I decided to rewrite with a slower pace and different time frame with power slightly weaker like Viltrumite or Saiyan powers. I'll still do the Warhammer 40k stuff but it would be a lot slower pace and go more in depth.
As for harem, I'll go a lot slower than normal. he won't be Tony's brother anymore and instead just some random kid.
but to confirmed
rewrite?
continue?
any suggestions on this new rewrite give me.