Alchemist

Don't waste your time with this one. The Grammar sucks, making it hard to read. The Novel itself could've been decent, but unfortunately it's ruined by two main problems. One is the addition of various xianxia tropes that don't fit the setting. Like random shinobi underestimating the strength of the MC and making him show off his strength, even though he is a Jonin and ANBU operative, which should be enough proof of his strength. Another problem are the many random ass-pulls, like the time Kakashi's Sharingan activated Kamui on its own and absorbed a Flying Thunder God kunai, which somehow allowed Kakashi to learn the Flying Thunder God technique. In that case the only explanation the author gave, was that both are Space-Time techniques, so they interacted like that. That obviously doesn't make any sense, but the author loves doing stuff like that.

What the hell is this bs? The MC just randomly has everything working out in his favor somehow, even when it doesn't make any goddamn sense. How the hell does the sharingan just absorb the Flying Thunder God kunai and how does that let Kakashi understand the technique? This is actually making my head hurt with just how incredibly stupid these garbage ass-pulls are...

Seeing a name like 'Lindy' in a Naruto fanfiction is really weird and ruins my immersion. I'd recommend changing it to a Japanese name.

So far the story is pretty interesting. Having an MC who isn't that interested in conquering the world or something like that is a nice change of pace. The chat group not having an administrator and the MC not being the only transmigrator in the group is also an interesting departure from the normal chat group formula. I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here.

Complete trash! The biggest problem is the garbage quality MTL. I'll never understand why people can't just take some time to edit the MTL and make it readable. Story wise, the MC gets railroaded by his system, which makes it feel like he has no actual agency.

Despite being in the fanfiction section, this is a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic and you can definitely tell. The story isn't particularly well written and filled with a lot of the clichés typically found in Chinese novels (especially xianxia), despite being set in Dragon Ball. The translation is also terrible, especially when it comes to the characters names. It feels like the translator just ran the raws through MTL and couldn't even be bothered to properly edit the result...

The MC joined the Straw Hats and promptly started fighting many of the battles Luffy fought in canon. It feels incredibly weird that a member of the crew keeps fighting stronger opponents than the captain. I'm also confused about the MC's Devil Fruit, the Paper Paper fruit, which for some reason the Author made into a Paramecia, even though there is already a Logia Paper Paper Fruit from an old One Piece game...

He's really reckless for always answering first. It's incredibly suspicious that he always knows the answer.

100th place is Guy? Whoever wrote this garbage was clearly high...

The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier. I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.