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Divine me

Auteur: Nivlak
Fantasy
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In a world of cultivation and divine beasts, a young boy named Yu Xuan rises to prominence when his exceptional soul grade is revealed. As the successor of the divine lord, he forms a deep connection with a celestial lord tiger. With his father's guidance, Yu Xuan learns the importance of cultivating not only his skills but also his character. Eager to explore the world of cultivation, he embarks on a journey to solidify his bond with his divine companion. In a pet store filled with majestic creatures, Yu Xuan's excitement grows as he prepares to forge a powerful partnership and continue his extraordinary cultivation path.

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Ralph_Fourie
Ralph_FourieLv1Ralph_Fourie

I'm gonna give you a 4.6 The story has a very good Beginning Putting aside the flaws of Grammer syntax errors.. You can review the two chapters later. Keep up the awesome story

JALLEN
JALLENLv14JALLEN

Not trying to be mean or anything but you should review your grammar as it is quite bad. Also, don't use _ when characters are speaking use ". I only looked quickly at the chapter so I can't judge much on the story. But if you wish to get better learn the basics of grammar, at least.

Tama_Kun
Tama_KunLv3Tama_Kun

You have potential to be an author, keep your hard work

SYED_ASAD
SYED_ASADLv2SYED_ASAD

I'll be giving it a 4 star because it's just 1 chap so obviously waiting for further more. As for the story part, it's good. looking forward for more

Floxy_Belle
Floxy_BelleLv4Floxy_Belle

it's ok in a way, though you've only written two chapters. I believe it's going to be a good story, but you have to work on some things. 1 your grammar is not too ok, there are some errors there. 2 Try to correct how you punctuate words. It will make a reader understand the story more. You could ask close friends to re-read it for you. Other than these, the story is ok. Keep writing author👍 You have great potential 🤗 I'll make sure to follow up your book.

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