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Harry Potter and the Magical Tok'ra

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Harry Potter narrowly manages to escape his wicked uncle by magically teleporting himself to another world. Harry becomes host to a Tok'ra symbiote named Einar. Original idea and first six chapters are by HuffleBager1978 (Tok'ra-Agent-632) That was discontinued so I wanted to continue it as I love both HP and Stargate. Harry Potter and Stargate are not owned by me.

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-Don't Read This Story! You will likely regret it. -Don't read this if you're looking for something good, this is a below-average story, written by a below-average writer that many find hard to understand from lack of clarity. -The Mc is terrible, the characters are terrible, the ideas are terrible, the pacing is terrible, the harem is terrible. -This is not the marvel story you're looking for. It's not even in the MCU yet after so long, and may never be with how slow it is. -This is a wish-fulfillment story that is in the MCU universe and will follow the MCU in my own way. The goal is to blend my story in and around the MCU. -Be warned I'm a below-average writer, I need to work on my details and wording, and probably everything else. Expect quality fluctuations. -This will have a harem since my last story didn't have one. --Expect badly written lemon scenes. They will be marked for an easy skip for those who don't want to read it. If you can handle all that, then welcome aboard. -The Asgardian Theoric is about to get a second chance. [[[ https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Theoric_(Earth-616) ]]] -The story starts before the MCU where he will grow his abilities on his way to becoming indomitable. -1st volume: Prologue -2nd volume: Troll War - (ch.12-59) -3rd volume: Hidden Forces - (ch. 60-194) -4th volume: Olympians -5th volume: Mutants -6th volume: MCU -7th volume: Darkness -8th volume: Epilogue ___________________________________ To help answer some questions people might have. -This is a fanfic, don't expect everything to be super accurate to marvel canon or history in general. I'm taking the info provided that's already been established and turning into a story of my own making. - No kingdom-building, - The beginning of the story puts a lot of people off because I didn't go the normal route people would like, and they don't tend to like the troll arc. The next arc also starts a slow tedious writing style that needs much work and improvement. - He also starts a little rash and seems a little weak because his powers easily drain him, some of this is explained later though and fixed by Gaea, but many miss this and only concentrate on the fact that he isn't being and doing what they think he should. - I should also explain that he has some memories that were locked away and then deleted because of his rashness. This was simply a way to end the whole locked memory thing, the Acanti soul was a plot point to give him future memories of the MCU, beyond that it served no more purpose so I got rid of all the other useless knowledge, He was in no way nerfed as some would like to believe. - I made him a little more emotional than I would like at the beginning, it was my attempt at trying to give him a personality after being criticized for the lack thereof in my last story. - Ruthless? I don't think so, I'm going more the route of a fair Mc. He'll do more of an eye for an eye type stuff, gender does not matter to him when it comes to this. - While the harem isn't the end all be all goal, it's true that he is going around getting women. - I do have a story beyond the harem though and will not focus too heavily on the harem beyond the obvious. Mostly he just goes around sleeping with them and beyond that is anyone's guess whether they stick around or not, I do try and make it feel a little more real, but it is a harem. - Basically a harem with a progressing story. ___________________________________ -I have also posted this story on Royal Road and Wattpad.

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Gunts92
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HP is a jerk, in the series or in the films they have no personality, it's his friends who do the bulk of the work, it's only after Cedric's death that he makes an effort, but he Despite everything, he remains an average wizard who can talk to the snake... unless you take the old Harry which would be drinkable, I don't see how a Harry who "ran away from his Uncle Vernon" would be interesting, he would have been better off taking an oc or a character with more character such as Luna, Sirius, or Lupin Furthermore, the tokra have been fighting for over a thousand years against the goauld and have achieved nothing, it is only with the help of humans (whom they have denigrated for several seasons) that things have started to move forward.

Josh_Wilko_5256
Josh_Wilko_5256Lv14Josh_Wilko_5256

are you continuing or dropping this as its started out good

Masterchiefminer
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A vary smoth blend of Stargate and Harry Potter. I've high hopes for this.

DaoistjmtGvj
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After reading chapter 10 I'm hoping this wont't be dropped. There is some minor spelling errors. MC is Harry Potter having just completed his first year in Hogwarts comes across the Tok'ra Einhar who has been separated from the others of his faction. It's a neat read if you like Stargate SG-1 and Harry Potter. So long as you're not going to get super critical over the original source material. Give it a shot.

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