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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Freakish Observation! (62)

Broly continued to train as he smirked, an unfamiliar sense of satisfaction growing within him.

Yami quickly retreated, pretending to go back to sleep when he was actually conserving his energy.

'This feels great!' Broly thought excitedly as he moved around the room, heaving ki blasts in every direction and dodging them avidly.

In his Super Saiyan state, all of his senses were heightened, it was as if for the first time in his life he wore glasses and hearing aids that supercharged his senses, allowing him to see further and clearer and hear slight and small sounds.

'Also now the properties of ki make more sense' Broly thought, recalling the epiphany he had when he first transformed.

Broly was unsure what had caused him to realise it but he could now see the makeup of his ki much more clearly, tiny tightly packed energy particles grouped together.

'So this is lifeforce?' Broly thought, seeing it dissipate out of existence.

Broly played around with it for a few moments, getting a feel for how his ki moved about in his Super Saiyan form.

He stretched out both of his arms and let his ki wrap around fists and in the shape of his hand, a huge glove-like ki gauntlet formed.

Broly paid particular attention to the formation of energy particles in his lifeforce, seeing them all rush together pressing each other wildly. Broly squinted at this and exerted his will over his ki, trying to force the ki particles to spread out.

Like a wave, one after the other, under the force of Broly's will the particles spread out turning from a lime green colour to an almost murky green colour.

Sweat dripped down the side of Broly's face and a mild headache thumped against his mind, the strain on his will causing his countenance and muscles to tighten.

Broly breathed heavily as he finished adjusting his ki, the colour completely changing.

'I wonder what change this has brought' he thought tiredly but excitedly, fiddling with his ki like this was a very enjoyable activity for him.

Broly punched out using about 75% of his strength at once.

KSH!

An awkward crackling sound rang out as Broly's fist quickly travelled through the air, wind travelling outwards as he reached the end of his punch.

A light current of wind smacked against the wall.

'What!?'

Broly punched out again, producing another current that flew from fist to wall, lightly tapping it before disappearing.

'My attacks became blunter?'

Broly looked at his ki gloves confusedly, not sure how spreading out his energy increased the air resistance of his fists.

'I'll figure it out another time' Broly thought tiredly, mentally exhausted.

Although his body was in tip-top shape and his ki supply was as abundant and ever, the effects of training and manipulating his will wore out his mind much more than he anticipated, a headache growing in size.

'I made a lot of progress though,' Broly thought again, thinking of how he could slowly transform into Super Saiyan and control 20 small ki orbs at once.

'And since I know more about Yami, I can go back home'

Broly had left Planet Sythis in the first place to find himself and cool his head but the whole situation cleared way faster than he could have ever expected.

He had only left a week ago.

'I still don't think it's best to go back already'

Aspa and Paragus' words played out in his head.

"You don't need to be cooped up on this planet like we do"

"Your own adventure starts now"

Broly had understood very clearly what his father meant, while he was happy that he grew up on Sythis he knew deep down that was not where he was supposed to be. As he grew older this became more and more prevalent.

'I'll explore the universe'

That's what Broly told himself, but still he deep down had no idea what he was supposed to with his life and so he settled with being an explorer, searching through the universe until he found his purpose.

"Don't be too hard on yourself, you're only 16"

Aspa's words hit again as Broly walked out of the gym before stopping at the door.

'Maybe I'll bang out a set real quick' Broly thought craving the burning feeling in his muscles.

He powered down from his Super Saiyan state, the tension in his muscles disappearing, the pressure in his ki vanishing and his hair turning from a bright sunflower blonde to night-black in moments.

'Which machine should I go on first?' Broly thought, looking around the room.

'Decisions, decisions' he thought, finally deciding to start with the bench-press, his arms already tightening at the premise of bearing those heavy loads.

'This kid is definitely a monster' Yami thought to himself as Broly exercised, even powering down to his base form like Yami had told him to.

Yami had watched Broly's movements and ki control and came to this conclusion.

'It doesn't matter how talented you are, it is unreasonable to be able to copy something you have seen only once, let alone the whole transformation' Yami thought scheming in his mind.

Although Broly was far from mastering it he still gained access to it way too easily.

'Even among the Legendary Super Saiyan Nerd Types they still weren't as sharp and clever as Broly, who accidentally creates his own techniques'

Yami had inherited the memories of all the Legendary Super Saiyans before him and so he had accurate recollection of the personalities, habits, techniques and lives of all of them.

That was how he knew how to manipulate ki.

'Even compared to them at the middle of their lives they still weren't able to do as much as Broly, who already has a strong grip and at such a young age! If I let him mature, I'll be unable to take over!' Yami thought, unsure of what to do.

It was truly a troublesome situation.

Yami had already tasted the perfection of Broly's body and ki and was extremely unwilling to admit defeat, and if he openly opposed Broly he would undoubtedly suffer as a result of his freakish willpower.

'If there is an upside though'

Yami extended his will over Broly's brain, masking his will carefully and slowly so that he would not alert Broly.

'I'm not working alone, instead of honing his fighting instincts he spent all of his younger years developing his brain, becoming much smarter than any Saiyan has a right to be,' Yami's said, using Broly's intelligence to develop his schemes.

'That will be his undoing!'

[Storyteller: Intriguing! Will Yami, even using Broly's intelligence, be able to develop a plot so cunning and sneaky Broly will have no choice but to crumble? Find out in the next chapter of Dragon Ball Revised!]