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From the stairs to the basement, he saw them or should you say it, with the way it looks like. Hermes felt a lump in his throat, then he looked at the lump of flesh and blood that was his former dog. He felt the tears welling up.
Why had this happened? Why did he need to kill him.
This was also from the school project that we had to do. I was going for sadness, but I think I went a bit too much on the gory side of things.
The funny thing is that when my teacher read this, he said, "Really good writing but maybe turn down the volume of blood and gore."