Second Draft

First I made the draft in MS WORD then I use tools from the last chapter to solve the problem.

Transverse System: I became Conan's Big Brother

In a mansion a 16-17 year boy with confidence is narrating, how the crime has been committed step by step in this manson.

But the confidence boy isn't our protagonist, but protagonist small brother Shinichi Kudo and our protagonist is the person who is drooling in these group of people like a sleepherd at one corner,

Well this person is Shinichi Kudo big cousin brother, that Shinichi's Father biological brother son who has opened the detective agency here and came to solve the case along with his small brother but the scene here is bit out of place.

As for his family that has been dead in car accident when he was 5 years old only and from then he is living with Shinichi Kudo's family only and just a year ago he has came back to japan and opened a detective agency after making up his mind to live alone but the problem is he is a reasoning idiot so he has asked his famous high school detective or cousion brother to solve the case.

Now that's what happening here as we are seeing that our protagonist is sleeping peacefully but be careful he isn't our protagonist now he will come with a transverse system and how he will cpme here I will tell you now please wait for a while after solving the case.

As I described the situation here so now comes important part of solving the case and Case is a Murder's Case of a woman is being killed.

Shinichi has find the Murderer and solving the case and started saying.

"Yes"

" The culprit jumped from one window to another"

" Before anyone heard the victim's scream and came running "

" And we know this because there is no footprints outside the window"

" it's not even 2 metres to climb up the wall to roof"

As soon has Shinichi completed saying this some knowledgeable person jumped and started shouting

" They're 5 metres apart "

" It wouln't occurred to me had I not known this house unique structure "

" That's ridiculus"

But Shinichi ignored these comments and carried on

" And at the time there was only person who could walk throughout the house unsuspected"

And the host the person whose wife is killed also shouted angrily

" Out with it who was it"

" Who's the filthy murderer who killed my wife"

And the answer to this question is given by Shinichi by pointing at the old person around 50-60 year old sitting on the wheel chair and Shinichi pointed him and said

" It was you Sir! The host!!"

It was said with so much confidence that the sleeping dork also wake up and heard the answer and subconsciously shouted

" That's riduculuos that person has fractured leg how can he kill someone by jumping here and there?"

Shinichi also turned his heard to that after hearing the question and said smilingly

" Come on brother just live this things to me it's gonna be solved in a jiffy and also the host can walk just wait and watch brother."

After Hearing the brother's chat host also smile and saod

" Stop joking"

"Look at my legs it's still… "

Shinichi smiled and replied

" You should give up the acting sir it's wretched "

Seeing that the host still sitting there Shinichi kicked the wheelchair and the host stood up and there came the exclamation around him

"Sir your leg"

And Shinichi's big brother also became wide-eyed muttering himself so he can walk

As the host keep thinking about how to solve the problem

As he can is thinking about how to solve the problem the annoying voice keeps going on

" Your leg has already healed 3 months ago isn't that inspeactor megure"

Shinichi turned towards his other side and there was standing a large man with a thick mustache and thick eyebrows who was wearing his regular brown colored trench coat and hat suit.

And replied to Shinichi's words

" Give it up!!! Your doctors told us everything "

Seeing that he can't come out clean the host started making gateway towards the gate to run

But on his gateway was standing the same sleepherd who looks like 22 year old and was looking handsome with his white shirt and black pant and shoes only if you remove the drool that proves that he was sleeping till now

The moment the host rab towards him he sleepy eyes became sharp and seeing that the host won't stop and still keep running towards him, the moment came near him tried to push him down he griped his coat and tossed him on the floor over his head with a bang.

The moment he tossed him on the floor and looked up, he can see a globe was wising towards him at great speed.

Seeing the globe coming towards him he just ducked subscosiously and glared towards shinichi saying

"Come on see where are you kicking it towards "

Seeing the globe is going to hit his brother instead of the host Shinichi also made a sorry face and said

" My bad brother just last time again"

And the brother keep muttering last time again I don't when it will end.

Seeing that the host has been on the ground Inspector Megure and other police officer came and apprehended the host and thanked both the brothers and said farwell

Seeing that the case has been solved and the people were also leaving Cousin brother looks towards Shinichi and Said sourly " Here comes another commisiion, Next time I won't bring you with me"

Seeing his brother's hapless look Shinichi also soothed and said

" Let's go back and enjoy the day as the case here has been solved the guest also going back"

" Yeah "

As a result to their departure Shinichi went back to his house and as for the Big brother he went back to his detective agency which was the next street to Mouri detective agency.

As soon he came back to his agency he sat down on the chair and opened a beer bottle and started drinking and as he keep drinking his vision and conscious keep getting blurry.

And as he keeps drinking he also want to watch some TV and as soon as he thought of watching TV He stands up shakingly and walked towards the TV.

