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Hermione and The Genius Magic Formula (Harry Potter Fanfic)

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The boy who can decipher all and any kind of magic as if they were formulasーーLeonard Taylor. Captivated by magic, the boy used all his talents to research and overturn the common sense of the wizarding world. No one knows what influence his research would have on Harry and the dark wizards. Note: This is a translation

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Ginormous_Madman
Ginormous_MadmanAuteurGinormous_Madman

Ignore me, I'm Just Doing the Tradition. Also English is not my first language so I kinda afraid to start this project, but someone said: You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step.” — Martin Luther King Jr.

Varts
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Joao_Pires
Joao_PiresLv4Joao_Pires

New review, made when the story reached 33 chapters. The author said that the book was translated, but still the writing is sometimes very weird. Lately, the author is not using the correct tenses and, the way the characters talk is very weird. Here's an example: Hermione and Leo are talking alone and Leo says: "Hermione doesn't need to move the wand that fast, Hermione should move more gently."

Gratiz_
Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

I liked this fanfic, but it became stale very quick. I'm following other author's fics, but they have the same problem. It's not fun, there's no comedy relief and that's why it's became an average fic in my eyes, sorry.

Martin147
Martin147Lv3Martin147

It is a really good story so keep up the great work ! So I am giving five stars because it is really good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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CrowMoonrise
CrowMoonriseLv1CrowMoonrise

A short story, but a complete one nonetheless, for that alone its worth 3*. The Translation is nothing special, with a lot of mistakes that break the immersion, especially the ones where the Translator mixed up the MC's name with Hermione's name. As for everything else, while research oriented and teacher MC's are my absolut favorite type in any setting, the MC's personality is so dull and boring that I have nothing good to say, except the attempt to "remove" Harry and deal with certain events in his own way.

Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4Miki_Marlo75

The story feels empty, even boring, there is very little to say about the rest, there is a clear lack of progress and the story feels like it is stagnant.

Trewan_Games
Trewan_GamesLv4Trewan_Games

This is a really great story and it is probably one of the best I have read about the Harry Potter world.

Joao_Pires
Joao_PiresLv4Joao_Pires

The story is engaging with minimal errors; however, the author seems unfamiliar with proper grammar. It appears as if it were translated directly from another language without accounting for grammatical differences.

mo_ashraf
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Mohammad_Dawoud
Mohammad_DawoudLv4Mohammad_Dawoud

great,just great tffhfhhfghgffgbhgffgbhg

RICARDO_PISCOYA
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asura7879
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Goos01
Goos01Lv4Goos01

The narrative of this work sometimes races ahead, leaving behind crucial details for character and plot development. The over-reliance on the protagonist as the solution to all conflicts detracts somewhat from the depth and suspense of the story. Despite these shortcomings, the overall storyline remains engaging. Would I read it again? Perhaps not immediately, but it certainly provides a pleasant diversion for those seeking entertainment during a lengthy journey.

Argent_Evergarden1
Argent_Evergarden1Lv14Argent_Evergarden1

HONEST REVIEW!!!! This story is a Completely new take on Harry Potter While it stays true to its root it changes many things that makes it diffrent compared to other HP fics. The only real issue is sometimes to translation is messed up but the whole story is readable compared to other translations. 9.5/10 would reccomend

aiden_rivera
aiden_riveraLv4aiden_rivera

good ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

Rizki_Caturianto
Rizki_CaturiantoLv1Rizki_Caturianto

It's a very great and unique Harry Potter fanfiction!! I really really love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great and interesting (although short) plot/storyline and quite good english/translation (you always use the opponent names when talk. Like Leo says "Hermione" when he talk with her, you can use "you" instead).. And grammar is good too.. I like how MC/Leonard is focus with his research then interfere with story.. I love how MC/Leo is friend with Hermione since before Hogwarts and later become lovers (not that I hate Ron, but Hermione is too good for him.. They so different, like fire and water).. I also like that this story show how Harry and Ron is many difficulties without Hermione with them.. It also so different from original story, like Philosopher Stone trial, Lupin and Sirius still alive, Hagrid fates, Umbridge dissapear (this is my favourites Umbridge fate from many other stories), etc.. There're many thinks I don't like about MC/Leo (like he's too cold/eliminate any his enemies. Love researching magic so much that he don't care about others, like he let Voldy ressurect to see the process. Etc).. Although I understand why he's like that (he's researcher and don't care what others think about him. He also don't know much about human psychology, like it's fine and normal for him, but not for others), I still don't like it.. I also agree with him so much about kill his enemies, so they don't come back to hurt his family, lover, and important person later.. There also don't much appearence of Harry in this story, he's like secondary/supporting character in this story (Dumbledore appear more than Harry in this story).. But I understand, because MC/Leo not have many interactions/encounter with Harry and Ron.. Love your story so much author sama 😁👍😍😍😍

Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4Ashish_Kumar_1835

The story cannot be any more generic than this.

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