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Lunaria

Auteur: SenorSleep
Fantasy
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What is Lunaria

Lisez le roman Lunaria écrit par l'auteur SenorSleep publié sur WebNovel. He who initially felt the burden for his parents now has another chance to make his new ones proud.Will fate empower his wish or not?"Those who have lost everything have two paths to tread, to either ...

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He who initially felt the burden for his parents now has another chance to make his new ones proud. Will fate empower his wish or not? "Those who have lost everything have two paths to tread, to either gain what was lost, or to rob everyone of what they had lost." **The artwork does not belong to me and if anyone knows the artists of this work. DM for removal.**

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TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3TofSpades

Where do I start... Writing Quality: This was definitely one of it's stronger points; the sentence lengths and paragraphing was great, allowing for a smooth read. The range of vocabulary wasn't bad either, allowing for less repetition. Story Development: I must say the story did develop a bit too fast for my liking. I would've liked to see the introduction of the world to be more fledged out with better world building. I'm not going to say any spoilers but, some things happened a bit too fast and should've been slowed down and described more. Overall, this book was definitely and interesting read. I really enjoyed it and do recommend others to give this one a go. The Author has done a great job and I can tell future chapters will be just as amazing as the present ones!

Roo77
Roo77Lv4Roo77

This novel is really interesting, and arche is one of my favourite characters now.  Author explained every detail. I wish the author had added more dialogue between Arche and his father. As far I read, i am really hooked on the story. Keep up the good work. PS: ✨😎😎Author should give me moni for using my name in his novel.

DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXLv3DMC_MAX

This book is good. Although the pacing is a bit too fast and some minor errors here and there, it's a gem. *Cough cough* Although I've only read to Chapter 2, I can see the potential that this book with have in the future. Great job author!

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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SIENDONIA
SIENDONIALv4SIENDONIA

I have a suggestion for the author of this book. 1) Please fix the paragraphs that are sometimes indented too deep (maybe it's because you're using the 'tab' key) 2. For conversation, please make them interact more.. Clear? If there are too many conversations without an explanation of how they interact, they will just look like people standing and talking to each other. That's all OwO Semangat puasanya bang

drippingsarcasm
drippingsarcasmLv3drippingsarcasm

I had fun reading this one. It was cool and magical and saddd :( The author should give more frequent updates. This story has potential. I recommend :)

theyasuke_
theyasuke_Lv4theyasuke_

Here to explain since the synopsis obviously doesn't give clues on what to expect. mc is reincarnated, but literally nothing is said about his past life and he doesn't seem to be really excited as usual for the new world or anything. I guess he had a good former life since he seem like the hero kind of guy I guess. parents died, and of course the mc starts picking up cheats so yeah. it's a good read and all but just average, there's no real flavor or dept. I think it's the authors first so this is really good. keep it up

Mr_Morning_Star
Mr_Morning_StarLv11Mr_Morning_Star

First of all the writing quality was very good, no punctuation errors(as far as I could tell) no grammatical ones as well. Story development was kind of off since the pace was sometimes all over the place but the the story in itself was quite interesting even though it was dramatic. Character Design and world builing were very good as well as for update stability I cannot say with this few chapter. I will be glad to read this one in the future following chapters. Cheers!

Silver_pen
Silver_penLv11Silver_pen

The story is great and the plot is good too. The main thing is the story is a bit quick but it seemed as if it was actually intended by the author. From the second chapter, it seemed it became a little normal. By then the sceneries and the appearance of the character were missing. But still, if you don't want to waste your time on unnecessary celebrations and just want to know what to know you can choose this story. As for the writing definitely a blood bank. I mean the author had his dedicated to this work. It was a good piece to be in your collection. Good luck author.

1Sword2Peaks
1Sword2PeaksLv31Sword2Peaks

I very much agree with fellow daoist The_Procastinator. This is a fantastic book that needs way more readers and way more chapters. Just like they cannot contain their love for this book and must leave such amazing reviews, I must do the same. Definitely read this, 200% recommended. Good work author! Keep it up!

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Lv14Night_Crawler619

Okay let's see, the writing quality was indeed good. Except for a few mistakes the grammar was pretty strong. The writing itself was simple and easy to understand. The story however was fast! But meh, I like fast-paced writing anyway so, it's okay for me. The lore of the world, I must say, is rich. Going into my library for weekend reading lol *Dabs in style*

SeventhValentine
SeventhValentineLv1SeventhValentine

This book is overall pretty good so far. The best part is the writing quality, but the story seems interesting too. Similarly to others, my main complaint is that it does seem to advance too fast. Overall seems quite good, though hard to judge with such few chapters

Aliast
AliastLv2Aliast

The story develops too fast for my liking, as it'd be cool to know more about the world itself, the history behind those three families, and the many different creatures residing there. The thing bothering me is the lack of period in some sentences. Then, it has too many commas when you can use period instead. Moreover... how do I say it... (kenapa awal paragrafnya kadang masuk, kadang rata sih? ngganjel2 gimana gitu) Overall, it seems promising, I wouldn't mind waiting for more chapters to read. Keep up the good work~ :D

LordYang
LordYangLv1LordYang

It was short, although it is normal considering that there were only six chapters. Overall, it's a pretty cool fantasy story to read. I highly recommend reading this book. You won't waste your time.

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