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Loser's retaliation (kokujin no tenkousei fanfic)

with his world crumbling around him, hiroki made a wish. "I want power" [Ding] [You have been chosen by the "player growth" system. would you accept?] [Yes/No] "I...I accept. it's not like I have anything to lose." [Congratulations! you have become a player!]

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1- quest and teacher

Heya! I'm back with a new chapter!

I'll be using some characters and lines from different Manga, manhwa and animes.

So without wasting anymore time, lets get into it!

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"Who's next" hiroki asked.

The 4 boys were stunned at the site of their group's strongest fighter's unconscious form.

" aa-aaaAAAAAHHHH!!!" One of them shouted and rushed towards hiroki who in turn took a boxing stance.

He readied his left arm to throw a hit which the other boy saw and raised his right arm to block.

But the next moment hiroki's right leg shot up and impacted with the guy's jaw, knocking him out.

"Dumbass. Even if my body is no longer how it used to be, but I still used to be the strongest." Hiroki said balancing himself from the roundhouse he landed.

"B-bastard... DON'T GET COCKY!!!" Another one yelled as he and the other two charged hiroki.

Hiroki prepared himself to meet their charge but felt a wave of excruciating pain flood his body causing him to lose focus.

Looking at the staggering boy, the three did not stop their charge trying to take advantage of the battered boy's state.

But they underestimated hiroki's determination as he ducked under the first guy's punch and landed a hook in his side then punched him straight in the face causing black spots to appear in his vision as he stumbled back.

The second guy tried to grab hiroki who instead of dodging closed the gap in between them and grabbed the front of his shirt, then using his weight he threw him over his shoulder and slammed him into the the third guy.

The 2 were out like a light from banging each other's skull. The system showed that there's only one left.

The last guy had gathered his barings and looked at hiroki. He was holding his right side due to the effect of the hook.

Hiroki's condition was much worse though. He had countless bruises, a broken nose,a few cracked ribs and a broken one too.

Hiroki's vision was swimming and his breathing was becoming more labored, but he refused to fall.

Hiroki began walking towards the last guy. His walk became a jog and then a full on sprint.

The guy readied himself to block the the black haired teens attack but suddenly.

Hiroki's body shifted forward and by placing his arms on the ground he lifted his legs and landed a devastating kick to the boy's head, taking him down too.

[Ding!]

[Tutorial quest has been completed]

[Take down the lackeys]

[5/5]

[Reward: +3 enchantment tokens, +150 credits]

[Penalty: None]

[Rewards have been granted, please open your status screen to use them.]

[Ding!]

[Hidden quest has been completed]

[Defeat your opponents without getting hit]

[Reward: +1 rejuvenation token, +1 Fortune token]

[Rewards have been granted]

Hiroki read through the notifications as he slumped to the ground and rested his back on the wall.

"Status?" Hiroki asked but before he could ponder on it, the screen in front of him changed.

[Name: Hiroki mori/(hidden)

LV: 1(50/100)

Title: None

Age:15

HP: 127/570

MP: 130/130

STAMINA: 19%

STR:17 (+)

SPD:21 (+)

END:19 (+)

SEN:16 (+)

INT:13 (+)

Grade: dormant

Enchantment token: +3 uncommon (?)

Experience token: 0 (?)

Awakening token: 0 (?)

Fortune token: +1 (?)

Rejuvenation token: +1 (?)

Credits: 150 (?) ]

Hiroki's eyes drifted towards his stats then at the tokens.

His hand shakily rose up to touch the question mark next to the enchantment token but soon lost strength and accidentally clicked the one next to 'Rejuvenation token'.

A smaller window appeared beside the status window.

[Rejuvenation token: upon usage heals all of player's injuries and restores their stamina, bringing them back to their peak condition.]

Hiroki's eyes widen at the description, he quickly said.

"Use Rejuvenation token"

At his command, the token's count dropped from 1 to 0.

The moment the number changed, hiroki felt a wave of energy fill his body.

the broken ribs and nose had been fixed and and even the injuries from previous few days had also disappeared.

