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  • #ACTION#ADVENTURE#SYSTEM#COMEDY#MAGIC#WEAKTOSTRONG#CULTIVATION#TRANSMIGRATION#EVOLUTION#UNDEAD

    Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?

    [WPC #224 Silver Price Winner: Undead and inmortal] Hello little soul. Were you murdered? Hit by a truck? Did you commit suicide or just slip in the bathtub? Well, the point is, you're dead. But don't worry about that, because this is not the end. Welcome to A.T.I.R. At A.T.I.R. we make sure that qualified souls who deserve a second chance are sent to other worlds to live a new life! Although it should be noted that not everything is free. It is likely that after your reincarnation, you will have to fulfill a certain purpose. But nothing too serious, so don't worry! Now enjoy your new life! WARNING: The journey between dimensions can cause the acquisition of superpowers, loss of senses (blindness, deafness, loss of touch, etc...), baldness, short-term memory loss, loss of organs, and body malformations. The agency is not responsible for the place or world where you will be reincarnated, if your species changes or if you suffer a problem during the trip. Any inconvenience you may have, please notify the complaints department (they will probably ignore it). Thank you for choosing A.T.I.R., have a happy life! "That doesn't sound very good..." Follows the story of Marcus, a simple guy who was reborn in a skeleton and despite all the misfortunes, somehow he is still "alive". Fighting monsters, demons, humans, ridiculous situations, and existential crises. Marcus will embark on an adventure to get his freedom in this new life and find the reason why he was called to this world. But his decisions could alter the destiny of an entire universe. Starting from the bottom to reach the heavens. **** Sigh... Look this is my first novel so I honestly don't know how to write a good synopsis without making too many spoilers But trust me, the novel is much better than this synopsis. I would appreciate any kind of critique to help me improve as a writer and English is not my native language. So I apologize for any grammatical errors, I will try to fix them if you let me know. I will try to post a minimum of three chapters per week.The chapters are between 2000 to 3500 words. (The cover was made using A.I)

    Darksky_ll · Fantasía
    4.4

  • The Great Exotic Food Critique

    This is not a story about exotic foods. Nor does it try to tell an epic tale. This is a story about a ill-fated reporter whose luck shifted for worse, when he was transferred from lifestyle department to foreign affairs department. CoverPage credits goes to ArkaneStudios(Prey)... I don't own the rights to this cover and will remove it instantly if the artist wishes so.

    UnhingedTaboo · Ciencia y ficción
    Sin suficientes valoraciones
  • #ACTION#ADVENTURE

    Critique of Web Novels

    After reading many webnovels, it became apparent to me that there was an urgent need for a definitive discourse on the judgment of webnovels. I have observed far too much degeneracy and baseless opinions voiced by flat-headed, insipid, nauseating, illiterate charlatans over the internet. Beyond my desire to counteract negative influences, this book will serve as the review guide to any web novel reader. It is my complete intention to derive the principles and judgments in this book from the ground up, so that any sensible being will be obligated to believe in it, or otherwise be deemed foolish.

    Dikastis · Militar
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  • #REINCARNATION#R18#SYSTEM#COMEDY#WEAKTOSTRONG#CULTIVATION#TRANSMIGRATION#YURI#ECCHI

    Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!

    Everything was going well for him: a well-earning job, a car, a home, but then he was tossed into a world of immortals, in the body of Jade Beauty of all things! ------- Hello, there. I'd written this novel a while back and only recently picked it up again, and decided to post it. I write mostly for fun, so uh... I can guarantee no update consistency. I will try to post 3 to 4 chapters a week, but again, I can't guarantee anything. PS: This is a Gender Bender work. If you dislike that, this is not for you; just don't give it a bad rating/review for that. However, Gender Bender does not have much relevance to the story. This was an idea I had a long time ago when I'd read the first Transmigrated-into-Villain/Young Master story. That's when I wondered what if it was written from the perspective of the Jade Beauty instead? So, I came up with the idea of some guy transmigration into the body of one. But at the time, I despised the 'conflict' that came with the category, so I kinda skipped the entire thing. So don't expect gender identity issues from this story - even if there are, it will be resolved in a few chapters at most. This is primarily a Progression Fantasy/Power Fantasy from a Jade Beauty's perspective. Though, you can also think of it as an amateur author's way of escaping his responsibilities and not studying the female psyche deeply. Like I said - I write for fun. PPS: I don't have much writing experience and I do want to improve, so your critiques are welcome. Just don't be too harsh - my glass heart might just break. PPPS: MC will be extremely strong in her Cultivation Stage - and the strongest later on, but that doesn't mean much in the Cultivation World, where there is always a 'Heaven beyond the Heavens'. PPPPS: This is still a WIP. I have the general plot idea in mind, but nothing concrete. Plus, I haven't made the mechanics of this world as concrete as I would like. So, I might make minor changes here and there. If I do make such changes, I'll do it retroactively across all relevant chapters. So, early readers might get a little confused, and I apologise for that. Of course, I'll post a note when I do make changes. PPPPPS: This story will take a while to pick up. So don't expect MC to have tremendous odds stacked against her from the very beginning. In fact, this will be more slice-of-life at the beginning.

