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DC: A Spatial Manipulator

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Synopsis

An Ex-Villain as a professor? That's never going to work.

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*MALE TO FEMALE* *Please see tags before reading* *There will be romance and it'll be a slow burn F-F* *If you decide to continue reading thank you for spending your time reading my story* Immerse yourself in the multifaceted realm of Marvel's "Earth 200,000", a novel universe birthed by an omnipotent entity. Within the limitless dimensions of Marvel's cosmos, countless versions of Earth have bloomed and perished, each unique in its trajectory. Now, an extraordinary force has conceived an unprecedented experiment - a world born from the amalgamation of all its predecessors, a crucible of diverse realities. Our protagonist, a young man confined to the deathbed by an unrelenting illness, teeters on the brink of oblivion. His world dims and the inevitable darkness encroaches. Just as he prepares to surrender to the void, he awakens in an ethereal expanse of white - an interlude between his mortal life and something far beyond human comprehension. As Marvel's "Earth 200,000" materializes from the celestial chaos, our young hero embarks on an adventure of a lifetime. Navigating this remarkable world, he becomes an integral part of a realm where conventional reality bends and transcendent marvels abound. Join this exciting journey into the heart of the new Earth - an odyssey filled with wondrous explorations, daunting challenges, and unforgettable encounters. Witness as this brave new world evolves, and as our hero grapples with the incredible and the impossible

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147 Chs

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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5Klazy_Labbit

A good fic from a good author. Author has good knowledge of lore and utilises it well. The Mc is mysterious and is fleshed out well. He has space manipulation powers as stated in the title but is not one fo those flashy op types. His interactions with other villains are done well and females don't fall for him if he looks at them which is a huge plus. Characters other than mc are also portrayed well and don't feel like cardboard cutouts. The plot is interesting and we don't even know what mc wants to achieve. We discover the world through Mc's eyes and see how others react to him. Writing quality is fine, better than majority of the fics found here and nothing much to say regarding this. World background is good too. While its a fictional world from an established source, author makes it feel alive with many characters in it existing rather than a hollow world with only mc and characters he interacts with. Overall a well written fic that I enjoyed immensely and anticipate more. Way better than the shit for comics Dc produces now. I recommend it.

always_tired_
always_tired_Lv3always_tired_

so I just read through in one sitting and since reviews aren't my thing, imma keep it short. grammar is great. u won't find dumb grammar mistakes here. writing is good. kind of different from the style I'm comfortable but it still flows really well. Mc's personality is good. I'm liking him so far. This book is great and has a lot of potential. Should definitely give it a try 100%. Nothing to lose by that

The_great123
The_great123Lv12The_great123

Hello i am a reader of your other fanfic i hope you take your time with your family and i hope im not rude but can you upload the chapter from this fic too like the marvel story Hope you the best for you and see you soon i hope

AntiNoob
AntiNoobLv4AntiNoob

harem or no? If there is or there will be a harem, please put the tag. I don't like those things as it is way too overused..................

The_Damn_Crow
The_Damn_CrowLv11The_Damn_Crow

So far seems like a good story...I can tell that the author is leading up to something about his past adventures and i cant wait for it. Hopefully you continue with the story

OnePun
OnePunLv6OnePun

The character in the cover looks weird to me. The character in the cover looks weird to me. The character in the cover looks weird to me. The character in the cover looks weird to me.

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEYLv13WHAT_NO_MONEY

I rate this story, its DC, the MC isnt 1D, the side Characters aren't 2D cardboard cut outs and actually act in a somewhat realistic way. Characters are more connected to the lore In the comics, so it's obvious the author has some kind of understanding of the actual source material at least on a deeper level than most ff writers. The MC has a motivation established, an overarching plot is somewhat established, the interactions between the young justice is quite realistic. The MC is woven well into the world, his relationships are enjoyable to read about and the MC is more complex than usual.

