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I am Dosu Kinuta in the naruto world!

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What is I am Dosu Kinuta in the naruto world!

Lisez le roman I am Dosu Kinuta in the naruto world! écrit par l'auteur Marcelinho_Ggazeli publié sur WebNovel. A random young man from Earth dies, when he wakes up again he realizes he is now a weak villain of Naruto, Dosu kinuta, luckily a sound system came as a gift, now he can expand and acquire new powers ...

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A random young man from Earth dies, when he wakes up again he realizes he is now a weak villain of Naruto, Dosu kinuta, luckily a sound system came as a gift, now he can expand and acquire new powers of control and sound manipulation, the new Dosu is determined to surpass Orochimaru and become a powerful ninja!

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FinaLb0ss
FinaLb0ssLv1FinaLb0ss

Honestly I loved your book and idea behind it, please don't drop anytime soon😃 it was amazingly written and I want to keep reading it so please don't drop.

Whitesnake_requien
Whitesnake_requienLv2Whitesnake_requien

you is the first guy thats use a sound ninja, this fic have potential plis dont drop it

Rochirush
RochirushLv10Rochirush

this is really good fiction, I love it and I hope you will continue --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

FanficCultivator
FanficCultivatorLv1FanficCultivator

NO NO NO NO NO READ!!! MY EYES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ......................... . ....................................................................................

AverageEnjoyer
AverageEnjoyerLv5AverageEnjoyer

Good Story Idea but unfortunately the grammar is extremely horrible. I don't even know why this fanfic has such a high score. 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫

Chips_8019
Chips_8019Lv3Chips_8019

Concept was good. System wasn't implemented well felt very strange. He somehow knows things he shouldn't like spoilers, if he fuses sound waves into his leg he should be somehow 3-4 times faster? hardly if not no character development whatsoever so far for the mc. The author doesn't care to share his backstory or write action scenes in the exams unless he feels like it. spoilers! Author thinks that Kiba's clan is a noble clan which isn't true so i doubt the authors knowledge of the story. high potential certainly But ruined it very quickly. The author says his sound waves can do things quite impossible like somehow being able to use his sound abilities to turn all energy into sound? I wonder if the reviews actually read the novel not just fan girling over the idea of it which Again is a Interesting concept. Overall not worth reading unless the author edits his novel and fixes it. To author--if you want suggestions The biggest improvement you could make is to stop skipping over your own story like at very beginning where the mc just exists and just oh guess I'm here now and it goes from there not interesting at all. Though if fixed would definitely have a chance to be a solid fan fic. Sorry for long review just felt like sharing my thoughts.

Additiya_Bhandari
Additiya_BhandariLv4Additiya_Bhandari

sound powers and oto-nin are gud concepts but the story moves too fast. worried that the future will be bad. and system is not necessary if all skills can be self developed.

BeautifulBastard
BeautifulBastardLv4BeautifulBastard

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Alexander_Vollmer
Alexander_VollmerLv12Alexander_Vollmer

The great we enjoyed how this story has progressed progressed I generally enjoy stories where we see a side of a character that's normally not portrayed As the MC. I'm looking forward to how Are new MC how things will change.

Amir_Blumenfeld
Amir_BlumenfeldLv4Amir_Blumenfeld

really great so far oto-nin mc is a unique concept hope this novel goes the distance

RandomSwordsThief
RandomSwordsThiefLv13RandomSwordsThief

This story has potential! The idea is really good and unique, plus I never read a story where the MC is an Oto-Nin. Most people ignore them or solely focus on Tayuya. Overall, it's breathtaking!

Zenox007
Zenox007Lv2Zenox007

Honnêtement, vraiment très bien, Dosu Kinuta c'est vraiment un personnage plutôt bon mais trop oublié, il manquait vraiment d'histoire sur lui. D'autre part, malgré une qualité d'écriture bonne mais sans plus, le développement de l'histoire et des personnages est intéressant et donne beaucoup l'envie de continuer. Et pour le moment, l'histoire tient la route et est très sympathique, hâte de voir la suite.

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4Will_Caruso

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SaintPiccolo
SaintPiccoloLv1SaintPiccolo

Please continue! Dosu is an underrated character.......................................... Dosu deserves a longer novel than this...Please come back! The masterpiece is missing.......................................................................

G2l
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Hi, permission, I came to check that this fanfic was still dead...it was good and that's why it had to end like a child's story.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Alchemist
AlchemistLv13Alchemist

The story has clearly been dropped. The author constantly has the MC making stupid decisions for nonsensical reasons. Beyond that, it's very clear that english isn't the authors/translators first language and that they don't care enough to put in the effort to iron out the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. Seriously, the story feels like somebody just ran it through MTL software and called it good enough.

Aizen_81
Aizen_81Lv1Aizen_81

It's hard to find something worth reading these days. In fact, this fan's story. I like it. The only negative is let's continue and talk is very little. I also wished that there were different points of view.

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God_of_INFINITY_0_
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Dear author, If u drop this fanfiction than you are not a true naruro fan....................................................................................

Trollface
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этот автор пишет всякую чушь, кто-нибудь остановите его (пустынный орел вам в помощь). этот автор пишет всякую чушь, кто-нибудь остановите его (пустынный орел вам в помощь).

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