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BLUE FLAMES

Auteur: Kirigaya_22
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This story follows a twenty year old man named Stephan Kane. Stephan was from a poor family that was barely able to pay for basic necessities like food and a decent education. But thanks to his high performance in the slumps called his high school, Stephan was given a scholarship to study in one of the most profound universities in all the continent. Peer pressure led to Stephan slacking off in college, leading to him being withdrawn and sent back to live with his parents. Being an only child, Stephan and his parents lived in a tier 5 city, where robbery and kidnapping was the order of the day. Ever since the awakening; an unexplainable phenomenon where the earth underwent a chain reaction due to the adverse effects of global warming and green house gas, humanity have discovered their once normal earth to be filled with life energy called mana. This was the first time in over a thousand years that humanity was facer with such a power. The human body was unable to handle such an unprecedented power. Only those with a high immune system are able to withstand the rigors of mana. Those who do so are able to unlock magical abilities, allowing them to surpass their fellow humans and break the laws of science! The Awakening had also affected the Kane Family greatly. His father, Lukas Kane, was once a well renounced scientist who worked fkr the military, but after the awakening, he was displaced from the working population, seemingly because he was too outdated and they needed y

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Review for a read until chapter 8. I will never understand the appeal of systems for readers nor what motivates authors to purposefully go against the core of story writing. Putting Grammer and my bias aside, there are unsalvageable mistakes that makes the read unpleasant. The prologue is not catchy at all. It simply follows the bland current of a river mechanically that I can't fathom to understand. It's too normal, too peaceful, too nothing. I want something exci ING or thought provoking that makes we want to read the next chapter, ignoring the small scale of them. The characters are, well, I can't give my opinion on them because I wasn't given the chance to meet them. Who is the Mc and why am I following him in the journey? Not a shred of personality, monologue or otherwise. It makes or breaks a story. The world is never described. Vague mentions of them aren't enough. Making them too detailed is undeniably tedious and unnecessary, I understand, but a middle ground must be found else leave the readers confused. What does the magic school look like, is it hogwards like or modern campus like? What is the buses color, the street, is the sky normal or is green light the norm? I have no idea because they were never briefly touched on. The pace needs to be be slowed down with these corrections. I hope you get better at writing.

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