He was back on his feet the next instant, feeling his body to check if what he felt was real.

It felt unreal but he didn't have enough time to ponder on it as he heard another Ding.

[Your registration as a player has been confirmed!]

[You have been awarded 1000 credits as a beginner]

"Credits? Oh right! I also got those after completing the quest" hiroki's eyes drifted towards his status window and started reading the description of the tokens.

[Enchantment token: Allows user to increase their stats in exchange of tokens. These are divided in 3 categories.

Common(Green): increases the selected stat by 0.5 points

Uncommon(blue): increases the selected stat by 1 point

Rare(purple): increases the selected stat by 5 points]

"So their like stat points one gets after leveling up in a video game. But why is the gap between uncommon and rare so huge?"

Hiroki thought as he clicked on the second one.

[Experience token: upon usage these tokens turn into skill experience. These are divided in 3 categories.

Common(Green): increases the skill exp by 10 points

Uncommon(blue): increases the selected stat by 100 point

Rare(purple): increases the selected stat by 1000 points]

"These are like those proficiency potions you can get in cooking games to make your culinary skills better. Next"

[Awakening token: these tokens are the rarest to obtain but they can be used to awaken one's potential and obtain exclusive traits]

"So like, they're used to unlock hidden specialities of the Character like bloodline or genetically mutated abilities. I hope it won't unlock some weird disease I got from that whore."

Hiroki thought as a dark grimace appeared on his face.

"God knows how many men she slept with behind dad's back."

Focusing on what's in front of him, hiroki clicked on the 4th token's question mark icon.

[Fortune token: grants you the opportunity to spin the roulette. If you're lucky then you'll have the opportunity to obtain skills, tokens, items, traits and many more!]

"It's a goddamned gacha. Would i be considered a gambler if I spend what I earned on a roulette wheel in a magical system?"

Hiroki didn't ponder on the thought much and clicked on final question mark.

"I have already seen the description of Rejuvenation token so this must be the last one."

[Credits: these are the system currency that can be used to buy tokens or items from the store]

"this thing also has a store? Neat!"

Hiroki exclaimed but then froze as he heard groans from around him.

His eyes drifted towards the noise and saw the five he knocked out were beginning to regain consciousness.

"And that's my que"

Hiroki thought as he picked his bag and peaced out of the alley.

He entered the school again knowing that there won't be anyone in the school so he could experiment with his system.

"I feel like a main character right now. Haha!"

Hiroki joked to himself as he looked at the screen then, he picked up a desk and lifted it above his head with some difficulty.

Then he put it down and clicked on the [+] icon next to STR.

[17] -> [18]

After putting 1 point he grabbed the desk again, picked it and lifted it up, but this time without any difficulty.

"The increment in my physical prowess may not look that big but for a normal person it would take at least a month to reach this level."

Hiroki thought in astonishment. His thoughts were cut short as he heard a notification.

[Due to user's correct deduction and and keen mind INT has increased by 1]

"So I can increase my stats by normal means too. Then it would be better to preserve these tokens for future. They'll be useful when normal physical training won't be effective anymore."

He thought as his eyes glanced at the Fortune token. He sighed then said.

"Use Fortune token"

As he said that, the screen changed and a giant colorful wheel appeared and started spinning. It had a glowing 'stop' at the bottom of the screen.

Hiroki was mesmerized by the myriad of colors, it was beautiful.

Hiroki shook his head and focused. After a couple of seconds he pressed the stop button as the wheel began to slow and then stopped.

The needle at the top landed on a purple colored area on the wheel. Suddenly the screen gave the effect of a confetti being used, scaring the living shit out of him.

"GAAAHH!!! I ALMOST HAD A HEART ATTACK THERE!!!"

Hiroki exclaimed, holding his chest while breathing heavily.

He looked at the prompt and his eyes widen.

[You have obtained a skill(rare)]

[Skill: Eyes of deduction

Rank: Rare

Type: passive/active

Grade: beginner

Level: 1 (0/100)

Mana cost: 0

Info: eyes that can see through deception and grant knowledge with jhst a simple glance.

