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MMORPG: Crowd Control

Auteur: Idczhen
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Do check out my WSA novel, Reboot: Mechanic =============== I only need one hand to render you useless. The year is 2089. The World's first 100% immersive VRMMORPG, Magnolia, went live. Everyone and their moms were hype for the review, except the genius Lei Zhen. Years after the release, when everyone was hundreds of levels above him, Lei Zhen stepped into the ring. And it took this newbie only one spell to render everyone useless--Crowd Control. =========== Warning: Not a fast paced novel! Read at your own discretion.

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Chapter 1Dream Shattered

Year 2089 on Earth, a company called Tundra created the world's first 100% immersive VRMMORPG game called Magnolia.

No one knew any information about the company Tundra, but Magnolia became an instant hit.

It was a sensational game where the players could actually feel alive inside a video game.

Not a month had passed by before professional players dived into the Magnolia and began earning big bucks.

Alas, that had nothing to do with Lei Zhen.

"Sigh, what am I going to do?" Lei Zhen lamented with a soft sigh.

"If I still can't pass this test, then I can kiss goodbye to my doctor career."

Lei Zhen wasn't the fantasy dreamer type of guy that would hop into a video game and think that he would make millions.

Instead, he was a realistic person in a world that is now fascinated by Magnolia.

"Yo Lei Zhen, are you seriously still thinking about taking that medical exam?"

Lei Zhen raised an eyebrow when he recognized this familiar voice.

Turning around, Lei Zhen could see a tall and handsome man with red-colored spiky hair.

"Why wouldn't I be thinking about it, Shan Lin?" Lei Zhen asked sarcastically when he saw it was his best friend.

"Ever since we met in elementary school, my dream has always been to become a doctor."

Shan Lin shrugged his shoulders as he showed a helpless look at Lei Zhen.

They may have been best friends for a long time, but their social status and standing are miles apart.

Unlike Lei Zhen, Shan Lin was a wealthy heir whose family owned multiple businesses.

And one of them is a streaming platform called Hit Tube.

Hit Tube had garnered at least billions each day with streamers streaming themselves playing on Magnolia.

Thus, Shan Lin was completely set for life where he doesn't even need to work and still get enough money to do whatever he wants.

Meanwhile, Lei Zhen was much of a poor man with only a school uniform-clad in black color as his daily outfit.

However, Lei Zhen was still decently handsome with black hair and brown eyes. His five facial features were what made him special since it had the look of a great actor material.

Plus he was around 170 centimeters in height and had a decent body figure. His muscles might not be as toned as those body builders, but it was still considered above average.

"Just forget about taking the medical exam and play Magnolia with me already, Lei Zhen. You should have heard of Hit Tube already, right? As long as you say the word, I can easily verify you as a streamer, and you can earn even more than doctors." Shan Lin said.

Lei Zhen, however, shook his head at his offer.

"Shan Lin, I'm your best friend, but not a leecher. How many times do I have to say that I don't want to rely on you?" Lei Zhen flat-out refused him.

Shan Lin could only smack his face slightly at the stubborn attitude of Lei Zhen.

Out of everyone he had met in his life so far, it was only Lei Zhen that refused his goodwill and money.

"Ugh, why can't you let me help you out for once?" Shan Lin shouted aloud in frustration.

And he continued, "Haven't you forgotten that your little sister is still in a coma and requires a ton of medical devices to sustain her life?"

Suddenly, Shan Lin covered his mouth with his hand when he realized what he had just uttered in a moment of frustration.

Lei Zhen held a fierce glint in his eyes for a few seconds before returning to his calm expression again.

His fist was clenched tightly, but he didn't let Shan Lin's words affect him much any longer.

"Lei Zhen… I-I'm sorry about that." Shan Lin quickly apologized.

10 years ago, there was a car accident that resulted in Lei Zhen's life being torn apart.

Both his parents were dead at the moment of the car accident, and his little sister was put into a coma.

It was also because of this fact that made Lei Zhen strive harder to become a doctor. So that one day, he can finally cure his little sister that everyone deemed impossible to cure.

The car accident had fatally struck one of her brain nerves which made it impossible for her to survive without an air filtration medical device.

After recalling his bitter past for a few moments, Lei Zhen showed a slight smile at Shan Lin.

"Anyway, I'm almost late for the medical exam. I'll see you later."

He then waved his hand and entered the university to take his final medical exam.

Walking through the familiar hallway that he has been in for the past 2 years where he had consecutively failed due to numerous reasons.

The first reason was because of a terrible stomach ache that all people have when they are extremely nervous.

The second reason was because of malnutrition where he had decided it would have been best to not eat anything.

However, that had instead caused him to faint when the medical question suddenly asked for many food-related problems regarding a patient. The food was described so beautifully and realistic which made Lei Zhen starve.

Lei Zhen's eyes brimmed with determination when he was just a step away from the classroom.

Clenching his fist tightly, Lei Zhen swore inwardly, 'Today shall be the day I get a license and start as a resident.'

With that oath, Lei Zhen took his step inside the classroom.

. . .

