Dragon Ball: The Legendary Manga Maker!

I'm gonna give the first review, and i'ma rate 5 stars cause i rly like ur one piece fanfic and trust that this will be gud( I have not started reading this yet, so if new readers see this, take my review with a pinch of salt)

He has published almost nothing. Though he says he'll do it later, until then, he's stuck with it. (It's not an unfair bad review. There is literally no very deep world background, the development of the story is nil, the character design... Well, physically it's done XD and the update stability as you know is badly lacking). [Translated from Spanish].

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can you please continue this story I wanna see where this goes

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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Putting 5 stars now, will update review later So far so good, it's up to chapter 4, been 22 days since last update though. Hoping the author makes mc draw the manga after the events happen and not before they happen.

As a fan of author's previous works, it's a biased review from me.

Considering his writing skill for now imma give it a 5 star but if it turns bad imma delete this review and make a new one and ill try to keep myself updated with this book

سأقدم المراجعة الأولى، وسأعطي تقييمًا 5 نجوم لأنني معجب بقطعة واحدة وأثق في أن هذا سيكون جيدًل ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Still waiting for the next chapter... Dude, just tell us if you're gonna take hiatus on this and focus on your One Piece fanfic.

I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama I want more of this masterpiece created by deus-sama

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high Expectations to this work [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

I didn't read it yet but I know it's gonna be good , i like your work author....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I am also a fan of the Dragon Ball cartoon and I have been hoping for someone to bring this series back to the part where Goku was a child for a long time and now that it is in the hands of the person who created your very good One Piece novel, I am curious to see how you will create the story because if you have time from working on the One Piece novel, please update this novel.

Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here Its finally here

The story is good other than the update everything is great. If only the author would continue this story.

great setup for being of the story just wish it was updated a little more frequently

i want moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr chapter to read