While walking towards the TV something came under his feet and he slipped and the moment he slippend he fell down on the floor with his head hitting the edge of table and it started bleeding.

As he was drunked and didn't know what happened and knocked down and lost conscious and that won't open his eyes again.

That's how the first canon fodder character died.

In the vast universe at some place in a small house of white color, that was floating there without movement in this vast sretchtch of space.

In this vast strech of space around the house there was nothing more than a blanket of blackness like a total dead zone without the hope of a single life, where there is no light, no noise nothing and only this small house was a proof of anything of life here.

But the situation inside the house was different here, a boy of around 18-19 year was sleeping on a piece of white bed with faint mist covering his body and a mechanical voice can be heard in the room.

" Soul extraction successful"

" Mission Completed in the XXXXXX World"

" Fusion of soul and body successful"

" Memory extraction of XXXXX world successful"

" Memory saved "

" Memory adjustment successful"

" Soul promoted to Tier 2"

" Body awakening initializing"

" Body Status healthy"

" Body vital Function Stable"

" Body nervous system working"

" Body ready to awaken"

The moment mechanized voice finished speaking the body on the white bed which is made of unknown material but just by seeing that bed one can feel holy feeling submerging the body but now on the this material a boy was opened his eyes was staring on the ceiling which is also of white color in a daze.

In span of minutes after reorganizing the existing memory the boy snapped out of his daze and a sharp looked appeared in his eyes and instantly sat down on the bed and spoke in a low voice

" Lily how much time will I will be staying here this time. "

As soon as asked the question a naïve little girl voice came in the room

" Big brother you will be only staying for 3 days this time. "

" Just 3 days Huh, it's much more than last time"

"Yes Big brother this time you completed all the mission with Z rating"

"Keep working hard big brother. "

" You will surely live this place."

As soon as the naïve little girl fininshed speaking the boy started laughing silently as it has heard the biggest joke in this life.

But he didn't respond to this girl voice as he know she was only made as companion for him to talk to in this small completely sealed white house

Where there was only a single bed on one side and other side was a big screen which was displaying his present attributes and count down to next world and small options in a corner where he can choose different food and recreation option.

He don't know how much time has passed in this way of living just live here for a few days then go on to next world to complete my mission and after that erase the memory of the mission and back here.

He don't know how much cycle has passed in this way of life but he knows that there is a way to end the cycle which he had heard from lily and that is to reach the Tier 10 soul power but he didn't know why the soul power is still there is at Tier 1.

So as days passed by he stopped checking attributes as to stop giving myself a false hope.

And this system which has attached itself to me and asked me to do mission is called the Transvers System which tranverse in the multiverse with me and help me finish the mission.

As he was mulling over all these things a naïve girl voice can be heard again in joyful voice

" Big brother your soul has been promoted to Level 2 "

" Big brother aren't you happy now"

As soon he heard the joyful naïve voice smile appeared on his face and asked enthusiastically

" Lily what are you saying it is true?"

" My soul level has increased"

" Yes big brother you can see on the screen" the naïve voice said joyfully as she was also happy seeing his big brother being so happy.

As soon the boy heard the voice he looked towards the screen and clicked the attributes and its expanded showing

Identity :-- Nitin

System :- Transverse System

Soul Level :- Teir 2

Body Level :- Teir 2

Mission Points :- 10

Skills list :- Sealed

As soon Nitin saw that the soul level has been upgraded to level 2 he became happy as it proves that there is as way to reach Tier 10 and leave this closed room and Retrieve all the memories and to know form where I came and why I am trapped here.

Seeing the happiness on Nitin face lily also said chirpily her voice like cuckoo bird

" Isn't lily right big brother, You has been promoted level 2"

" Yes lily you are right your big brother has been finally prmoted"

" haha big brother party time"

As soon as sentence completed a digital projection of 7-8 year little girl with a doll face wearing a white frock appeared in front of Nitin and happily jumped in his embrace.

Seeing the lillte girl jumping in his embrace Nitin also smiled and picked her up and smiled and replied to her " Next 3 days is gonna be party time"

As soon as Nitin said this sentence he clicked the food menu ordered the food which instantly appeared in front of him and then also clicked the recreation menu and started playing game with lily.

And the next 71 hours 59 minutes he enjoyed the time with lily while playing games a oriole like laughter can be heard always once a while and while hearing this laughter there will be always a smile on Nitin's face as he enjoyed the break time with her.

As the last minute of his stay arrived all the options was removed from the display and only a the decreasing time can be seen.

Which means it was the time to end the party and get ready to adenture in new world.

