Justiciar - Lord of the Mysteries

Yes! Someone finally write a fanfic about one of my fav pathway. The other are the Chained and the Paragon. I'mma give you 5 star for that. .

Author Here! It's my very first novel. And I'm by no means a real writer, just a guy trying his best. So do expect plot holes, Immature writing style, dumb grammatical errors and a lot of mistakes. My only request to you guys, my readers is that do point out my mistakes and plot inconsistencies. I'll try my best to correct them and improve. Thanks for giving it a try😄

Ight, I was going to write a fic with the exact same idea because there was none, but you already made it for me so thanks. So please, don't drop this fic, maybe it would help writing only in certain days like 3 or 4 per week, it's not a lot, but better than dropping. If you can handle more though, go ahead.

It is nice and entertaining. I hope that this will not be dropped, and I ship MC with Justice. Grammar can be better but it is quite decent.

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Я думаю, что в своеëм предыдущем комменте всë сказал, так что...............,.............................................................................................................. Спасибо.

Interesting read. One of the few fanfics to explore the justicar pathway, which has great room for development due to the lack of gods on it. Pls dont drop it

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Боже какая дичь, слишком быстрое повествование, полное отсутствие интересных моментов. Это произведение можно описать как влажные сны школьника находящегося в пубертатном возрасте ! Моя оценка 4.5/10

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A very good fanfic. I hope the author gets inspired to continue it.