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Exactly my point. He used it to clear out low level cannon fodder, but mostly used Taijutsu against the stronger opponents.
Nah bruv, you clearly put 270 on purpose. In the story, you yourself have written: "Lightning travels at 270 mph, but I travel at 400mph", so it's really clear that you had put 270 mph on purpose. Don't try to BS your way outta this one.
Breaking a Marine captain's jaw, especially one who's from the weakest sea, does not constitute "changing the world". If that counts as changing the world, there are definitely 1000s who've done that as well as much more than that. Your standards for events that "change the world" are way too low.
Man, I really tried to like this story, I really did try to. It had an interesting idea, but the execution was horrible. There were so, so many inconsistencies with the plot, with the mc's ability, and so much more, and its not even something complex that was wrong, its completely obvious stuff that even a kid would know that's incorrect. Like blud straight up said that lightning travels at a speed of 270 mph, while the actual speed is 270,000 mph. I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt that he might've somehow missed the 3 zeroes, but the sentence was said in comparison to the mc's speed, so it was very clear. Like Author really thought that there was cars which went faster than lightning. In short, this story is one brain aneurysm after another.
Dragon is an East Bird🤣
Wasn't he unconscious literally 1 paragraph ago?!
Bro is talking like he keeps getting attacked every few minutes, and doesn't ever even get a couple hours without a fight... I really want to like this story, but the author is giving me every reason to hate this story with all these inconsistencies, and plain mistakes.
Wtf? Doesn't he have dozens of ships under him? Does the author not have any knowledge about ship's, and thinks that every ship works the same way as Luffy' where there are only a dozen people or so? All ship's, especially the size of Marine ship's require 100s of people to handle it, and usually hold around 500-600 people each.
retarded*