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Gunts92
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HP is a jerk, in the series or in the films they have no personality, it's his friends who do the bulk of the work, it's only after Cedric's death that he makes an effort, but he Despite everything, he remains an average wizard who can talk to the snake... unless you take the old Harry which would be drinkable, I don't see how a Harry who "ran away from his Uncle Vernon" would be interesting, he would have been better off taking an oc or a character with more character such as Luna, Sirius, or Lupin Furthermore, the tokra have been fighting for over a thousand years against the goauld and have achieved nothing, it is only with the help of humans (whom they have denigrated for several seasons) that things have started to move forward.

Harry Potter and the Magical Tok'ra

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Starkiller_Revan
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I haven’t read the fanfic yet, but why would you even waste your time reading a Harry Potter fanfic with Harry as the MC if you despise the character Harry Potter so much? It seems like you’re just setting yourself up for disappointment lol. Your review is also relatively useless considering every single issue you’ve mentioned is with each series canon and not this fanfic… If you’re going to leave a review, at least make it relevant to the story you’re leaving it on.

DarkKnight32
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Its not really that bad of a fic this one harry is still a child though so dont expect anything to great from him though he got voldis memories(still didn’t absorb them) so maybe shen he takes them for himself it eill get better

FinnsRevenge
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