Klazy_Labbit
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Doesn’t matter what it does but it always makes the story feel trivial and ruins immersion.
Hmm a nice bar
will you include martial arts from other countries too?
I read that as lakwa instead of lakda lol
I just want the humans to win against animals
I like the new wave of human supremacy fics on webnovel. Finally mcs don't look for the easiest way out.
ok I thought mc would be struggling like axel from the hp fanfic till 200 chaps which is great but god it gets so annoying sometimes. This was very well done and allying with shen was a very good twist.
Now this is how an excellent neutral evil protag is written. Protag is portrayed very well and even though characters in the novel are not plot important they feel fleshed out and likeable. Overall one of the better dxd fics on this site with a better focus on actually adding to the world as opposed to just tweaking plot here and there.
I might try it but makise’s death made me sad af.
this was a great build. I might have guessed it had I not been reading this in over 40 degrees heat.
it was so good that I didn't want to ruin the happy ending so I am never gonna watch steins gate 0.....
You basically ran yourself into a wall with a protag like that. The protag not caring abt anything makes him very boring and 1d.
Jeez this guy must be fun at parties…
Red flag no.1
bruh wdym there won't be any profit with this. You get a loyal varys who won't betray as opposed to one u have to please in order to keep his loyalty.
yeah I have seen ppl say that he doesn't have to follow his mother but I have not a seen a single instance where he hasn't listened to her.
this whole orochimaru arc feels forced af. He should have nowhere enough power to pull this off and satoru doesn't need to listen to orochi as he can just threaten him. Orochi is scared of dying and will work for him for free.....Satoru is portrayed as op but can't even exert any strength against named characters.