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Harry Potter : twin of the boy who survived

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When a man wakes up to his world destroyed and left alone, he is met with a voice asking for his wishes. But how can one think realizing you are alone, your home gone, your life erased and your expectations vanished. Paul Egon Esteban, a man from earth that has been able to unite all nations and started to develop into the space faring age around the middle of the 21st century. Is a patient of a rare disease that has no cure currently has been placed into a state of the art research facility that would place him and many other of people with similar situations into cryostasis sleep until cures for their sickness had been discovered. But one day he was awoken suddenly as his cryopod has lost all functionality with only a tattered nurse droid taking care of him. Confused, Dizzy and totally Discombobulated, Paul walked out only to find the facility he has been on is now decrepit and destroyed. It wasn't until checking the droid did he find out he was now in the last years of the 22nd century nearly entering the 23rd. Shocked and scared he tried going out of the place only to find out a dry wasteland that was Earth. Mind blanked and shocked, he trudged the land as he realized he was all alone. A former city full of wonder and people turned to dust. It wasn't until his dazed state lingered for a bit did he get a few seconds of semblance of the thing in his eyes. {Was that all you wished for?} Not understanding what it was and why it was there, Paul agreed on something he forgot that he wanted. Light swallowed him and now took him into another world for another chance in life. (A/N: I transferred my fanfic here because the one where I first posted it was a reused dropped novel, which means the setting of the book is still a novel so I might get flagged for copyright or something. So I transferred the whole thing as well as editing the stuff that I might find correcting or adding details.)

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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4Sabaroth_zarkiel

Harem recommendation : damphne luna ,Hermione, fluer, tonks

Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

terrible grammar and spelling. he can't even use the correct names, duddlys instead of durslys lazy. concept could be good if had a competent author and no idea what all this Jacki Chan stuff is,makes no sense

BoredSoHere
BoredSoHereLv4BoredSoHere

serious let down man... sorry not for me.

Daoistyinyang
DaoistyinyangLv4Daoistyinyang

Exagerou nos monólogos e coisas sem sentido. ..................................................................................................................................................

Karthik_ramannakum
Karthik_ramannakumLv13Karthik_ramannakum

update regularly pls..................... .... ..............

SirSmurf
SirSmurfLv15SirSmurf

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Kazuto_Uzuki
Kazuto_UzukiLv12Kazuto_Uzuki

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Kagari2003
Kagari2003Lv1Kagari2003

It's so bad that it make me want clean my eyes and brain with bleached and hope to never saw these fic again :). not recommended for you to read this

Crazy_Stamp
Crazy_StampLv4Crazy_Stamp

Needs more chapters .............. . ... ....

mc_broz
mc_brozLv4mc_broz

This was good. I enjoyed it honestly the writing isn’t the best but the content of the story is good however the way it worded make me feel like this was translated not written

GreyKnights
GreyKnightsLv14GreyKnights

this starts ok but it gets worse and worse the quality starts ok but it starts dropping to its like reading a badly translated MTL im dropping this after reading chapter 68

Gratiz_
Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

This is an average fic with spelling mistakes. There are some bad translations, for example jackie chan adventures talismans are called differently. The system it seems can do anything. We only learn that there is gatcha, shop and etc functions of the system as the story progress - it's bad writing. The main problem with this fic is too many rewards. We don't have time to process them and we receive yet another 3 rewards... I wouldn't say anything if the rewards weren't forgotten. For example the author forgets about a new template or the fact that he can absorb magical creatures and add them to his bloodline. Dude, MC gave the command to shadow creatures from jackie chan adventures to capture magical creatures, years later dude still didn't absorb a single magical creature...

Watchmountain
WatchmountainLv4Watchmountain

The writing quality could not be worse if typed blindley on a phone. I would not say anything if some errors are made but this looks almost intentional. If you dont trust my words just read the first two chapters. If you dont want to scream by then maybe the story can be something for you.

Joao_Silva_0541
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Anup_RyuSenju
Anup_RyuSenjuLv4Anup_RyuSenju

a total bs story for those masochist, it's total bs of how he didn't even want a revenge. Burn them alive, let animals ravage them, use all curses on them and after destroying everything about them and toying them for as long as they live, and even make contract with death and let them suffer even after death. Nobody should be spared be it Dumbledore, beast of parents, so called brother, and all those related to him, everybody. after getting it over with, live your life to fullest, find wives, have children and make good memories with them.

Joao_Silva_0541
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WildCat_1
WildCat_1Lv4WildCat_1

I really love this novel, I hope the author can put a little more focus on the magical beasts though, swing as though he has a archdruid template but sees no use.

fumma
fummaLv11fumma

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