Slyyle
SlyyleLv2Slyyle

I'm gonna be giving you a good 5 stars for everything except for Updates. The only reason is that considering the stuff you mentioned to us about your circumstances irl leaving you with little time to write. Other than that, the great author of the probable best Marvel fic on this entire site has bestowed upon us the Bible 2 which is this book. Writing Quality- Story wise the book seems rather unexplained but that's just this author's style where he starts the book with a concept and builds upon it whilst dropping hints to a bigger picture which only serves to draw readers in even more. He's also very fluent in English and very capable of writing a gripping narrative that lures readers into it. His grammar's also great, no obvious mistakes and no mind boggling bullshits. Update- Mentioned at the start, his upload schedule seems kind of sporadic from what I've seen so far. Story Development- So far the story hasn't progressed far but has reached what I consider a definitive arc where the MC Blake has started teaching, posed a good moral question and also decided what to do in his criminal-ish life. We're practically at the start of the novel obviously so there's not much to go off but considering author's previous work I doubt the development will disappoint. Character Design- The characters have depth and seem to have relations with the MC that haven't been fully explained yet but mentioned. The characters so far seem to follow their comic counterparts personality-wise rather than their awfully made DCEU counterparts. The dialogue between them is entertaining and just good enough to not be bland. Each character seems to have dimensions, not just the size of their tits but also their persona's have been shown almost fully so that we can grasp a good idea of who's going to behave how and why. World Background- not much World Building yet since it's DC's Earth, the story is obviously an AU so Author has probably made an alternate storyline for each character which he will go in depth with later. [Tl:dr] book good but few chapters:, i.e wait for releases and then binge basically .

Kreo08
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Tribune_Alpha
Tribune_AlphaLv10Tribune_Alpha

this is pretty good, all things considered. not amazing or unique, but acceptably good. MC is basically just OP + angsty backstory + somehow always right. I don't think it's done poorly, but he doesn't seem to have much going for him outside of his tropes. He feels pretty well placed into the world, though I dislike that he seems to have been at every major plot point ever. it's not a terrible thing, just somewhat boring to read. MC seems to just be upset at everything and everyone, and we're given only the bare bone basics as to why. literally everyone he meets has an angsty story with him, and they cry about it for a while. this part I dislike most, since while I am starting to like the characterization and story, throwing heavy angst without proper explanation or buildup makes it feel unearned. this also happens a LOT, like five or six times. also, arbitrary 'cant do anything to change the two sides' curse by some higher power thing, that is annoying to. I understand why the author doesn't want a seemingly unlimited reality manipulator (spacial part of the title is just... not followed up on) running around, and why that leads to mostly emotional drama that can't be easily erased from existence or chucked into the Mariana trench. TLDR: feels like the author got too caught up in their own world they forgot that a reality manipulator without limits is ungodly powerful, so arbitrary nerfed him with angst, PTSD, a godhood curse not to fight, and apathy. Simulationiously. ...really author what the f-

scias85
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Jaywolfie
JaywolfieLv4Jaywolfie

I quite liked the element of intrigue that you put the naive students through! It was quite great overall to read. I hope you can pick this back up again… provided you don’t have something more pressing in your life.

Luiz_Felipe_4800
Luiz_Felipe_4800Lv1Luiz_Felipe_4800

बहुत अच्छा काम मुझे अच्छा लगा कृपया लेखक वापस आएं बहुत अच्छा यह कहानीबहुत अच्छा काम मुझे अच्छा लगा कृपया लेखक वापस आएं बहुत अच्छा यह कहानी और बहुत अच्छी और स्वादिष्ट कहानी वह पढ़ने में बहुत अच्छी है मुझे आशा है कि अधिक अध्याय लेखक को धन्यवाद देंगे

Lordcorn
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MelinaU
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Basket_Ball_Dude
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I really liked this story. It's deeper than most of the OC inserts I've read on this website, and its enjoyable to read. Easy five stars.

Deus_Night
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Trop Bien. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Melancholic_Saturn
Melancholic_SaturnLv14Melancholic_Saturn

Kudos to the author! This is easily one of the best ff's you can read here. The OC feels really real unlike some of the protagonists in some ff's here that just feel forced or a seem like a rip-off of another character. The OC feels very original and suits so well in DC. Also, mc is a "gray" character. He labels himself as a villain but he acts like an antihero. This story is really great! Needs faster updates tho 😢

ReaderVult
ReaderVultLv4ReaderVult

Pretty gooooood, waiting for the next chaps and great fights ^^ And I like that this MC is op but in a regulated way ( not being able to destroy dimensions and send nukes to annihilate ennemies)

EroGaki
EroGakiLv5EroGaki

I though he was bald on the front lol. 😂😂😂 @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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