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Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown

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What is Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown

Lisez le roman Exploring During Wartime: The Unknown écrit par l'auteur JohnoTheGreat publié sur WebNovel. During the Orc-Alliance war, two continental adventurers and best friends head out on their own adventure during war time, trying to find ancient secrets, get pulled into fights and wars they did not ...

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During the Orc-Alliance war, two continental adventurers and best friends head out on their own adventure during war time, trying to find ancient secrets, get pulled into fights and wars they did not want to be in. Joseph and Arimia understand that the only thing is holding them back is themselves and now they board the blimp called the 'Steadfast Dusk' and head for the mainland continent of Azreath from the Isle Kingdoms to look through the ruins that remain. Joseph and Arimia are now joined by an old friend and a new friend and now they strive to collect all the powerful artifacts in Elderen before the orcs can. This book is based in the same universe as The Tale of Our war and is now the main book that carries the story.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The story was so good that I got goosebumps. A nice reading experience for me and the other readers. Sometimes, I am confused about who was talking but it was still enjoyable to read! Nice world exposition and not info-dumping. And also vivid in narrations! Good luck and praying for your success!

goldenchild725
goldenchild725Lv15goldenchild725

The story seems good so far. Translation Quality: You need to fix it a little. Some of your sentences are just too long, and you need to shorten them by splitting them in half. Otherwise, you also have some grammar and punctuation errors. Stability of Updates: I have nothing to say here. Story Development: The development is well paced. Character design: The characters seem nice so far. World Background: Nothing to say here.

yu_chan_desu
yu_chan_desuLv2yu_chan_desu

the world building is pretty detailed thus it makes you really dive into the author's creative mind. i can only suggest that maybe the paragraphs could use some breaking apart since webnovel users mostly use the app to read and it gets confusing to read long paragraphs. all in all a pretty amazing book with well written characters and plot. kudos to the author!

Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215Lv2Wolfgirl1215

I think my two major points that I absolutely loved about this book were the plot, and the characters. The plot itself is very unique, and the writer has a masterful talent of slowly trickling in information to build up the world and the settings in a way that remains captivating throughout. I loved the dyanmics between Ari and Joe, and it was enjoyable to see how much thought and detail was put into their backstories and personalities. I think Ari has to be one of my favourite characters I've ever read. Equally, side character interaction- yes! The alternate points of focus made this really, really interesting. My one criticism would probably be sentence structure. For while the author writes rather poetically, the sentences can get rather confused and disrupts the reading experience a bit. But overall, great work

IamLolicon
IamLoliconLv1IamLolicon

Nice work author! I had fun reading it... you're especially good and making the reader visualize the story by describing many details throughout the story! There are some minor grammatical mistakes but those are not enough to bother me, and since you're not a native English speakers (like me) it's very understandable and I'm sure you will improve on that in the future! The only tip I would give is that I would name the chapters a little more inviting to read, the chapter names can be a little boring to some! Anyway keep up the good work! I will keep following your progress! Cheers!

David_Neilsen
David_NeilsenLv1David_Neilsen

The author does a nice job of setting up their world by showing rather than telling. It is a fun world of magic and mayhem, and yet it doesn't feel overly-cliche. There is a slight steampunk vibe as well, which adds to the enjoyment. Overall, this is a good start.

Megana4
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The synopsis is interesting. I loved how the story started at the beginning of the chapter. I would suggest to the author that it would be great if you could fix the paragraphs into three or four lines. So, the audience could read the chapter easily. Very promising characters. Looking forward to reading more chapters. All the best and well done, Author!

Kronos661
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The plot and characters are amazing. I enjoyed reading the book. My suggestion is to smash the length of the paragraphs a little bit, because there were places where I got tired while reading. Keep writing!

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