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An Elf in Harry Potter

Auteur: ghoul
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"In this world any living can and will Cultivate. From plants like the sunflower that Cultivate to become independent and produce their own sunlight. Or the howling wolves that Cultivate by absorbing the surrounding Qi at the full-moon. Even bacteria can Cultivate! By targeting enough hosts they gain a myriad of abilities, the ability to corrode the ground, to contamine the rivers, and even acquire a proto-conscience. On this kind of world humans remain at the peak, they're natural inventors that are inspired by their surrounds, they adapt, Cultivate and develop more Cultivation techniques through the ages. Many generations of Cultivation after, the first Immortals appear. An Immortal is they who possess a world under their control, a world with it's own laws and logic. Every Immortal has a 'Core Law', a power that sustains their world, their aperture. This 'Core Law', grants them a unique ability exclusive to them, to manipulate their surrounds as they see fit. An Immortal acquired the power to change the state of matter, he could swim on the air, drink fire and could evaporate souls. Another Immortal acquired the power to steal time, with it he managed to steal the lifespan of others to increase his own, freeze his opponents in time by stealing their future actions before they occur. Yet another Immortal acquired an even more exceptional power which allowed him to literally turn the world upside down. He turned the skies into the ground and the ground into the skies, the clouds began to fall and the mountains began to float. The ability and reach of his ability extended to a whole continent, this continent biomass, surface and shape were permanently modified by his actions. Such abilities are nothing in comparison to what I have acquired. A SYSTEM!!! This ultimate cheat will naturally allow me to be the strongest Cultivator that has ever existed. System, show me your functions." [One Step Back, Two Steps Forward System. "To gain anything you must lose something, to reacher further heights you must learn how to sacrifice everything you have worked for." (Do You want to sacrifice your current Cultivation to gain 2500 OSBTSF Points? Y/ N.)] "What? Is that really the only way to gain points!" ["Of course not, User. To gain more points you can also sacrifice your muscle mass, lifespan, memories, knowledge, soul foundation, brain cells or a Bloodline Ability."] ... "What do you offer exactly on exchange of my Cultivation?" ["Currently you have unlocked two functions, one you can use your points to Derive new skills based on the ones you currently know, second you can go to the store to purchase a myriad of skills." (Current Top-Skill: Minor-All-Skills-Improvement; Lv1. Cost: 1000 points. Description: This skill will permanently increase your intelligence, physical strength, quality of Qi, aptitude and Soul Foundation permanently regardless of your Cultivation Realm by 2%.) "..."

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The storyline is great along with the plot but the grammar and punctuation is pretty bad. The storyline and plot support each other and you are not being confusing but the grammar and punctuation make the story hard to understand as it mess’ with how easy it is to read. I would proof read a couple of times to make sure it is ok and flows nicely

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