Active effect: [mind's gaze]: allows user to see the status windows of humans and items.

Passive effect: +5% perception

+10% reaction speed ]

Hiroki looked at the description with awe and amazement.

"I got appraisal! This will make things easier. I can use it to gouge my opponent's level while they remain clueless about my strength."

Hiroki was over the moon, which was weird. He didn't feel any kind of emotions since the day he found the truth, but now he can express them again, it felt weird.

It wasn't like he didn't have emotions, it was just that he couldn't express them.

Suddenly hiroki's phone vibrated. He took it out to see it was a message from kaede.

*hiroki,Where are you?*

He looked at it then looked at the time. It was getting late so he prepared himself to return home. But before that.

"Mind's gaze."

Hiroki mentally commanded as he stared at the desk in front of him.

[Name: wooden desk

Rank: None

Type: junk

Durability: 23/50

Info: A wooden desk from the branch of a 36 years old tree.it has great durability. ]

Hiroki smiled as a prompt appeared next to his left ear.

[Eyes of deduction's proficiency has increased]

"Now one last thing. Open shop."

Hiroki commanded as the screen shifted to a pitch black window, only two words written in the middle.

[Buy/sell]

"Quite straight forward huh."

Hiroki thought as he clicked on the [buy] option. As soon as he did so, the screen was filled with different kinds of skills, tokens, items,potions and many other things.

"Holy cow! That's a lot. But they're to damn expensive. Well, I'll comeback when I have more credits."

Hiroki thought as he began walking out of the school.

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On his way, hiroki used the mind's gaze on the people walking by, increasing his proficiency.

After sometime time he finally reached home and entered.

Suddenly his instincts kicked in as he dodged a incoming slap and using the moment, launched a roundhouse at the attacker only to stop the kick midair.

It was kaede who tried to slap him. He put leg back on ground and said in a cold tone while removing his shoes.

"What do you think you're doing?"

Kaede shivered a bit then with a angered look on her face, yelled.

"WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN YOUNG MAN, IT HAS BEEN MORE THAN 4 HOURS SINCE YOUR SCHOOL ENDED!!! YOU DIDN'T EVEN PICK UP THE PHONE OR REPLIED TO MY MESSAGE, I WAS SO WORRIED!!!!"

"Sure you were."

Hiroki said in a sarcastic tone and walked upstairs, ignoring the yelling the woman.

He entered his room and closed the door shut. He then laid on the bed and then said.

"skill page"

At his command a new window appeared.

[ SKILLS

Judo LV: 6(547/600)

Boxing LV: 3(279/300)

Wind's touch LV: 5(47/500)

Gamer's mind LV: max

Taekwondo LV: 2(7/200)

Eyes of deduction LV: 2(3/200) ]

Hiroki looked at the skills then clicked on one of them.

[Skill: Gale's touch

Rank: Rare

Type: passive/active(stat exclusive)

Grade: Apprentice

Level: 5(47/500)

Mana cost: 20 MP/minute

Info: you're blessed by the winds, they'll help you in your endeavors.

Active effect:)[Wind's grace]: allows you to increase your SPD by 10%. Effects can stack, mana cost will also increase.

Current stack count: 0/5

Passive Effect: -25% wind current resistance

+25% attack speed

+10% flexibility ]

Hiroki's eyes scanned the description then looked at the (stat exclusive) option. He clicked on it and a description appeared.

[Due to your speed reaching 20 points, you have been awarded with a exclusive skill related to speed.]

Hiroki read the description then opened his status window and used 1 enchantment token to increase his endurance to 20.

[Ding!]

[Your endurance has reached 20! You have been awarded a exclusive skill related to endurance]

[Skill: Gaia's blessing

Rank: Rare

Type: passive/active(stat exclusive)

Grade: beginner

Level:1(0/100)

Mana cost:30 MP/minute

Info: your body has been blessed by the earth mother and strengthen by your resolve.

Active effect:[marble shell]:uses mana to turn your skin as tough as stone.

