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Empire of Winter

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Lisez le roman Empire of Winter écrit par l'auteur Worst_Writer69 publié sur WebNovel. I don't own GOT, ASOIAF or anything related to it.First time writerNot a native English speakerNorth wank self insert with system...

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I don't own GOT, ASOIAF or anything related to it. First time writer Not a native English speaker North wank self insert with system

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Dare, A Nigerian whose educational and normal life was a mess, a poor fellow, with a sick mother, met a Billionaire online. He couldn't chat with her because he was a reserved person and the billionaire wanted him to reveal his dick pic. He shared his login details of the dating app with his friend who was open and carefree. But the friend betrayed him. Instead of working for him as they had agreed, his best friend stole the opportunity and traveled out of the country to meet the billionaire.  Dare has a rich uncle who hasn't be there for his mother and him. But the uncle out of the blue showed up to help him. Dare thought of that as an opportunity to fly out of his country to search for the betrayer. Since his uncle has companies in several countries abroad.  He left for California with the aim of going to the Billionaire's house and ratting his friend out. But as soon as he entered into the apartment, he caught the sight of the only daughter of the woman and fell in love with her. Love at first sight.  So, his motive changed.  The Billionaire woman, getting to know the true nature of his friend kicked the friend out and took him, Dare, in. But Dare doesn't really like the woman, he only wanted to stay with her because of her daughter.  But the daughter doesn't like him, because she thought he was a gold digger who wanted to take his mother's properties.  Now, he needs to devise a plan... A plan to convince the daughter, come clean with the mother and marry the daughter.  His one month intention of staying in California is now prolonged. The fear of his mother about to come to pass. Disclaimer: This is no racist, sexiest or AROUSAL OF ANY SORT OF UPRISING. The work is based on true events and looks to deliver it with humor and reality.

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Gd_Sys
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Zetsway
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It's bad. Writing quality is actually the decent thing in this, and that is also very bad. We get no background for the MC, not even a single line to tide things over. The Rob is just there to info dump on powers. This section would have been much better if it happened after the reincarnation and put as needed when he uses one of the abilities gained(no need for a ROB scene). I also dislike mind control, so that's a huge minus for me. Also, there is 0 world background and development, I guess the author expect us to know all things about ASOIAF/GOT.

Kickedelm0
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The gif will explain everything that you need to know what mc is like. And i don't like Slave system that makes other follow they orders it takes away the scheming part and make him steam roll everything that author don't like so yeah dis isn't or me.

Sagvey_Ay
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the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story

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