5 hours later, a depressed Lei Zhen walked out of the classroom with an ashen face.

"What kind of medical exam is that?" Lei Zhen asked in a dumbfounded tone as he scratched his head.

"Why would there be a question about a patient being stunned by a paralysis skill caused by a Dandelion?"

"And what the hell is a Dandelion monster level 54??!"

Meanwhile, Shan Lin, who had been waiting for him for 5 hours was dumbfounded by his outburst.

'What has gotten into him?' Shan Lin wondered silently.

Normally, Lei Zhen was calm no matter the situation, and even when he failed the previous exam, he had never uttered such an outburst.

"What's wrong, Lei Zhen?" Shan Lin walked toward him and asked.

Lei Zhen laughed bitterly as he glanced at Shan Lin.

"Have you ever heard of some Dandelions that can cause paralysis to someone and have a level?" He asked sarcastically, hoping that Shan Lin would understand what kind of ridiculous questions were on the exam.

However, to his dismay, Shan Lin raised an eyebrow and asked in confusion, "Didn't you say you're not interested in Magnolia? Why are you asking me some Magnolia question?"

It was only at his moment that Lei Zhen found out the world that he believed to be familiar with was no longer the same.

The world no longer revolves around some realistic crap, but around a VRMMORPG called Magnolia.

"How naive was I to believe a doctor is the correct path to go…" Lei Zhen laughed bitterly as he wondered if his years of study had just gone down the drain.

With his dream shattered into bits. Lei Zhen lost his cool and began speaking gibberish.

Shan Lin was worried about his mental health and was about to call for help.

However, Lei Zhen quickly regained his composure after going crazy for a few minutes.

He held a solemn and desolate expression at Shan Lin.

"Shan Lin, get me one of those pods that connect to Magnolia."

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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelLv15

Just finished Chapter 47 and am current on the novel so I figured now would be a good time to submit this review. Idczhen has shown numerous times that he understands a great plot with amazing characters time and time again and Crowd Control is no exception! Please note that there are extremely minor spoilers ahead. Writing Quality: 4/5 - Zhen has improved LEAPS and BOUNDS compared to Luck is a Charm, but there are some minor tense issues that could have made a sentence flow better and be read easier. Besides this, the quality of writing in Crowd Control is definitely far above the average of any story on WN. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - Not taking into account the uh... hiatus, Zhen has always been consistent on his daily uploads. Nothing much to say here. Story Development: 5/5 - The futuristic world of Earth in 2089 in Crowd Control is your pretty standard and typical MMORPG setting; however, that is pretty much where the comparisons end. The story so far is very interesting and compelling. Get in for a long haul, because this story is paced slow, but at the same time, the plot is strong, really drawing the reader in. Character Design: 5/5 - Lei Zhen, our MC, comes from pretty standard background, deceased parents, he's all on his own. His younger sister has been in a coma for a very long time and that is his drive. His role as a Crowd Controller is a unique class and very little is known. I am very interested to see how he will develop. The current supporting cast is extremely well developed. Relationships are already being tested and it is soo juicy and dramatic and I cannot wait! World Background: 5/5 - The game, Magnolia, takes an interesting approach toward the MMO genre. Having been the #1 VRMMORPG for the last 4 years, our MC is the first person to stumble upon the Main Story, completely changing the game as everyone knows it! The established lore is deep and Zhen has done an excellent job at creating unique spins for this wonderful virtual world. Don't take this to mean that he has ignored the futuristic 2089 either! The real world has been explored a decent amount at this current point as well. Overall: 4.8/5 - Crowd Control has everything that you hate to love, love to hate, and all the things you love to love! This is an excellently written novel with one of the best designed MMO game I've ever read about. The cast is diverse and still growing, each bringing great conversation and dynamic reactions on the entire app. This is absolutely a must read novel!

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Overall, the first five chapters of this novel demonstrate a promising start to the story with well-developed characters and an immersive world-building. Lei Zhen, the protagonist, is introduced as a level-headed and calm individual, with a distinct lack of lustful behavior towards the mature woman clad in green robes, showing his character's depth and credibility. This is further reinforced by his clear and logical thought process, as seen in his decision to accept the default setting for his character creation rather than risking a time-consuming process of creating a new character from scratch. The world-building of the game, Magnolia, is also well-established, with the incorporation of the VRMMORPG aspect and the existence of different game classes for players to choose from. The concept of Unique Classes, obtainable through hidden missions and story quests, adds an additional layer of mystery and excitement for players. The system within the game is also well-explained, with the use of equipment providing bonus stats and the function of the scanner during character creation. However, the occurrence of the bug that transported Lei Zhen to the high-level Lux Forest raises questions about the reliability and stability of the game. One constructive criticism for the novel would be the lack of description and detail in the setting and environment of Lux Forest. While it is mentioned that the area is filled with greenery, more specific and immersive descriptions of the surroundings would further enhance the reader's experience and understanding of the character's location. Overall, the first five chapters of this novel have successfully drawn me in as a reader and piqued my interest in the story. I am excited to see how the plot progresses and how Lei Zhen's character will develop in the immersive world of Magnolia.

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