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Eleceed

A Oc in Eleceed it will start off with him at the age of 6 discovering his ability Even though English is my first language my grammar is terrible since i have dyslexia so I am truly sorry if you can’t read this because of the grammar and I am also writing this on my phone so that doesn’t help. Please don’t except a master peace of a fan fic from me as I doubt that will ever happen and I don’t have a upload schedule as I am busy with irl things + absolutely terrible sleep schedule. Hope you enjoy your read :)

OniWolf04 · Anime et bandes dessinées
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Training

"That's enough for today Ash but remember to train your force control everyday for at least a few hours." Athena said

"Of course old hag."

In a large bedroom a young black haired blue eyed boy around six years old can be seen sitting cross legged on a large bed with a women in her mid thirty's with blond hair brown eyes standing in front of him.

*Bang*

"The hell! Why do you keep hitting me hag!"

*Bang*

"Stop!"

"Stop calling me a hag then I'm in my mid thirty's brat."

"Fine grandma."

*Bang*

~5 minutes later~

"I'm sorry."

"Good."

The same women and young boy can be seen in the same positions except the young boy had a black eye and lots of bumps on his head.

"Listen up Ash you can't get strong from just training force control…well you can but what's the point of that strength when you can't use it so starting from today we are going to spar every day." Athena said with a grin.

"Really!" Ash said with a wide smile.

"Yes really, I will give you pointers and ways to improve at the end" Athena responded .

~5 minutes later~

A young boy and a old…young women was standing i front of each over in a large area surrounded by trees.

"Well start with hand to hand and once I deem you good enough at that well move on to weapons you got that brat?"

"Yeah I got it, all I have to do is beat your ass then we move on to weapons?" Ash said with a grin.

"Hahaha like I said young Ash it's good to dream." Athena responded amused at thinking he could beat her.

"Whatever old hag." Ash said.

"Shall we dance then Ash? You can come at me when you like." Athena said with a weird smile.

After Athena said that Ash got on the ground four legged and pounced at her like a wolf going in for a dear. However Athena dogged him easily.

"Come on Ash you can do better then that right? Or am I wrong." Athena said trying to get him to do better.

Ash suddenly stopped moving and his pupils turned slit like, his teeth became sharper and his nails changed into claws.

Ash once again pounced at her…however once she was going to doge he moved mid air to the side she was dogging and swiped his claws at her neck. She moved back before It came into contact with her.

"That was close wasn't it Ash come on you can do better."

Instead of pouncing this time Ash got on his two feat and put his hands up to in a boxing stance.

He moved forward slowly

He reached striking distance and jabbed once with his left to her face which she blocked. He then hooked right at her body then tried to kick her thigh with his shin.

However she blocked it all and he continued to strike at her with a large smile on his face

Jab…blocked

Double jab…blocked and dogged

Jab,cross…blocked again

Double Jab again…blocked and dogged again

Ash stated getting frustrated and lost focus and Athena used that as an opportunity and punched at his face.

Ash looked at the punch Athena sent with wide eyes as time seemed to stop for him. Little did he now purple lightning started to surround him.

Closer and closer the punch came to him as the purple lightning around him started to get violent.

His instincts flared at him to doge but he couldn't move a muscle…As the fist was about to make contact with his face he suddenly moved to the left so fast any normal human he saw this would of seen a blur.

When Athena saw this the smile on her face got even wider as he had used a little part of the ability her force control gave him on instinct.

"That's enough for today Ash you have exceeded my expectations. We're did you learn to fight like that Ash?"

*Pant*

"I saw a guy on the thing you called a Tv doing it yesterday so I thought I should try it." He responded out of breath from the intense activity they just did.

"Good. Good." Her smile widened even further. (A/N: Subarashii)

"So tell me we're to improve old…*cough* Athena." Ash said with sweat dripping down his back not only from the spar he just did but thinking about once he called her a grandma.

"Oh, yes things you need to improve on is 1. Your stamina you only lasted 6 minutes which is not bad for a six year old. 2. You need to learn how to stay calm and focused even when your opponent blocks or doges your attacks getting frustrated in middle of a life or death battle can cost you or your friends life's."

"Yes Athena."

"You can call me mother or mum if you want I don't mind hehe I've always wanted a son and technically I am your parent since I have adopted you."

"…Yes mother" He said.

"Good.Good. Can you tell me what happened with your eyes and teeth also you nails?" Athena asked curious about his transformation.

"What do you mean?" Ash questioned.

"Look at you hands." Athena said

After she said that Ash looked down at his hands and his eyes widened in shock as his nails looked more like claws at the moment. Athena then gave Ash a mirror to look at his eyes and teeth.

"I didn't know I could do this." Ash said

"Hmmm it must be todo with your ability."

"Yeah." As Ash agreed with her his claws reverted back into normal fingernails, eyes and his teeth returned to normal except his canines.

"Interesting." Athena said.

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(A/N: 967 words thank you for reading tell me what you think it my first time writing a fight scene thing tell me what you like about it and don't like about it so i can try to improve. I've also concluded the vote for the cover of this fic thank you for those who vote.)