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Comatose: Star Wars Fan Fiction

A small story in the Wolves of the Force timeline during the third year of the Clone Wars. Jedi Padawans Axle Tinguard and Ahsoka Tano crash land after nearly escaping an exploding Separatist flagship. When their escape pod smashes into the surface of an unknown foggy planet, both Padawans suffer serious injuries. On top of their dangerous situations, Axle and Ahsoka also face a new deep connection putting the Jedi code at risk. Now with no way to contact help and their wounds growing even more, Axle and Ahsoka must survive the dangerous planet.

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Run and Hide

Ahsoka's POV

I heard the sound of birds above me. I opened my eyes and stared up at a foggy dime lit sky. I looked down at Axle's chest. He was still asleep. His nice and warm breath flowed down on my breasts. I shouldn't be doing this. A Jedi can't form attachments. That's why I let Lux go. I was never truly attracted to him anyway. But Axle.....Axle was different. I felt more secure with him. We were best friends since we were little. I couldn't help but smile at the feeling of being with him. I almost forgot I was injured.

Out of nowhere I heard a large hungry roar. "That's our que to leave." Axle spoke. I had no idea he woke up. I guess the time to share feelings is over. I slowly lifted my head from his shoulder and stood up. He used the escape pod to balance himself while he got up. I wrapped his arm around me to help him stand and we started walking into the forest.

After around ten minutes Axle spoke again, "What do you think is out there?" I looked behind us, then turned back forward, "Something hungry. I sense this planet is full of hostiles." Axle nodded, "Yes. This place seems very dangerous. And we're injured too so that complicates things." We kept on walking.

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Axle's POV

We've been walking for what seemed like forever. Hours went by and we still haven't found a safe place to rest. Whatever was chasing us I could still sense coming. It felt big so it'll take some time for it to catch up. We weren't moving that fast either. It hurts to stand and it hurts to breath. There was no food to eat. The forest was absolutely dead. Fog covered the dry ground. Dust and sand made the air stiff. Ahsoka and I were covered in dirt.

After another hour Ahsoka stopped, "I need to sit. You are very heavy." I laughed a little and nodded, "That thing is still tracking us. We need a cave or something." "Do you think it's a Gundark or something?" Ahsoka asked. I paused, "No I don't think so. It feels bigger." "A Rancor?" Ahsoka asked again. I shook my head, "Bigger." She had surprised look on her face.

I looked around until I found what looked like a small cave, "There. We can rest in that cave." Ahsoka nodded, "I don't sense any lifeforms in there." "Yea, we should be safe in there." Ahsoka carried me in the dark cave. I ignited my green saber as we continued to walk. The cave didn't run deep. A dirt wall stopped us about 50 yards in. Ahsoka grabbed some dead sticks on the ground and piled them together. She sat down and leaned against the dirt wall. I struck the ground with my saber which created sparks making the pile of sticks erupt into fire. I disengaged my saber and joined Ahsoka against the wall. I groaned in more pain as I tried to fix my leg. Ahsoka turned to face me and she placed her hands on my leg, "Easy. Let me help." I let my hands relax as Ahsoka took over. She placed her hands on my chest where one of the plasma bolts hit me, "I need to remove the clothing if I'm going to treat the wounds." I hesitated, but nodded. She slowly undid my shirt robes and opened it enough to see the damage.

Ahsoka's POV

I couldn't believe it. I was staring at Axle's bare upper body. His six pack abs were tight and compact. His arms looked so much more powerful without the robes hiding them. I grabbed some water we took from the small lake and ripped a part of his shirt off to wet it. There was a huge black mark where the bolt hit. "This is gonna sting." I warned. He laid his head back and closed his eyes. I placed the cloth over the wound. He groaned in pain. I softly placed my offhand against his face. He took in short quick breaths. His eyes were still closed, but his breath slowed when I placed my hand there. I carefully cleaned up the blaster mark and slowly moved him so I could clean the one that hit his back. His torso was so solid and tight. I know it's against the Jedi code, but I'm feeling so attracted to him.

When I was finished with his back, he laid back down. His ribs were messed up, but so were mine. I had to lay down. I finished cleaning up Axle's leg and I looked up. He lifted his head and opened his eyes halfway. Our faces were inches away. I moved a little closer. I kept my eyes on his lips. They looked so tender and tasty. I moved my body upwards from his leg and squatted above his waist. I felt so turned on by this. I lowered myself until I was sitting on his lap. It was like a booster seat because now I was a little taller than him. I placed my hands on his shoulders. My right arm still felt a little painful, but I didn't care. Our lips got closer together. Neither one of us spoke a word. We shared mixed feelings. He looked down at my cleavage several times. That turned me on even more. Our lips were so close I felt his breath against mine. I felt his hands brush against the outside of my thighs. They slowly moved up under my skirt and massaged my waist. I closed my eyes and moaned softly. We both knew what we were thinking. The hell with the Jedi code. I Moved my lips to meet his. It felt so good. I opened my mouth and he slowly moved his tongue in. Our tongues fought for dominance and explored every inch of our mouths. Axle moved his hands up my skirt even more until he was right above the sweet spot. I moaned loudly through our kiss. I wrapped my arms around his back and pulled myself against his chest. He moaned with me. We never broke the kiss. We both fell asleep after what felt like an eternity.