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DD: Heavens P

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Lin Fan had been reborn into Douluo Dalu with a cheat called the Library of Heavens Path. But he realized, that his Library of Heavens Path was very limited! And what he first got was the Heavens Path Divine Art, nothing more and nothing less. ... English is not my first language, and I used the Translator App to convert it from Indonesian to English. So, maybe a lot of sentences that look weird. Of course, I'll try to edit it as best I can. You can support me via: paypal.me/ghermansparrow13

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Chapter 1Chapter 0 : Prologue

In a simple room, there was a man watching Donghua Douluo Dalu on his computer screen.

This man watched with full concentration, and he seemed to really enjoy all the scenes in the animation.

He was Lin Fan, a 25 year old Douluo Dalu fan.

In his childhood, Lin Fan was raised in an orphanage, because he was abandoned by his parents. He never knew who his parents were, nor did he ever want to know. And when he grew up, he worked as an engine repairman.

Even though it's been 25 years, Lin Fan is still not married. He didn't know the reason, maybe because he still hadn't thought about marriage.

So, to vent his loneliness, he spends his time enjoying his hobby.

Lin Fan's hobbies are very much like today's Otaku, such as reading comics / Novels and watching Animation.

But he wasn't a rich person, so he never bought expensive things like public figure dolls.

"Quite good."

As a fan of the Douluo Dalu Novel, Lin Fan definitely liked this Donghua. But he still felt that Donghua Douluo Dalu still lacked a lot.

"In terms of graphics I think it's pretty good, it's just that it still needs improvement." Lin Fan said.

Lin Fan wasn't very good at commenting on the flaws of an Animation, and he could only quietly enjoy it.

"Well, I just want to enjoy it. There's no need to worry about other people's mistakes." said Lin Fan again.

Lin Fan then took a drink in a glass that he had provided near his computer. He took it without looking at the drink, because he was still very focused on watching Donghua Douluo Dalu.

Klang!

"Oh! Sh*t!"

But who would have thought, the drink in the glass spilled and hit the CPU of his computer. And the CPU gave off an electric spark, and gave Lin Fan an electric shock.

BZT

"Huh?"

Lin Fan could only feel himself stiffen, and didn't have time to save himself.

BZZZZTT BZZZTTTT BZZZZZT

That was the last time Lin Fan felt before entering the world of darkness.

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In a very dark room, there was a small white ball floating in the middle of the room.

The small ball is as big as a pympong ball, with a unique transparent color.

But what makes this ball strange is, this ball can make a sound.

"Hello! Is there anyone here?!"

The ball is Lin Fan!

After being electrocuted by his computer, Lin Fan was instantly trapped inside this room of darkness.

He didn't know how long he was in that place, because he couldn't count the time there at all.

To him, a second felt like a year, but a year also felt like a second.

Lin Fan didn't feel anger or fear at all, and he felt more at peace that he had never felt before. And he thought that this was the world after death.

But there was a quirk that worried him, namely, that he was neither going to heaven nor hell!

As someone who has faith, he really believes that after death he will immediately be judged for all the karma he has done.

But in reality, he was trapped in a world full of darkness!

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"Hello? I'm here!" Lin Fan's voice.

Lin Fan tried to find someone he could talk to, but he never found anyone.

After a while of trying to find someone, he finally started to give up and stopped doing it.

But who would have thought, after Lin Fan stopped making sounds, he heard the voice of someone calling out to him.

The voice was very melodious, and Lin Fan couldn't tell whether it belonged to a man or a woman.

«Lin Fan»

"!!!"

At first, Lin Fan was shocked after hearing the voice. Because, apart from being melodious, the voice also made him feel a deep warmth.

And Lin Fan couldn't make any more sound either, leaving him speechless.

«If you had the choice of reincarnation, what world would you want to be?»

Hearing the voice's question, Lin Fan subconsciously immediately thought of the world of Douluo Dalu. Even Lin Fan himself didn't know why he could think of that world instantly.

«If you were reincarnated into that world, what abilities would you have?»

Hearing the voice's question again, Lin Fan subconsciously thought about the Library of Heaven's Path ability of a certain Novel.

However, after thinking about the abilities of the Library of Heaven's Path, Lin Fan did not hear that melodious voice again.

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After a while of waiting, the voice appeared again and called his name.

«Lin Fan»

After his name was called again, Lin Fan then felt something tugging at him. He didn't know where he was being pulled from, for he felt himself being pulled from all directions.

«You get everything you want, with certain limitations. And I wish you good luck.»

After listening to it, the world of darkness that Lin Fan saw instantly changed!

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You want a review from me? This FanFiction tells of Lin Fan who reincarnated into Douluo Dalu, with a cheat called Library of Heavens Path. However, his Library of Heavens Path was limited. It's not like any Library you've ever read, which has to collect and put all the books together first. But this library has provided all the perfect techniques from the start, it's just that they are limited in number. Yes, limited. So Lin Fan wouldn't get all the techniques from the start, but one by one when he reached Rank 10, 20, 30, and so on. Of course, the Library of Heavens Path's basic abilities were still there, as it was used to check all target information. Lin Fan's Martial Spirit was very simple, not a Beast, not a Weapon, not related to God, and not from another Animation. Yes, very simple, one of them is the Spirit Body. Is there romance? Of course there is, but you have to be patient. But don't expect Harem, because I don't really like stories that contain Harem. Well, even though I'm going to decide to make a Harem, I'm only making Lin Fan have 2 Heroines. Is the story good? I don't know, I just made up what was on my mind. At least, I tried to make everything that Lin Fan did to have a plausible reason. Then, is the MC Simp? You could say yes, and you could also say no. Maybe you will complain on the part: "Why didn't the MC save his mother from the start?" "Why doesn't the MC read all the books in the Heaven Dou Empire library?" "Why didn't the MC just train in Heaven Dou Empire?" "How can the MC give a little of his strength just because of Karma?" "Why was the MC careless and entered the Spirit Beast Forest with low cultivation?" Well, maybe you can read it first. If the explanations in each chapter weren't very satisfactory, I also have nothing more to say. And there may be many other complaints, such as: 1. Spirit Bones should only come from 1,000 year old Spirit Beasts. 2. The Red Spirit Ring must have two abilities. 3. The ability of a Spirit Beast is not like that. 4. Etc. Eh? What do you expect from FanFic? You want to compare a FanFict with the Original?

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