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Awakening the Ancient System

Eastern Fantasy
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What is Awakening the Ancient System

Lisez le roman Awakening the Ancient System écrit par l'auteur DaoistHolySwitch publié sur WebNovel. This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation.[Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry...

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This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation. [Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry] please your vote, critics and reviews would be appreciated

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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureLv13Justin_Gabventure

I like the book, it's interesting and easy going. I must say, the author has put much effort in the plot of this work, I like this book and I highly recommend this book to whosoever is reading this

SolomonCliff
SolomonCliffLv1SolomonCliff

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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

I'll give you the 5 stars when you edit the first chapter to a point where it's readable and when you post a second chapter. Just DM me on Discord and I'll do it immediately 😁👍

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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DaoistHolySwitch
DaoistHolySwitchAuteurDaoistHolySwitch

This my beginning but not the end, tryna make sure u receive the best i can offer guys read and make your reviews. I'm here always to receive your critics and know one which could be of a help

Janjao
JanjaoLv1Janjao

The way you wrote at the beginning was really enjoyable. However, after that, I just sort of zoned out a bit. As a non-native, I'm kind of overwhelmed. The fact that I don't read much doesn't help me in this situation at all. But I can see that you did give it some thoughts Story development i don't see yet (or i zoned out and did not notice im very sorry if i did) I'll give you four and more. Keep up the good work

Aug_ust15
Aug_ust15Lv2Aug_ust15

Woah😍😍😍 this is a beautiful piece of art. The novel is wonderful, with detailed explanation and everything just makes it eye-catching. Keep it coming 👍👍

Twin_Lantern
Twin_LanternLv3Twin_Lantern

Its quite good and I'm curious about the main character. The first chapter is too long if you ask me, with so much info it looks a bit oversaturated but I'm confident it will be better after editing.

Anniasa_Uchiha
Anniasa_UchihaLv1Anniasa_Uchiha

I love this story it is a good and I want more to this story. I love how everyone is acting together. I would recommend this story to anyone. [img=recommend] keep on writing

Parnellis
ParnellisLv1Parnellis

The writing quality is very satisfactory, the usage of words are exceptional although quite a number of them seems to be gramatically incorrect. The stability of updates is considerably slow for a second chapter that only lasts a few hundred words, but we'll have to see. It's the Story Development that I can't comment on, I have yet to see an actual development but there has only been 2 chapters published so far, so once again, we'll have to see. The Character Design is very generic, nothing too special. There has been a minimal amount of character interactions both between the characters to reader and a character to another character. World Background is not yet to be described in detail, the only thing I've seen so far is that it just seems like a modern setting.

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsuLv2ShadowAmeratsu

The writing quality could use a bit of work, but it has a great concept behind it. With a bit of editing, it could get 5 stars, easily. It has good characters and a nice plot, so I'm hoping to see more of this :)

Darkness_Descends
Darkness_DescendsLv3Darkness_Descends

A good read and a well worded novel with great grammar, systems seems to be theme but this is quite unique, hoping to see more chapters as I have great aspiration for this novel

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