+50% physical defense.

+25% physical damage.

Passive effect: your body has been exposed to earth's energy.

+5% physical defense ]

Hiroki's grin was wide enough to split his face in half. He could get stat skills as well, and from the effects they provide he could easily turn that bastard into paste.

Hiroki was in his thoughts when he heard banging on his door.

"GET OUT HERE YOU FUCKING BRAT, HOW DARE YOU HURT MOM!!!!"

He heard kanoko shrieking on the other side and thought she was perfect to test out his new skill.

He got up and walked toward the door and activated [marble shell] then opened the it.

As soon as the gate opened, a fist came swishing toward his face.

Kanoko had a vicious grin on her face. But instead of meeting soft skin, her fist collided with hard stone.

A sickening crunch sounded as kanoko shrieked and fell to her knees, clutching her broken hand. tears streaming down her face.

" AAA-AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! M-MY HAND!!!! MY FUCKING HAND!!!!"

Hiroki's gaze fell on the kneeling form of the bitch that's been abusing him for months.

He looked at her for a few minutes then closed the door. Instead of feeling good or happy, all he felt was disgust.

"I need to get out of this place. Let's see if I can exchange credits for money."

[Exchange function is currently locked.]

"Damnation!"

Hiroki cursed but suddenly staggered, a feeling of weakness washed over him. Due to the whole ordeal, hiroki forgot to turn of [marble shell].

[Skill has been disabled due to lack of mana.]

"Can it get any worse?"

As soon as the thought crossed his mind, he heard a grumble coming from his stomach.

This was expected since he didn't eat anything since previous evening.

Hiroki fell on his bed, all the strength in his body fading.

"After what just happened, I don't think I'll be able to get anything to ea-"

Hiroki suddenly sat up and opened the system store. A smile appeared on his face.

"I knew it. It's a store so it would have consumables as well."

[Name: body nourishing Kare raisu

Rank: uncommon

Type: consumable

Cost: 350 credits

Info: created by the legendary shikshim using the rice and vegetables blessed by the goddess of harvest and the flesh of the immortal bird phoenix.

Effect: increases HP and MP recovery by 200% for 2 hours.

Nourishes and enhances the body upon consumption.

+0.5 to STR,SPD and END. (stats will be granted only for the first consumption) ]

Hiroki bought the item as it appeared in his hand, as soon as the dish appeared, the room was filled with a Devine aroma.

Hiroki took the spoon and scooped out some rice and curry. The moment he placed it in his mouth, an explosion of Devine flavor flooded his brain.

"This is the most delicious thing I have ever eaten in my whole life. Whoever this shikshim was, he deserved the title of a legend."

In only a few minutes the plate was empty, hiroki laid on the bed, a content smile plastered on his face.

He gazed as the plate and spoon turned into particles of light and disappeared the same way it appeared.

He turned off the lights and went to sleep.

xxxxx

Usually he would wake from the sound of his alarm but today was different.

[Ding!]

Hiroki's eyes flew open, he sat up and looked around the room then at the notification.

"So it wasn't a dream. I'm glad."

Hiroki let out a sigh of relief then looked at the notification.

[A daily quest has arrived]

[Time to get stronger]

[push ups: 0/150

Sit ups: 0/150

Squats: 0/150

Run: 0/15km ]

[Time remaining: 19:25:57]

[Rewards: (1) 3 enchantment tokens (common)

(2) 200 credits

(3) mystery box ]

[Penalty upon failure: you will receive a penalty quest]

Hiroki looked at the screen with a poker face then sighed. He was the one who agreed to this.

He stood up but felt something weird. He saw that his skin had became much paler and smoother.

Then the stench came, making him want to puke. His body smells like it's been inside a septic tank.

He quickly left and after removing his clothes, quickly took a cold shower. He noticed a black Tarr like substance on his body,producing the stench.

After washing up, hiroki walked out and glanced at the mirror revealing something shocking.

His once Gaunt and malnourished body now had a lean build, the dark circles under his eyes disappeared and his facial features looked more pronounced (imagine Daniel park after one month training arc but with longer hair.)

