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Burning Strings: A warlock of the Magus world Fanfic

Auteur: evodbz134
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What is Burning Strings: A warlock of the Magus world Fanfic

Lisez le roman Burning Strings: A warlock of the Magus world Fanfic écrit par l'auteur evodbz134 publié sur WebNovel. A new soul reincarnates but did he reincarnate or merely an illusion of his mind. If he did then why did he? Will he survive in this unforgiving world.Will he be destined to damnation like the ones th...

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A new soul reincarnates but did he reincarnate or merely an illusion of his mind. If he did then why did he? Will he survive in this unforgiving world. Will he be destined to damnation like the ones that came before him or can he cut the strings and be free of the puppeteer? A new protagonist, a new path, a new adventure. Why does this world inspire so many different worlds? What happened to the original Fang Ming? Who could use a rank 9 magus as entertainment or more specifically what? What is the truth of this world? Is this a dream or a nightmare? Is it heaven or maybe it is hell. ........................................Warlock of Magus World Fanfic............................... 7000 words a week. this will be a bit trippy. it will have many Sci-fi and Fantasy concepts it will also dance more towards cosmic horror. I don't own anything relating to Warlock of The Magus World. this is my first peice of litrature. I hope you enjoy it

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evodbz134
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Obligatory self review. This is my first piece of writing if you have any criticism please leave it down in the comments. I have no one to proofread yet if someone wants to volunteer just comment below.

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Hello. How are you, translator, dear to my heart? Before I start my speech, I want to ask you a question: Will you complete this very beautiful novel? . And now I will give my assessment of this novel. The novel has potential because of its writer. I liked the idea that starting from Leylin's birth this will allow him to get to know them and allow the hero to build an affection for them as well as a personality. But there is a small negative point that I personally did not like, but it is not a big thing for me, which is “skipping the training and penetrations of the knight and the great knight.” I hoped that you would not skip these things and go deeper into the topic of herbs, not skip, that would be better and build Greater depth to the story and it will build, and the details and depth will build an emotion and attachment to the novel from the "scenes", which leads to the viewer's love for the novel, but I personally think that this thing or topic will not continue until our hero reaches the power of magicians. I hope that the skipping periods in the academy and Others, too, would be a beautiful thing if you gave the hero charisma strength in the convoy heading to the witches' port. According to the character of the hero, I have no objection to making the hero the merchant controlling trade. I support you in that, and it will also be better if you make the hero not think and do not help anyone except for a great benefit without major negatives, except for his family and those close to him. That will also be the credit. It would be better if you made him do anything or any other way to get stronger and faster also I hope you don't make the hero go to the side of the white wizards it will be boring... If you make him stay on the side of the black wizards it will be better and more interesting like that He remains on the side of the first academy, but of course, after he gets rid of the inheritance problem and abuse of that family, that is, if you make the hero kill the owner of the other special inheritance map to die in the bloodbath, the problem will be solved and I hope you make the hero take care of the family from which he came from after For the hero to settle, of course, such as making the family send people who have wizards' abilities and the hero strengthens the family with them is also better not to make the hero leave the Southern Continent until you reach the peak of rank 3 or in the middle. You can skip the Twilight Realm because it is not important for events much. chapters or more. This is my message that I wanted to convey to you. I told authors before you that, some of them heard my words succeeded, but did not complete, and some of them did not hear my words at all, and you have the choice. And hello, and thanks for reading my comment

yuoyuo5
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great start, hope to see end of it ........................................................................................................................

Pirate_King0
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please add more chapters brother i really liked your novel and there are many more like me 😃

Nevermindthename
NevermindthenameLv13Nevermindthename

Pretty good writing quality and exceptional compared to the usual found on this platform, the few mistakes I found were mostly typos. Interesting plot so far. 5 stars since read worthy WMW fanfics are rare.

Mv_Op
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SIN3
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kikna007
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its a good start, but where are the updates?

jadelizard
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Darklord912
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Very good writing till now, you got the essence of WMW. If author can keep the pace and dose not copy paste the sequence of the original work. His novel will become his best starting point in his writer journey

OukisLips
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This is really good! The grammar could use some work, but the update speed, story development, character design and world background are all top notch!

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