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I don’t want to lose control In rewriting

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Lisez le roman I don’t want to lose control In rewriting écrit par l'auteur Quentin_ikanu publié sur WebNovel. An extraordinary and exceptional boy named Aim, well, it's how most people know him. After the sudden death of his parents, he found himself under the protection of his father's childhood friend, who ...

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An extraordinary and exceptional boy named Aim, well, it's how most people know him. After the sudden death of his parents, he found himself under the protection of his father's childhood friend, who guided him and helped him overcome his difficulties and differences. He meets four weird boys, who in some way are different from him, but each represents something positive that will help set in motion all the efforts his guardian has made to help him overcome his daily trouble. They participated in his fulfillment. And the day he crossed the path of Kenan... He is a young boy with an innate talent for classical dance and drawing, which has turned his life upside down with his physique, feline grace, and intoxicating beauty. His habits and desires have taken a turn that he never thought he could. With his intellectual heritage and enormous fortune, which threatens his life after living in hiding for more than nine years, will he make it or the same fate as his parents await him?

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Kervens_Elias
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Guys that’s a great story, I still reading it and I am amazed. So I think it’s time that I leave a review. I recommend it for anyone who love sweet and confuse love story. Aim, Cody and Ewen are great, loll don’t want to spoil the story for you. But believe it worth it

Asaskaz
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GJslimboy
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I can explain hoe i feel about this story yet but I know one thing this boy Ken is a character that is very interesting and i love Aim, I really want to be like him psycho or nit. Ahah I will be the master of my life… I love the story it’s eeally good

_eellaabbee
_eellaabbeeLv1_eellaabbee

This is a good story. However, I noticed an insignificant amount of mistakes on the grammar and punctuation marks. Leaving that aside, the plot and characters are both intriguing. Keep writing, author! <3

bunnyrabbit
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Writing Quality: It was written in a first-person perspective which was my favorite as it creates an intimate (closeness?) to the character. Though what I didn't like about this style of narration is that it can easily become an unreliable narration because everything was filtered through the lens of the said character. (Says the person who's currently writing in first-person.) And although I saw some punctuation and capitalization errors, especially in the first line, I will still give it five stars in hopes that author-san will improve. Stability of Updates: So far so good. Story development: I haven't gone that far yet but it has a good start I would say. Character Design: Cool! The protag was supposed to be very smart but has a very low eq. An interesting trope. I hope it doesn't fall into a cliche category in the future. World Background: As far as I've read, it was set in our world. So I guess that would help me visualize things more easily, I think. [Keep it up, Author! And keep improving.]

Daoist9gHJBl
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Hey you’re improving a lot. Congratulations that’s really great, keep continue making progress and make this story unbelievable. I kinda like ready every word you put on. Waiting impatiently to the remaining chapter of this interesting story. Hey guys go have a look, you’ll not regret it I promise. I enjoy it so much… Ken is interesting, I am not going to tell you about Aim. Ah ah ah

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