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His Demons: A BL Story

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Lisez le roman His Demons: A BL Story écrit par l'auteur BeckyAnimeGirl54 publié sur WebNovel. Rowan is smart, funny, and talented. His dream is to become a famous dancer. He was loved by his family and admired by his friends. However, he was in a toxic relationship. One day, an unfortunate acc...

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Rowan is smart, funny, and talented. His dream is to become a famous dancer. He was loved by his family and admired by his friends. However, he was in a toxic relationship. One day, an unfortunate accident changes his life. His dream comes crashing down, forcing him to rethink his life. Now living in a new town, Rowan is moody and considers himself disgusting. His fears have turned into inner demons. Ray, a physical therapist, enters Rowan's life. Before Ray can win Rowan's heart, he must break down the wall that Rowan has built. Can this task be achieved, or will a demon from Rowan's past threaten everything?

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vorlefan
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The story, albeit not being my genre or usual reading, show us an interesting concept and narrative. It has the potential to reach the standard quality of nowdays tv shows such as Netflix's teen show, but of course, for adults. The only big problem here is the grammar. It's the biggest flaw, one in that the author can in the future fix it by rewriting and being attentive to the rules. In this case, I'd suggest using Grammarly and ProWrittingApp to improve it. Another point to improve would be style. It lacks a nice touch and profundity when describing how the characters are feeling and things are happening in their mind. It's an important factor because that's what makes us enjoy the characters. For this, I suggest reading quality books of the genre or even outside the genre, like The Name of the Wind, to get inspiration and ideas about the prose. Another interesting idea is to use lyrics from music as inspirations, taking their metaphors and analogies to improve the overall style. All in all, keep up the good work, I'll be back in the future to see how things are going :) and of course, redo my review to give your story the justice.

AceAmbrosia
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Despite it not being my favorite genre or anywhere close to it, I was still hooked from the first couple of paragraphs. The only advice I'd give is to work on the lack of descriptions.

Nancy_Ugwu
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I love the story, your pace, the conversations. Infact I'm loving everything! Keep the updates coming cause I'll love to see to the end. Kudos.

Justin_Gabventure
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Love your book, I highly recommend this book. Though it's not my favourite genre, I was still captured by the beautiful writing of this wonderful author[img=update][img=update]

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