So seeing the that it was decreasing he sail Goodbye to Lily

Lily also looked pitifully and with tears streaming in her eyes said

" Big brother come early this time "

" Lily is alone here without big brother"

Nitin soothed Lily for a while and seeing that he has calm down and only 10 seconds remain he also laid down on the bed.

The moment timer hit 0 Nitin entered slumber the room also became dim just like before and only a single mechanized voice can be heard.

" Soul extraction Successful"

" Body stable"

" Soul sending program initializing"

" Soul transportation starting"

" Soul Transported To Detective Conan world"

" Soul transportation Successful"

The moment the mechanized voice completed the last command it became still and the home also became just like the starting.

In the dim house a female voice can be heard

" Nitin show me what you can do this time"

In the dimly lit room with only flashes of the sunlight which comes from the gaps of the closed curtain.

A mechanized voice can be heard

" Found a compatible body"

" Body status dead"

" Body vital staus stable"

" Body and soul fusion initializing"

" Body and soul fusion starting"

" Body and soul fusion successful"

"system binding initializing"

" System binding started"

" System Binding completed"

Just as the words fininshed the room plunge in the silence

A boy with black hairs and which shirt along with black pant with athletic build body can be seen lying on the ground with head covered in blood.

The boy just opened his azure eyes and the moment he opened his eyes pain came rushing him from his head so the the boy holded the head his head and keep crying in pain.

Holding his pain back, the boy raised his head and look around himself and thought

" Where am I "

The moment boy asked this question a wave of memories keep rushing in his mind with icreased the pain in the head and boy can be seen rolling on the floor while crying out in pain.

As the pain subsided the boy opened his azure eyes and looked at his surrounding then went to sit on the chair behing the table which was all messy and holded up the newspaper to look through.

As the boy look through the newspaper he also switched on the TV and start organizing the memories of the original body as it was nothing special to be born in an unknown body.

As the boy organized his memories he came to know his name is Nitin Kudo and he has opened this detective agency to find his parents murderer.

A voice from the Television disturbed him

"There is only one truth, and the prisoner is..."

"If there is a case that is difficult to solve, just go to me, Shinichi Kudo!"

"The famous detective Shinichi Kudo, Sherlock Holmes in Heisei's time, can even be said to be the Savior of Japanese police, now suddenly lost news..."

In a cluttered office, the TV is constantly broadcasting news.

Seeing the news he also remembered that that person on the TV is his small brother Shinichi Kudo which helps him solve the cases that has been commissioned at his detective agency.

As Nitin sorts out his memories he also sorted out all the things related memories of the body Nitin Shinichi.

After sorting out the memories of the body Nitin familiarly called in low voice " Sysytem"

And like a magic a small interface popped up in front of him

Tranverse System

Name:- Nitin Shinchi

Age :- 22

Strength : 5

Endurance : 5

Power : 5

Agility : 5

Speed : 7

Mainline mission :- 1) Destroy the Black organization

2) Protect Shinichi Kudo from the Black Organization

Branch Mission :- Find whereabouts of Shinichi Kudo

Mission points:- 0

Detective Points :- 0

Skills :- Judo (elementary level 2 ) Kendo(Elementary level 3) Observation( Elementry Level 1)

Nitin raised his eyebrow and saw the status of the body and said condensicly

" Its pathetic just above the average person limitations"

" Well it's better than nothing and you also have to investigate about the black organization"

" Why the hell would I have to keep that kid safe, He is a grown up now."

" Whatever well let's take it one step at a time and find him first"

As he watched the status window a gift icon can be seen blinking on the right side of the status window so he clicked the icon.

As soon he clicked the gift icon it becomes and a voice can be heard saying Novice gift pack deleivered.

So seeing the bigger icon he again clicked and a Gun, 5 black cards and A golden card can be seen on the screen.

Seeing the gift pack opened Nitin also said with

Seeing the status window Nitin also came to realize that the first thing to be done is to find the shinichi kudo and my mission in this world is gonna be related to him only.

Meeting Edogawa Conan

5th block Beika Town District

In a bustling street

At the lot number 54 which is a 3 story building where the ground floor is locked right now and an entrance can been seen which coneects the first floor and the second floor.

The floor front is fully glass made and in a bold and big text Akimitsu Detective Agency and that was Nitin detective office which is now can seen organized, neat and tidy.

And the same staircase leads to a second floor which is 3BHK and right now,

In a room on the 2nd floor in a building a boy can been seen cleaning and straighten out the room and arranging all the things in neat and tidy manner and can also be heard murmuring

" What a slovenly fellow, can't even keep his house clean"

" I am cleaning this house for past 4 hours and still kitchen and other bedroom is left"

As Nitin was cleaing the house a bell can be heard in below office and an anxious voice seem to heard

" Anyone there, Please open the door"

Hearing the anxious voice a familiar feeling sprung up in his mind but he can't remember where he heard his voice but he still moved his body towards the office.