    DaoistDumbledore · Fantasía
    4.6
  • #R18#SYSTEM#HAREM#TRANSMIGRATION#VILLAIN

    Ancient Hypnosis

    A person gets transmigrated to ancient china as the current crown prince with a world conquest system which gives him some abilities which he uses for more than just world conquest. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ this is a novel focused on smut which i have never written so i want to try it. I am a total amateur in this area so some critique would be helpful. Contains: hypnosis/mind control, Yandere( A lot but will like be more the submissive type). a little netori but NO NTR and will also contain underage sex till even 12 or something like that so if that disgusts you pls don't read this. Also Incest also if there are some pictures they are from pintrest and if their respective creator doesn't want them here il put them away ------------------------------------------------------------------------- I just wanna say i respect woman and people and that this is just a novel with no disrespect to women

    Big_Fan_Of_Daoism · Fantasía
    4.6
  • #REINCARNATION#GENIUS#CEO#REBIRTH#BUSINESSWOMAN#SUPERSTAR#SHOWBIZ#RICHDAUGHTER

    Rebirth of a Hollywood Socialite.

    This is a translated Chinese novel. I am not the author, just translating for fun. Translator: Doyenro (Fan Translate) Author: Zhuang Jiang Alternative universe (AU) She can produce the most terrifying horror films and also create the most profitable commercial films; she can turn artistic films into commercial successes and turn commercial films into artistic achievements. Future critiques of Laila all say that she is synonymous with the Hollywood miracle, one of the greatest directors of all time. She even unintentionally becomes the most skilled photographer and strategist. However, she knows that all of this comes from her biggest secret, which is—she has been reborn! T/N: * The Female Lead(MC) is very patriotic to her old country, so it may be annoying to some people. * The English gets better from chapter 65, the chapters 1 - 65 will be edited soon. * The actors' or actresses' characters may be different from reality. It is just an alternate universal fictional novel. * Alternate History * Contact me if a novel of the same is officially translated so that I can stop. * Original Chinese novel completed.

    Doyenro · Ciudad
    4.7
  • #ACTION#ADVENTURE#REINCARNATION#SYSTEM#VIDEOGAME

    (Hiatus) I've Reincarnated With An OP Gacha System?!

    You know, my mother and father always told me to do good deeds, help others, and be an upstanding citizen. If I do those things, then I'll bring good Karma to myself, and life will reward me. That was a lie.. or was it? Reincarnation is tricky stuff, and now I have a whole lot of other things on my plate, and I'm pretty sure I can't eat most of them. Gods, demons, different races of different creeds, and a vast multiverse to explore, and it all began because someone sucked at driving. With my newfound body and System, I'll take on everything, while having fun at the same time of course! I've improved my writing a little, but by all means please let me know if you'd like something added. If you have any suggestions, tips, or anything else, then please critique me. If you're gonna leave a bad rating then at least tell me why please. A HUGE thanks to Commonnerfer and Mister_Immortal for inspiring me to write. It would mean a lot to me if you went ahead and at least tried their novels. I found them funny and well written. Drop a stone for them while you're at it! If you two are reading this, thank you for giving me a drive in this world. *I do not own nor claim to own any artwork on the cover unless this notice is not present. If you are the owner of an image I use and want me to take it down, please contact me as I will do so immediately.*

