at my appearance.

"You look beaten up, you wanna tell me what happened to you"

He hesitated to answer my question for a second but looking at my beaten up and soaked appearance, he complied

"I was kicked out of the house"

"Damn, that's rough. Well for me, I ran away from home"

He snickered at my answer and I pouted at him

"so, you wanna tell me the reason why you were kicked out of the house? I will tell you mine in return"

"Well, I skipped my parent's funeral and I was.... doing "stuffs" in my room. My siblings saw what I was doing and kicked me out"

"Well damn, that was unexpected. Okay my turn, I ran away because I was fed up with my life called hell. I was framed for a prank I didn't commit, expelled for the prank I was framed, got beat up by my step parent and locked inside my room with no food or water"

"Damn kid, you got worse than me"

"I know right, pretty shetty life, isn't it"

"Mine too, I kind of regretted that I spend my twenty years as degenerate and deplorable NEET just because I was bullied severely"

"You know what, Imma call you oni-chan"

"What? Why?"

"Because we seem to be experiencing the same cruel fate of this world and I understand your situation as much as mine. Let's call it a kindred spirit intuition."

"Hehe, I see"

We laughed together as walk under the heavy rain

Few minutes later, we came across and intersection

We both heard someone quarreling on the other side of the road

There are three students, one girl and two boys

"Looks like a lovers quarrel"

"Yeah, I have them a lot back when I was in school"

"I guess that their harem is not working well'

"pfft hahaha, what? Harem? what was that weeb shit you're talking about"

"Well excuse you, I watched a lot of anime and read all the mangas and novel back in my house"

"Oh really? Good for you"

While I was poking fun of his weeb fetishes

He noticed a truck coming and he saw the truck driver is sleeping

"What? The driver is sleeping while driving"

"Seriously? HEY!! YOU GUYS!! MOVE OUT OF WAY!!" I tried to warn the students about incoming truck that is about to hit them

However, the couple didn't notice my yell because they are so focused in their lover's quarrel

"Oh, those son of a- Let's go save them, onii-chan!!"

"Right!!"

We both run towards the three students

"HEY! WATCH OUT!"

The students flinched and look at the incoming truck

Onii-chan pulled the first guy out of the way

"Nice one, now there's two to-"

When I look at the two-remaining people

Instead of getting out of the way, they decided to hug each other

"Are you freaking kiddin-"

Before I finished my profanity as I tried to push them out of the way

The truck is in front of us and

*Crashing noises*

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Writing Quality: It's not the best and it's not the worst. It's just average. But that's fine to me since as long as a fanfic is readable it's all fine.(5/5) Story Development: The story is all over the place for me. It's fine if you want to go for something in your story, then do it and commit to it. But the story while having AU things is surprisingly following the plot. And it would have been fine to some extent but some forced plots in the end irked me very much. The story is not bad really, but I cannot call it good either. There is also the addition of SAO that I don't like, but its author's choice and it doesn't really harm the story so its fine.(3/5) Characters: Now this is where the main weakness of this fic lies. The main character is really annoying to me. Idk if either only I am annoyed by her or others are as well but personally she is really annoying. Now don't get me wrong, I don't hate her because she is female or that she isn't yuri (according to author somewhere), I don't really care about shallow stuff like that. I have enjoyed plenty of female MCs, ones with Reverse Harems too so that isn't really the problem. The first problem is that she is an enabler to Rudeus' perversions at the point of his life, where many disliked for his certain antics (including myself). The second problem is that she doesn't seem to be very firm about her decisions, and that's fine to a certain extent but you can't be a half a$$ed yandere sister and expect me to like her. Also she became cheerful a little too quickly considering her past but it's fine, but that might have been a good avenue for plot just saying. Other characters on the other hand seem fine but I don't like the reason for that. It's because the story is going for the almost canon route. And one thing that actually makes me angry is the thing with Zenith since that could easily be prevented, if you know you know. (2/5) Updating Stability: It's decent from what I understand. (4/5) World Background: This is good since it feels that all the Author's effort for the story went here. And I enjoyed how the author changed the background but that does make some room for loopholes too, but that's the weakness of the plot not the background. (5/5) Overall: This fic is average, I would say. Maybe my expectations were too high when I came to read this Mushoku Tensei fanfic. There are some better fanfics that I have already read and there are worse but that has nothing to do with this. I wouldn't really recommend this fic to my friends but if you reading this review, try first 3 to 4 chapters and if it's your cup of tea then go for it since you will only get more of that. (3.8/5) Also author don't be so defensive in the comments, if something is a genuine mistake just admit it and try to not repeat it again. Being defensive can be seen as if you are in denial of your mistakes. And if you feel that you aren't wrong at all, then just ignore those comments.

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