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Black Rinnegan In The Rain Village

Auteur: PerSiMa
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Mia, I don't want to go for party what I will do there I don't know anybody they are your and Gavy's friend Sharry don't make excuse you need to come with enjoy yourself always reading novels will not get you friends Mia I understand what you saying I also want to have fun but these parties make me more shallow Ok you come with us and if you not feel good you can always come back home I promise I will not force you  Are we ok with this Hmmm but I don't have anything to wear and look at my hair always clumsy Sharry don't worry I Will fix it every thing today I have a feeling you will meet someone nice Ohhh pls Mia not again there is no prince charming and there's no happy ending atleast from where I stand You always being negative how you can say you can't get happy ending my sister can get anything and look at yourself even though you faced so many things in life you are still strongly standing on your foot noone can say anything against  my sister Oh Mia love you so much you are the one who gave me confident otherwise I would have ended somewhere else Ok enough of these talks let's get ready for party today let's have fun and I promise with me and Gavy you will not get bored Ok ok let's get ready but warn you tomorrow I have meeting in office so I don't want to be late and no too much drinking Fine miss professional now let's get ready Mia this dress have deep neck and it's small I can't wear this Just try once for me I am sure you will like it Pls pls pls Ok fine you always make me do whatever u want Haha that's what the benefit of being younger sis Yes my sweet little sis How I am looking??? Ohhh superb let me do your make up and hair than you will look dazzling Don't you think it's bit overdo Cmon sis it's not too much it's you thinking too much Gavy: sharry! Wow you looking nice looking different.  I...I mean beautiful ( his mouth was open and look was totally mesmerised like he seen her first time) Sharry: Gavy don't lie I know it's not me I am looking awful Mia: Sharry don't do this I know my sis is beautiful and you need to change your dressing style some days after all it's grand party you can meet so many people Gavy: ok if you girls are ready shall we leave otherwise it will be long queue and we will not get proper parking Ohk let's go!!!! AT PARTY PARKING LOT Mia it's Vivanta Taj whose party is this I don't think I should come with you there might be too many people over there and might due to my clumsiness I do something awful I don't want to embarrass you both I will take taxi and leave Sherry are you so party pooper trust me nothing will happen just come out of car now we are getting late Gavy: sharry don't worry we are there just take a long breath and come. you being too nervous I know after such a long time you attending a party like this is making you feel like this .... After taking a long breath sharry finally come out of car and accompany them Now what going to happen in party does sharry will meet someone or whether she will do something to embarrass all or might once she put her guard down and enjoy a little What you think!!!!

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Paracetam0l
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No, I'm a big supporter……………………………………….lol

PerSiMa
PerSiMaAuteurPerSiMa

i'm my biggest supporter [img=Your move]

Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10Luizz_Ricardo

I love the world of Naruto and I've always enjoyed reading fanfics from this world, Rinnegan is one of my favorite powers in fiction, but I can't read this fanfic, lots of nonsense, very forced script, poorly developed dialogues

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2Lv2InfinityWolfS2

O enredo é bem fraco, até o capitulo 15 a história se resume em um MC perdido, quando falo perdido falo do proposito, ele não tem nenhum propósito até agora, ele meio que quer vingar sua irmã que foi morta, oque é meio confuso de como ela esta lá, muito pouca informação. Esses capítulos se resume em ele treinando e sendo capturado varias vezes sem mal poder fazer nada. desempenho bem baixo. Falta explicação dos poderes dele, ele não tenta nada para descobri-los apenas leva como normal as coisas que tem oque é bem sem noção. Deixo essa novel no capitulo 15, pois não tenho muita esperança; Mesmo assim boa sorte autor(a).

Cosmic_Observer
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Masterpiece, best one so far. Keep going with the great work! The work itself is a feast for the senses. The stunning beauty of form intertwines with the depth of meaning, creating a symphony of aesthetics and intellect that captures the soul of the viewer.

Kotuka
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GIMME MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

Light_Shadow_
Light_Shadow_Lv1Light_Shadow_

Until now there is an interesting development, I am curious about the development of this “mysterious power” in addition to his dojutsu, just please, more independence for the MC and create cool powers

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