Review Detail of Mr_Morning_Star in Lunaria

First of all the writing quality was very good, no punctuation errors(as far as I could tell) no grammatical ones as well. Story development was kind of off since the pace was sometimes all over the place but the the story in itself was quite interesting even though it was dramatic. Character Design and world builing were very good as well as for update stability I cannot say with this few chapter. I will be glad to read this one in the future following chapters. Cheers!