God Of Humanity

The first few chapters are a bit slow and highly descriptive, then ‘hula’ the pace goes up and then we suddenly have fast-paced chapters with lots of new characters and events unfolding which is a lot to digest in the short time which feels better in middle of novel rather than the beginning. I feel the sentences are a bit overly descriptive which feels kinda long and a bit boring when reading it. It definitely has some funny elements to it which is good. It might be just me but I feel some words like *APPEAR*, *GLOW*, *GLARE* and *MERGE* appeared a bit awkward. It felt like the world development and side character are overly prioritized than the main character as I found we get the mention of mc only after a few chapters. Still, you can see that the author has done a lot of research to include the gods of many different regions trying to blend them into one world. Overall, this novel has good potential but needs a bit of improvement.

Woah... you're writing style is so good!

It has a good and interesting premise, however, the sentence structures need work

My main problems with this novel are the sentence structure/grammar and the occasionally clunky dialogue. However, the rest of the story is definitely on fire; multi-cultural Gods and Goddesses, a funny main character, and no idea where things will go next. I look forward to the wild ride ahead of Rey!

I’ve read the first five chapters and I think the story has potential, but it’s still finding its footing. The premise of gods influencing humanity is interesting and has a lot of room for exciting plot twists, but so far, the story feels like it's moving a bit slowly. Overall, "God of Humanity" has the foundation of a compelling story, There’s potential here. So Goodluck Author! Keep it up[img=recommend][img=update]

The beginning starts off rough, but after a while the story gets very good. The Character design is probably the best part, the story is interesting. Highly recommend the author re-write the first few chapters, this story has high potential!

Actions speak better than words. I won't say much as this is the start of "God Of Humanity" the Sequel.

Altogether a nice novel, encompassing knowledge of several gods from different regions of the world. I must say the author really did I nice job. That aside, the novel progresses slowly, introducing several gods at a time. However, the writers skills are amazing, not perfect, but wonderful. It adds the thrill to the read. It's definitely worth the read.

This book has a great potential if the author put more effort on it but I'm afraid the prologue seems a bit rough with the convo, apart from that, everything is cool with the setting

A great book indeed. But, am worried about the start. You revealed a lot of information that was supposed to be hidden, thus making the readers know the end. Apart from that, a suggested library as been created for this.

Well, I'm a lover of romance books, either billionaire or werewolf, and I must say this is the first story of this kind I'm reading. The prologue starts off a bit dull and too long. There are many pieces of information revealed, thus making it boring. But after that, it's definitely worth thread i highly recommend.

I just gave this a read and wow. Now the prologue is what need to be done well, especially in a fantasy setting, if the writer isn't focusing their time to introduce the characters and the immersion of the story, then it just feels like a run-on-a-mill Webnovel story. But after reading, the prologue left me impress. Now for the writing. It is questionable as we have something, for an example, like "*boom*" written down rather than having to describe that an explosion happen and seeing the reactions as it unfold. But world background is there, and character design is perfect. Do I recommend this Webnovel and want to see it become adapted at some point, well yeah

The story is well-written which shows the skill of the author in writing. It has a solid world background but putting a lot of introduction for the first chapter makes the intro of the story a bit low in the intense aspect. The storyline caught my interest so I hope you can make the story more exciting in the following chapters ahead since there are only 3 chapters currently.

At start, the author was giving a lot of details, which is not bad, the prologue was also good, what is the being that the gods have to fight? Its a really interesting premise, the best part is character design, over all it is a great story with consistent updates, if the author's writing quality remains the same, and he does not drop it, then it is destined to get popular. (pls end the hiatus quickly)

As someone who really like Mythology, and Fate Franchise, I really like how this story is planning out. However the first few chapters was bit slow but then it quickly speed up. the small introduction of the God and Goddess are nice as well. it make me want to know more about them. It had great idea but would need improvement in writing