    KallenEmilia · Fantasía
    4.7
  • #ACTION#SYSTEM#ISEKAI#ANIME#NARUTO

    Naruto: Village hidden in the Ocean

    Noel dies and gets reincarnated in the world of Naruto with a system. He will create his own village as you guessed it from the name. --- No Harem, and I haven't decided on the romance part. --- And this won't be some multiverse travel kinda thing but he will start a new journey in a new fan fiction after I complete this. Hopefully. Discord:https://discord.com/invite/jZdfthff --- English is my second language, be kind. --- ** Hey guys so this is my first work which i will NOT be dropping no matter what cause i kinda want to practice to write my original. So feel free to critique. ** I dont know how to write a synopsis yet so you can ask me questions ill answer it. ***** I do not own anything except the OC 5 chapters/week

    Bullshitter · Acción
    4.9
  • #ACTION#ROMANCE#HAREM#MYSTERY#TRANSMIGRATION

    Becoming Professor Moriarty's Probability

    I fervently critiqued the development of a Sherlock Holmes-based mystery gal game. [Villain Maker: Fulfilling the probability of Professor Moriarty's appearance. Love-Hate relationship: Becoming 'that man' for Holmes. Lady of London: Completing one sham marriage with Watson. Freeze: Receiving a confession from Inspector Lestrade. Phantom Thief's Treasure: Getting kidnapped by the Phantom Thief Lupin. In doing so, become this twisted world's very probability. Best wishes, Mr. Isaac Adler.] I'm screwed. *** KarmaTL: And this is going to be another translation of a series that is simply SUPERB. I LIKE THIS SHIT, so you should like it too!! Anyways this is gonna be one more work that's going to blow your mind (maybe?), I mean it's good. Believe me. Also, this is Superbly and surely for those guys who're looking for the detective, smart, plan-planning thing. And, especially– Harem-Seekers who want genuine character developments and not brainless pokemon catching Ahh* Just read it. It's good. One of the best if not the best.

    Karma_shi · Fantasía
    Sin suficientes valoraciones
  • #ROMANCE#ADVENTURE#SYSTEM#WEAKTOSTRONG#HAREM#TRANSMIGRATION#TRAGEDY#ANTIHERO#KINGDOMBUILDING

    Celestial of the Wind

    Authors Note :) Heya author here, Im a newbie that's joined the world of art and I'm also open to new ideas. these few days I've been reading some novels from the app to get a gist of how things work and how I'm ready to start. another note : please comment your critiques in a gentle manner, my heart can't stand critique's Btw the synopsis will be short and the story is harem. Synopsis: Throughout our lives maybe we all went through that stage when we thought that "being a hero was everything". while some learned that the easy way some don't . being pushed to the brink of death was not for the weak. being betrayed by your comrades is a thing we all prey not to befall us..but what if ...what if one day such a day came.

    1_Eternal_ · Fantasía
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  • #ADVENTURE#REINCARNATION

    Incentive to Succeed

    An old, senile and lonely medical doctor dies in the ward of his own hospital. Unsatisfied with his "meager" accomplishments, he accepts Death's offer for a new start at life however random his chances are in a world where he is a scorned bastard of a resident Duke. "I will hold on to my memories. Memories of failure, I have no doubt will be a marvelous incentive to succeed in my new life. No matter what. I will succeed, one way or another." ***Chapters will be posted twice a week, every three days. I've made a discord server btw. You can pop in and out offering your critique or praises here;https://discord.gg/YbxrtrU ***** Need a freelance writer? https://www.fiverr.com/s2/88989fb0f2?utm_source=com.google.android.apps.docs_Mobile

    Tim_Saian · Fantasía
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  • #WEAKTOSTRONG#DARK#SURVIVAL#TRAGEDY#BL#FATEDLOVE#FORBIDDENLOVE#OMEGAVERSE#KIDNAP#TYRANT FALLS IN LOVE

    Waiting to Bloom (Offical)