As he descended from the 2nd floor he can see a a light-skinned girl of average height. She has big bluish-purple eyes and dark brown hair. Her hair is straight and hip-length, tucked behind her ears with short wavy bangs over her forehead which makes a stylized triangular point. She is slender in frame, yet sports an athletic and curvaceous build plus noticeably well-endowed.

she can be described as angelic beauty but that beauty is being wrecked by the anxious expression and as soon as Nitin saw a girl a name came out of his mind Ran Mouri my little brother childhood friend or childhood sweethearts to be more precise.

Ran has been ringing the bell for more than 5 minutes and still no response was there so she became more anxious as now that Shinichi has disappeared for more than 3 days will Nitin-kun will also be disappeared with him.

Did something happed to them as negative thougts were swirling in her mind she became more and more anxious and srated yelling on top of her voice

" Anyone there "

Seeing that there were still no noise after this she became and dejected and returning home as she turn round to return she heard footsteps coming from above and as soon she turned her head she saw s boy standing there with a his favorite white T-shirt and black lower and a warm smile held on his mouth looking at her.

Nitin also felt happy after seeing her as he had assimilated his memories he also assimilated his feeling like her predecessor, after all he treated her like his little sister.

Nitin smiled at her and said with a frown

" Ran-chan what are you doing here in such a hot weather and even when the sun is at the apex too"

Seeing the frown on Nitin face Ran also hurriedly gave an explanation saying

" Nitin Nii-san it's been 3 days I have been unable to contact Shinichi and neither you so I came to check on you too see whether you too have disappeared liked shinichi"

Nitin also realized the main problem as he hasn't looked and date after waking up seeing the messy office an dnoon.

Nitin replied at her with smile

" Ran-chan Shinichi is a mystery otaku I am an reasoning idiot so where I can go"

Ran replied without thinking

" It true too"

Just after Speaking Ran realized her mistake looked at face which had black lines and glaring at her and panicked

But before Ran can say anything Nitin entered the office and a voice can be heard

" I am not so brilliant like your boyfriend so what I can do about this.

Hearing Nitin said Shinichi being her boyfriend Ran face also turned red but remembering her words she also regretted, feeling sorry

" Nitin Nii-san I am sorry, I don't mean that way"

A voice can be heard from inside

" Okay okay I know you a kind gril Ran-chan so I already forgive you"

" Just come inside now and sit here and talk, And Let us discuss about how to find your boyfriend"

Hearing the voice from inside and Ran also enter inside but just after stepping inside she gawked at the clean and organized and she had been here many times which also been messy. Then she used the clean it to make it liveable.

But this time seeing such a neat and clean she was just dumfounded is ogling at everthing with big eyes just as she was distracted a voice brought her back

" Ran-chan don't open your big anymore otherwise it will fall on, come sit here I have poured a water for you to drink. "

Hearing the voice also came back at her senses and came sat down on the other side of the sofa and looked at Nitin with scrutinizing eyes and said

" Nitin Nii-san you have changed a lot, I just didn't met you for three days and you have cleaned up your messy office. "

Seeing Ram inquiring eyes Nitin also secretly became vigilant and thought

Does she became suspious from me, but it's true after all I have an OCD and can't see littered things just had to make her believe her that I am changing.

So Nitin also replied back

" Ran-chan I also want to change, can't always want to depend on Shinichi to solve the case and you to clean my house"

" I have to make myself self-dependent to so I stop worrying people who cares about me "

" Well that's true "

" So I just started with the most easiest one"

" Well that's good too, ah Just like you Why can't my father also change like you."

Nitin secretly thought that " The pervert geezer will never change "

Nitin also felt the topic was going off-direction so he changed the topic

" Say Ran-chan why are you looking for me anxiously "

Hearing Nitin asking about the reason she came here, Ran also forget about the topic and also stop inquiring about him and said anxiously

" Nitin Nii-san I feel something bad happended to Shinichi, Why don't you look for him"

" My father isn't listening to me and I also asked Megure-keiji but he also said Shichi might be on some case He will contact you later"

" But Nitin Nii-san I have a feeling that something definitely happened to him "

Hearing her words Nitin also get serious as his first mission is also to find Shinici Kudo and listening to her it seems something might happened to him.

So after hearing her words Nitin also seriously replied

" Ran-chan I trust you, I will go look after his whereabout and trying to find him"

" You should go back for now"

Seeing Nitin believe him she also feels relieved but after hearing he will alone look after her she distressedly said to her

" I will also go with you "

Seeing her like this Nitin know it will not be conducive for the search Nitin started reassuring Ran that he will definitely search of her.

After soothing her and sending her back Nitin sat on the chair and started thinking where to start looking for Shinichi.