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ATLA: The Master

Auteur: Karito_
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What is ATLA: The Master

Lisez le roman ATLA: The Master écrit par l'auteur Karito_ publié sur WebNovel. What would happen if a chance was given to a man? A chance to rewrite history that he once thought to be fiction, and change both himself and the world. For the better or worse, follow Kypher as he su...

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What would happen if a chance was given to a man? A chance to rewrite history that he once thought to be fiction, and change both himself and the world. For the better or worse, follow Kypher as he survives in a world he was destined for... I'll try to update once a day. No harem, always hated them. Ps. I do not own any of the characters except of my original ones.

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Karito_
Karito_AuteurKarito_

Shameless Author here.. Thank you for trying to read my novel. As I said any and all advice in writing is helpful So please, if you do leave a review, I would always appreciate the commentary and advice. Thanks [img=recommend]

Corbin_Penniman
Corbin_PennimanLv4Corbin_Penniman

wow no harem for that alone I'm giving you a five stars and I haven't even read the story yet.

InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint

"God gives me wishes" story. ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..: ..:

sapient
sapientLv4sapient

i dont care what anyone says. the wish were not wishes.

Nightwolf2728
Nightwolf2728Lv4Nightwolf2728

The novel has a lot of potential and overall is really good. I hope to read more in the future.

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1malinizgeldii

I left it in chapter 4. dude couldn't be more inconsistent. Avatar wanted to be born 4 years before he was born and the main plot ended in about 2 years. that means 6 years after the defeat of the fire king, with a time jump of 10 years. I think you wanted to write 18 or 14 but you didn't. It's also ridiculous that the fate of the world is trying to kill him while simultaneously fighting the fire king. He should have expected to be at least 18. Besides, why does he live in the earth kingdom when he is a fire and airbender? I don't get it mate. Are you really just writing to write? You have to take a little care. I definitely do not recommend the novel. different ATLA ff's are much better.

ToYourKnight
ToYourKnightLv4ToYourKnight

I am loving the first ten chapters the creative use of bending and explanations for his knowledge are brilliant, I am loving the character depictions. My only problems are the lack of development in the mc's second bending (but if you know what it is, it makes sense why he hasn't trained it much), the occasional moment with toph were the author forgets mc is wearing a mask and toph only sees in sonar. The biggest problem is that im going to have to wait for the next chapter. THANK YOU KARITO_!

Insert_Here
Insert_HereLv13Insert_Here

I chose violence today [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Strugurel_Covaciu_8581
Strugurel_Covaciu_8581Lv4Strugurel_Covaciu_8581

this is so good thank you author for this amazing story the MC personality is amazing, the story is interesting that all I have to say you should read it yourself again thank you author for this amazing story

KaiserXIII
KaiserXIIILv6KaiserXIII

I want to preface this by saying good things about this story first: If you want something to read, this is something to read. Other people think this is good, so you might think this is good too. Now that that's out of the way, this is really hard to read. I don't want to bash this story, but it's like there's no thought put into it. One such instance happens very early, where MC chooses to be a fire bender, and then CONSCIOUSLY chooses to be born in Ba Sing Se. Another would be the naming. The world of ATLA and ATLOK are heavily inspired by Asian cultures, mainly Chinese and some Japanese, names included. The fact that the author would disregard that so blatantly is an insult to the original series. It's not my thing, but others liked it, so maybe you would like it too.

Celleborn
CellebornLv2Celleborn

If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. I don't say that to be mean, but come on, I just want to know the basic before I put my time into reading this.

uSeer
uSeerLv5uSeer

Révéler le spoiler

Mysteries_
Mysteries_Lv11Mysteries_

Hey, this is really great, I think it was the best Avatar fanfic I've found so far, the author really wrote a character that fits the plot of Avatar, something that even our dear Cornbringer failed to do. Don't be scared by the low rating so I noticed that there are a lot of trolls giving negative ratings without really having an apparent reason.

enforcingkn1240
enforcingkn1240Lv2enforcingkn1240

Story is great, its written well, and updates consistently so far. Story is great, its written well, and updates consistently so far.

FourEyesKiller_1
FourEyesKiller_1Lv1FourEyesKiller_1

Good😊

FadeKnight
FadeKnightLv2FadeKnight

This is very good. I don’t know why it is rated so low. Here is a glowing review to keep you going.

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

good start so far. excited to see more chapters ... good start so far. excited to see more chapters ...good start so far. excited to see more chapters ...good start so far. excited to see more chapters ...

covestar
covestarLv14covestar

Better than the new book.. this one has lots of character, plot development, easy to follow and the sense of a plot goal..

ANANTA
ANANTALv4ANANTA

Why give 5☆? Well, coz the story is interesting & fun to read a good story. If i write sth else it would be a spoiler. Hence, i don't write it. Pray that AUTHOR will complete the story with gracefullness. Will give a proper review after the completion of fic.

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1GodOfLight

I'm too lazy to write anything, so I'll only write what I advise you not to read if you are not an ardent fan of the avatar and you can try to read if you really love the avatar

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