    My mother's warning haunts me as I navigate a world where my existence as a dominant alpha is forbidden. Alphas and omegas were eradicated long ago, and now I must hide my true nature. I strive for a normal life and worry about the consequences of my actions. Despite these challenges, I am determined to protect my baby sister and provide her with a better future. However, my encounter with a vulnerable boy may lead me to take risks that could have dire consequences. I question whether this is love or lust and if it's worth it. …………………………………………….. WARNING!!!! This book has mention of drugs, R*pe, and Murder. Content may be inappropriate or uncomfortable for certain readers. Comments and opinions or critiques are very welcomed. This is only the second book I have ever written and the first book I have ever allowed to be read by the public. Thank you and I hope you enjoy -Medusa

    DaoistvkY45J · LGBT+
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  • #REINCARNATION#R18#DARK#TRANSMIGRATION#VILLAIN#CAMPUS#FASTPACED

    MALIGNANT UNION:Tale of a mobster and murderess' in a fantasy world.

    Step into the world of Maxwell De Venti, feared Mafia lord and his deadly wife Angelina De Venti, a notorious assassin and serial killer. As they awaken in a strange new realm vastly different from the earth they once knew. Do not own the art, credits to the owner. New author with no editor yet, I'll do my best. Reviews and critiques will be happily appreciated.

    Sofie_Vert01 · Fantasía
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  • #ACTION#REINCARNATION#SYSTEM#CULTIVATION

    Reborn as a Symbiote

    Synopsis Hi everyone, just to let everyone know that this will be a story mix of both Wuxia and LitRPG. There will be a system with point being use involve in the story but it will not be a CASH app where you can buy EVERYTHING in it. Please if you can critique, comment, review, and spare some time to read my novel. Thank you for giving my novel a chance. A child bless by birth, curse by destiny. The child, a little girl, trapped in her own body from a painful illness. The only child to a growing small clan Matriarch, father nowhere to be seen. The little girl Yao Zi, helpless and hoping for the future. A mysterious foreign entity, a symbiote, whose past haunts him. The symbiote, lost traveler, free from his prison. The only of his kind he ever seen, all alone in a foreign land to him. Cold and lost simbiote Shimmy, alone and seeking power for the past. The two meet in a most coincidental way. One who needed a cure, a miracle to live, the other needed someone, a path to rely on to live. Watch as two lives intertwines, revealing the little girl's future and the symbiote's past. See as how they face the world together, one who almost loss everything and the other who have lost everything. What choices will they make and what effect will it cause to other? (Picture is not mine) “I will also be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com” ^_^)>

    LazeePanda · Fantasía
    Sin suficientes valoraciones
  • #REINCARNATION#TRANSMIGRATION#KINGDOMBUILDING#CONQUER

    Now I am Alexander II of Russia

    A historical novel I decided to write to practice my English, so forgive any grammar or continuity errors, I welcome critiques and ideas for the development of the novel. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I was thrown into the wheel of reincarnation as a historical figure in the year 1818, at the beginning of the Victorian era. I, a simple university student, am now destined to live in a bygone era in a country I don't know much about. It is an opportunity to make a grand mark in history, as I find myself in the body of the newborn Alexandre Nikolaevich Romanov. The MC is manipulative and not a good person, he won't have a harem, he will only have one wife, but like his historical counterpart, this won't limit him much. I intend to write 18+ scenes, both sexual and somewhat gore, but there will be a warning beforehand. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I don't have the cover image, as it belongs to Jesse Smith.

    LuizDarui · Historia
    4.7
  • #ACTION#R18#SYSTEM#COMEDY#WEAKTOSTRONG#CULTIVATION#VILLAIN#ANTIHERO#KILLER#BLOODPUMPING

    Villain's World

    Welcome to Villain's World, where mercy is a forgotten language, and violence the currency of existence. Social status here is determined by one's Tier of Villainy. Though cutthroat and ruthless, Antagonia ran just fine… Until one day, portals to the Human World emerged. Hidden beneath a veil of justice and liberation, the Humans invaded their lands. Through hypocrisy and shady ploys, many Villains fell victim to these cunning Humans. The Demon Family, a once great Villain Clan, was amongst the victims. Daseos Demon, the fifth son and a child at the time, was left to fend for himself as his entire family fell to the hands of the humans. He was orphaned to the L.U.S.T Inn, a high-end brothel where the owner, Madame Allura and her courtesans became his family. This is the story of Daseos's relentless quest for revenge as he ascends the villain hierarchy. His aims are twofold: to exact vengeance for his fallen family and to safeguard Antagonia from the malevolent humans who feign justice while pillaging their lands. Join Daseos Demon as he confronts not just external adversaries, traitors but also the darker aspects of his own nature as he navigates the murky waters of a society where morals were but a joke. And of course, with the astounding death rates of this harsh environment, it only made sense that its people evolved to have turbo-charged primal urges, to survive, to destroy, to… lust. "A Villain’s World" offers a compelling narrative, filled with intricate characters, moral ambiguity, and a critique of the notions of good and evil. It is a story that uncovers the complex fabric of villainy, raising uncomfortable questions about justice, retribution, and the very nature of power.

