ch1 having a great friend

in a small hostel we see Edward staring at his watch to ready to go for the school grand party after staring at it for 2min and finally it is Tim for the party he change his cloth

to a more fascinating but poor cloth and dash out of room to meet his friends. when he reach there he saw Gabriel, Desmond, Mirabelle and finally Fred after 10 seconds of observing he finally said something " hi guys" Fred quick grab his arm and said something into ear and he gasp and let out a sheepish smile they were that he smile " okay let go" Edward said and they all went to the party arrive at the party a group of guys laughed at them calling them " a bunch of looser" this word got Desmond a little bit angry but they walk a away to the party.when they went they saw Diana which has always been Edward crush after sighting her he simply smile though Diana also like Edward but she always stay away from him so she won't be called a loser and embarrassed in any sort of ways and Edward respected her for that after Diana sighted him he went over to him and she said "hi, hw are you doing" she said putting on a simple smile, I'm fine and you; he replied same here too; she said cheerfully and asked. "will you sit with me. hmm pls" she said with an apologetic look he look at her and reply "why this sudden act, or are you" before he could finish his sentence she interrupted him "you better stop that immature thought of yours now or" he interrupted her and said "oh it nothing, I was just surprised at your sudden act" he said and smile and she replied "i knew you would come. thanks" he held his hand as they walk to his sit like a newly wed couple after they arrive at their sit before he could sit a voice interupted him calling "hey bastard, don't you dare sit with her.

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