Hiroki didn't ponder on it much thinking it was the effect of the meal he had last night.

"So it wasn't called 'body nourishing' for no reason."

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[Time to get stronger]

[push ups: 150/150

Sit ups: 150/150

Squats: 150/150

Run: 15/15km ]

[Time remaining: 16:11:32]

[Rewards: (1) 3 enchantment tokens (common)

(2) 200 credits

(3) mystery box ]

[Rewards have been granted]

[due to extensive training STR increased by 0.5]

[due to extensive training SPD increased by 1]

[due to extensive training END increased by 0.5]

Hiroki laid on the grass on a riverside, his body covered in sweat.

*huff* "that..." *huff* "that was quite tiring..."

Hiroki sat up and bought a water bottle from the store.

[Name: water of the echoing springs

Rank: uncommon

Type: consumable

Cost: 150 credits

Info: water gathered by the legendary shikshim from the echoing springs of the sacred Grove.

Effects: enhances your soul and sharpens your senses.

Increases energy and stamina recovery by 100% for 1 hour.

+0.5 to SEN and INT.(stats will be granted only for the first consumption.) ]

"Haaah! That's some good stuff! this shikshim guy really knew his stuff. Status."

[Name: Hiroki mori/(hidden)

LV: 1(60/100)

Title: None

Age:15

HP:660 /660

MP: 145/145

STAMINA: 42%

STR:19 (+)

SPD:22.5 (+)

END:22 (+)

SEN:16.5 (+)

INT:14.5 (+)

Grade: dormant

Enchantment token: +1 uncommon, +3 common (?)

Experience token: 0 (?)

Awakening token: 0 (?)

Fortune token: 0 (?)

Rejuvenation token: 0 (?)

Credits: 850(?) ]

"Hmmm. I said that I won't use the tokens but...I just want to know what my strength exclusive will be!"

[Used 2 common enchantment tokens.]

[19] -> [20]

[Ding!]

[Your strength has reached 20! You have been awarded a exclusive skill related to strength]

[Skill: muscle burst

Rank: Rare

Type: active/passive(stat exclusive)

Grade: beginner

Level: 1(0/100)

Mana cost: 100 MP per activation (lasts 3 seconds)

Health cost: - 100 HP per activation.

Info: A technique that was created and perfected by a master martial artist. It was said to be so great that he could destroy mountains with a single punch using this technique.

Active Effects:[charge up!] contract your muscles to the extreme of any one body part.

Increases STR by 3x

30% armor penetration

Inflicts [paralysis] for 3 seconds when landing a direct hit.

Passive Effect: +10% Strength

+10% Endurance ]

Hiroki was over the moon, so much so that He felt like dancing.

"This is the most broken skill I could get in the early game! But the high mana cost and HP it takes makes it risky to use. I think using it as a last resort is the best option for now."

Hiroki's thoughts were cut short as another prompt appeared.

[Your stats are too low for the skill. There will be backlash.]

[Needed stats:

STR: 25

END: 30

INT: 15 ]

Hiroki sighed dejectedly after examining the prompt.

"Well, it is quite the broken skill, there would be backlash. At least I can fulfill one of the requirements."

Hiroki said as he used his last remaining common grade enchantment token on his intelligence.

[14.5] -> [15]

"Well then. Now that the daily quest is done, I shou...."

His words were cut short as another prompt sounded.

[Ding!]

[Training quest has arrived]

[You're watching a master at work!]

[Meet the oni and convince him to train you.]

[Rewards: (1) +5 enchantment tokens (uncommon)

(2) +5 experience tokens (uncommon)

(3) +1 Fortune token

(4) +1 item draw ticket(rare)

(5) +5000 credits ]

[Penalty upon failure: system will disappear along with all the effects provided by it.]

Hiroki stared at the screen for minutes then.

"WHAT?!?!?!"

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FINALLY DONE! TOOK A WHILE BUT ITS FINISHED!!!ABYSS GAZER, SIGNING OUT!

-Abyss_gazer