    MrBtheNovelist · Fantasía
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  • #ROMANCE#ADVENTURE#HAREM#SLICEOFLIFE#DRAGON

    Dragon's Hope

    A young child bears the hope of the most ancient and powerful race to exist. Can he bring back what was lost? (This is my first go at something like this so feel free to leave any critique or criticism)

    Sangnz · Fantasía
    4.8
  • #ACTION#ROMANCE#ADVENTURE#COMEDY#MAGIC#WEAKTOSTRONG

    Samurai 2.0

    A young boy going by the of Raiden embarks on a quest to achieve his dreams of become a samurai and ending the danger of the corrupted spirits plaguing his world. with the help of a young female mechanic and a wise old man he plans to make his dreams a reality. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi thanks for reading! this is my first real novel and this idea has been in the works for a year now. I am slightly new to this though I have some experience. please leave critiques they will be greatly appreciated.

    KISENN_ · Acción
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  • #ACTION#ADVENTURE#MAGIC#OVERPOWERED#NONHUMAN

    FiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos

    Quite some time ago, in a world not so different from Earth, Hailing from the Chaos at the dawn of creation, a lone hatchling of legendary origins takes its first breath- or rather, multiple breaths at the same time. As it turns out, this hatchling is gifted with several heads. Never alone, this curious creature seeks to scour the deepest depths and highest peaks. ------ The world is an Ancient time period Earth, but includes many fantasy-like additions inspired by the mythologies of our Earth. As you can probably guess, the MC is a 5 headed Hydra, not exactly the Lernaean Hydra but in the same mythology nonetheless. Story starts during the reign of Titan King Kronos. As a side note, it won't only be Greek mythology but also others as the novel goes on. Take note: - No Romance! Hydra does not love. - Mc will be relatively OP, nothing over the top or ridiculous but certainly contains fast growth befitting of a higher being. - 1k or so words per chap. - MC is Chaotic neutral (obviously) - And lastly, no turning into a human. Those are lesser beings, they have only one head. - No little band of monster friends that the MC keeps around so they can stay weak, only grind for us. Leave a review of your thoughts, critique is appreciated. This is my first Novel so advice is welcome. Please share your thoughts. Reviews, comments and stones are greatly appreciated, and don't be afraid to point out things you personally don't like.

    FamiliarHydr · Fantasía
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  • #ADVENTURE#REINCARNATION#SYSTEM#WEAKTOSTRONG#TRANSMIGRATION#SURVIVAL#NONHUMAN#LEVELUP#EVOLUTION

    I Woke up as a Kobold!

    It's New Years Eve 2050, Marshal is just getting back from his holiday shift at work tired, alone, and missing out on the larger celebrations that happening through out the city. Too tired to even bust out an old game to play, he just lays in bed and closes his eyes. When the clock finally ticks down to midnight, He receives a weird dream that's just like an old videogame prompt: 'Your world is going to be destroyed in 5 minutes, reincarnate now? Y/N' Of course, thinking it's just a dream based on his nerdy hobbies, he proceeds to pick yes. 'Randomly selecting Race. Enjoy your new life in Esmerda.' His dream suddenly went black till suddenly gleaming cracks of light formed above him. As they gave way, he is greeted by a weird lizard-rat thing with a long wispy mustache. "Happy hatchin' day youngin, yer a Kolbold!" And thus his world changed to something a bit weird. *The art is not Mine, but I do plan to fix that in the near future. Lets have fun and don't be afraid to give an honest critique.

    ThatTechLich · Fantasía
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